Fire starter: Deth to jai-z

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  1. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    2 Rounds.24 bars,first drop by Jai Thursday and 2nd round commences Friday or Monday,depending on her PC availability.What order do you want? You cool with these categories to vote on:

    Punchlines
    Flips
    Personals
    Wordplay
    Metas
    Simile
    Vocab
    Humor
    Attitude
    Creativity
    Opener
    Closer
    Sound Manipulation (defined as:"A crucial and oftentimes overlooked category of lyricism,"sound manipulation" deals with the literal combination of word usage and rhyme scheme to produce,repeat and/or emphasize specific sounds as an indication of refined skill.")
    Visual



    People who don't know what these categories are,either ask GOOGLE or vote as best as you can anyway.Votes can be challenged by the lyricists,and all votes must be explained.The more categories in your verse,the BETTER your verse is and more props power and points the judges should give.The judges who AREN'T challenged determine if the challenge by a lyricist has merit to overturn/modify the challenged judge's decision,and the bank of judges must collectively explain their reasoning.No lyricist may challenge any more than 3 categories of any 1 judge's decision,so no judge can have his/her vote entirely voided purely on the basis of a challenge,but the vote CAN be reversed or eliminated altogether (at the discretion of the panel of judges or if J O O K doesn't like your mother).

    Or J O O K can come in and tell you to suck scrotum and determine that a particular lyricist's surliness cost him the battle for pure disrespect and gettin too hung up on this net battle game.

    Look yall let's be thorough,have fun,be mature,and get doper together as we battle.

    You good with these rules,Jai? You got anything to add? What battle order do you want?
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  2. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    I cant get to a comp 2day but we can do it 2morrow. Im not use to ths back and forth shit. Usually we do 1 vrs a battle, bcz most ppl dont wanna read excessive vrsez. Yamean? Thatz y I said I could hit u up wth a 24 2morrow. Im not ata comp 2day and can only get to 1 2morrow. Cool? Leave that back and forth stuff for cypherz.
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  3. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    I did a background check on this nigga, and couldnt really find much
    til this chef told me his battle preference, was him doing alot of duckz
    See all you do is bluff, I did my research, youre prone to gettng rattled
    cz whn your life got Hecktic? He was 2-11 and you lost that battle
    I heard you was sick, til I read your shit and thought, damn what a retard
    you got more "I'llz" n your chain of linez than every actual Walmart
    Dont start, I'll finish you, before you evn think, blink, or breathe 1st
    your mom brought Deth to life, but Ima bring you to the fuckng hearse
    You weird ass, Shaq-Fu playng, Jr Monk, Kung Pow idiot
    youre not a martial artist, youre a Rockette, all of your linez got heel kickz
    Heard you Tony Jaa'd some nigga, and I wanted to see what itz about
    witch attack you using? I'll pulla Dorothy, and drop your ass wtha round-house
    Your whole chest will explode, dont worry they'll b nothng left of you
    not evn chain smokerz'll b able to detect the snt of your residue
    Your better off writing love songz, that way youd get your point across
    bring an avalanch to ths battle, atleast we know your shit could nvr b hot
    If your cold hearted? I'll show you what I do for that
    fuck I need heat to spark it, I let the devil strike this match
    Gasoline? Fuck that, hell will raise me a sinner for ths
    my gunz will cross your eyez and dot your T lika crucifix
    Faggot ass bitch, your dojo skillz gay as fuck, you gv head to karate folkz
    whn Sensai sayz, "Hit Lap!", you break barrierz wth the back of your throat
    Deth before dishonor? Only n a paralled universe
    but you can catch Deth before Jai-Z, whn they mention who died 1st
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  4. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Yep I'll cop to that. I responded energetically and maybe I shouldn't've done so.

    Jai-Z,just saw your drop.I'll key up a response for you when I get home.


    Okay here's a quick key for ya....

    Oh OPS EDs are in newspapers they're the OPinion of the EDitor...


    I GOT 99 PROBLEMS but YOU AIN'T ONE! I got THE BLUEPRINT tuh ETHER YOU!!
    Rude prints defeat cha crew eatcha chew ya facial features through like hateful creatures do
    Beleaguer you with sleeker spew! Ya weak spits is slaughtered fast
    I top my craft! My LETTERS PACK UNLIMITED POWER like JESUS' AUTOGRAPH!
    I'll SPEAK THIS like SAWED OFF BLASTS n leave you STIFF N STRETCHED WHEN
    I twist ya neck n hitcha with The Fist of Legend grip the weapon spit the Tek n
    DEVIL EYE BEAM FRY YOU like some shit from TEKKEN every FRICKIN SECOND!!
    I'm sick as heck n slit tuh sections ya wig n chest n rip ya best hymns!!
    Trick I'm feral n my carolin's arrowin ya bone marrow n I'm known thorough n
    You're imperiled n I'm HELLA DOPE like SATAN'S OWN HEROIN!!





    I'm a Rockette with heel kicks? I'll getcha knot wrecked with heel kicks
    My Glock Teks n steel clips gitcha THOUGHTS READ//RED like OP EDS n spilled quick
    Jai-z's a hott head? For real kid? She's wakk enough tuh say I'm KUNG POW
    You're a daughter but you'll get SONNED NOW.when my tongue growls best RUN NOW
    Or get spun round Kung Lao'd slung down gun pow'd n thumped out
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  5. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    My style lack a lot of shit, so Ima upgrade from my head to chuckz
    punchlinez wear on me like invisible cloakz, no1 seez me gettng fucked up
    Hood drapped over my fitted, eyez lower thana depressed self-asteem
    but Ill take this head shot and your Face Off like every Hockey team
    Fuck your rhyme scheme and flow, you blow and it wont help you win
    both of your versez lack punchlinez, and readng it feelz lika pretzle convention
    Listen man, the lesson plan is difficult, and it wont b repeated
    now they'll b a couple spit-ballz, but only bcz you sucked at eatng it
    Thngz'll nvr change, close range or far away, the heatz steady seekng
    if your light yrz ahead of time? I'll snipe you after hearng the alien beacon
    You heathen, if therez no sleepng? You gota go hard while awake
    I mean going ham on your verse wont wrk, the voterz are an Islamic race
    Your rhyme scheme and flow is unmatched, so let me find you a suitor
    I know your typez rough, my flowz too nice, but ths punch is a bruiser
    Whn I put my all nto these hitz, your body'll more than jst levitate
    your old ass couldnt serve me at The Last Supper, If I was a dinner plate
    I dont evn wanna finish ths, Im bored, but I guess I'll stick it out
    your verse got highlightz? Oh, mustve clicked and dragged my mouse
    How the fuck you beatng me? Jeet Kune Do aint writing your rapz
    Brandon Lee me, I'll take these 2 shotz I got and turn you nto a fun fact
    You aint wack? Shiiiit, I beg to differ.. and I can prove it
    I'll Dodge every powerline you got, lika vehicle n movemnt
    You thnk your out of ths world wth spitz? You aint seen shit fam
    if youra Dethstar movng n on my circle of fire? Ths battlez a pentagram
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  6. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    PADAWON: someone training to be a Jedi-Knight

    SAMSON/SAMPSON: Biblical strong man who killed a army with his fists,feet and using the "jaw of an ass" (which is a mule or donkey) as his only non-bodily weapon

    INSHALLAH: Arabic for "God willing/the will of God/If God wishes".In this case it's a really clever and funny addend to Jai-Z mistakenly calling the ISLAMIC RELIGION a "ISLAMIC RACE" like that idiot George Dubya Bush did.

    STACK OF MOLT: "Molt" is shorthand for "molten rock"

    THAUMATURGIC CIRCLE: A magic circle which has numerous forms including circles more powerful than pentagrams

    PENTA GRAM: Boooooo on you if you don't know this

    "PAY TO DODGE/GM WENT BANKRUPT": GM=General Motors.They make Dodge,and they went bankrupt because nobody was buying American cars









    Ya facts are wrong,Padawon! ISLAM is a FAITH NOT A RACE ya witless braud!
    The fists I drop makes ya lid jiss pop til you're shiscabobbed INSHALLAH!!
    My SENTENCE RAW! Jabs BEND YA CRAW,UPEND YA MAW for tryin to harm me!
    Rip ya talkin APPENDAGE OFF like a RAPPIN SAMPSON n USE YA JAW TUH MURDER ARMIES!!
    MERK YA MARK FREES n make ya NOGGIN LURCH from ROCKET BURSTS when I'm HOCKIN BLURBS
    You're RIGHT Jai-Z! I DON'T GOT HIGHLIGHTS! HIGHLIGHTS got BRIGHT LIGHTS cuz it GOT MY VERSE!!
    Now you CAUGHT UH HEARSE after my SLANG BANGS YA BRAIN til you LOSE YA I.D. like I ROBBED YA PURSE
    It's like a GRENADE WENT OFF when I LOBBED MY BLURTS n OFFED THIS SKIRT with a VENGEANCE,MAN
    My growls uh work ya verbals plus my THAUMATURGIC CIRCLE merks yo PENTAGRAM
    My HYMNS ARE JAMMED with MEGATONS OF DOPE...you just a PENTA GRAM
    These TENS UH BLAM n ya MEN UH SCRAM while Jai-Z gets shanked up n banked up (punched and stomped sleep)
    When I SPRAY THIS ROD you'll find it DON'T PAY TUH "DODGE"...cuz GM WENT BANKRUPT!!
    So this is ya LAST SUPPER you WAKK FUCKER! Ya raps is minor n ya schemes is thru!
    I WON'T SERVE YOU LIKE A DINNER PLATE cuz you're an APPETIZER like FINGER FOOD
    I'll spit a rhyme that OWNS YOU like I yanked ya fitted down over ya eyes n DOMED YOU
    I"m in a ZONE DUKE n PRONE TO "switch it up n git fly" like CLARK KENT IN A PHONE BOOTH
    I'm KNOWN TO grab the mic n make it spark like the CHROME DO;it's the STONE TRUTH
    I'll CATAPULT a STACK OF MOLT at this HALF ADULT! It ain't a SACK OF DOPE when I STONE YOUTH
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  7. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    jai-z best lines :

    I heard you was sick, til I read your shit and thought, damn what a retard
    you got more "I'llz"(aisle) n your chain of linez than every actual Walmart


    ^dope, because he do say i'll alot


    Dont start, I'll finish you, before you evn think, blink, or breathe 1st
    your mom brought Deth to life, but Ima bring you to the fuckng hearse


    nice play on his name

    Faggot ass bitch, your dojo skillz gay as fuck, you gv head to karate folkz
    whn Sensai sayz, "Hit Lap!", you break barrierz wth the back of your throat


    that shit was funny

    Whn I put my all nto these hitz, your body'll more than jst levitate
    your old ass couldnt serve me at The Last Supper, If I was a dinner plate


    good shit

    How the fuck you beatng me? Jeet Kune Do aint writing your rapz
    Brandon Lee me, I'll take these 2 shotz I got and turn you nto a fun fact
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  8. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    deth's best lines:

    Beleaguer you with sleeker spew! Ya weak spits is slaughtered fast
    I top my craft! My LETTERS PACK UNLIMITED POWER like JESUS' AUTOGRAPH!


    not a bad line...seemed forced but it was a good one

    I'll SPEAK THIS like SAWED OFF BLASTS n leave you STIFF N STRETCHED WHEN
    I twist ya neck n hitcha with The Fist of Legend grip the weapon spit the Tek n
    DEVIL EYE BEAM FRY YOU like some shit from TEKKEN every FRICKIN SECOND!!


    nice shit, punchline was drawn out...but that tekken shit was cool


    You're a daughter but you'll get SONNED NOW.when my tongue growls best RUN NOW
    Or get spun round Kung Lao'd slung down gun pow'd n thumped out


    prolly the best line of both rounds u did deth

    Ya facts are wrong,Padawon! ISLAM is a FAITH NOT A RACE ya witless braud!
    The fists I drop makes ya lid jiss pop til you're shiscabobbed INSHALLAH!!


    this was ok, but u explaining the shit prior took the power out of that line

    Now you CAUGHT UH HEARSE after my SLANG BANGS YA BRAIN til you LOSE YA I.D. like I ROBBED YA PURSE

    not too bad right here..

    i'll spit a rhyme that OWNS YOU like I yanked ya fitted down over ya eyes n DOMED YOU
    I"m in a ZONE DUKE n PRONE TO "switch it up n git fly" like CLARK KENT IN A PHONE BOOTH


    this was good, but the "zone duke" shit kinda over did that rhyme scheme. still a good line tho

    I'll CATAPULT a STACK OF MOLT at this HALF ADULT! It ain't a SACK OF DOPE when I STONE YOUTH

    not bad, sack of dope when i stone youth was a nice closer, but you almost over did it with the catapult a stack of molt shit


    VOTE= deth, barely..

    but jai this was close and me personally i think a 8 bar round 3 should take place...


    jai you did your thing, you had some witty lines..you weren't over doin any schemes and you kept it simple and straight to the point. real good karate references.

    but deth had more harder hitting lines than you did.

    the reason i think a round 3 should take place is, i wanna see 1 round where deth doesn't explain his bars...thats like a handicap because if he didnt explain it wouldnt be as effective of a verse..if this was a live battle he woulda lost..
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  9. Gen The God

    Gen The God The Life or Death Poet

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    ^^^Yea exactly...but let me stop freepostin

    1-0 Deth uppin
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  10. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    First Round: Jai came direct with her punches and never really let up with the aggressiveness.

    I did a background check on this nigga, and couldnt really find much
    til this chef told me his battle preference, was him doing alot of duckz
    See all you do is bluff, I did my research, youre prone to gettng rattled
    cz whn your life got Hecktic? He was 2-11 and you lost that battle
    I heard you was sick, til I read your shit and thought, damn what a retard
    you got more "I'llz" n your chain of linez than every actual Walmart

    first bar seemed like a good personal, and the following like you definately did your homework although it doesn't do much for me, buuutt if he did lose to someone with arecord like that I guess it was a nice punch, the walmart line was a heavy hitter though, huge line in this battle


    Dont start, I'll finish you, before you evn think, blink, or breathe 1st
    your mom brought Deth to life, but Ima bring you to the fuckng hearse
    You weird ass, Shaq-Fu playng, Jr Monk, Kung Pow idiot
    youre not a martial artist, youre a Rockette, all of your linez got heel kickz
    Heard you Tony Jaa'd some nigga, and I wanted to see what itz about
    witch attack you using? I'll pulla Dorothy, and drop your ass wtha round-house

    first bar in this part was an ok nameplay, but i thought it hit
    heel kicks was cool, DETH does seem to have a lot of action lines like kick, punch or hit a mufucka, so good rebuttle in a way
    round house was nice, i had a similiar line against freeze, "hit you with such a devestating round house your home is circular now"

    the rest of your bars in THAT verse besides your closer didn't do much for me although they were attacking your opponent they didn't have that Umpf, overall solid first verse



    DETH


    I twist ya neck n hitcha with The Fist of Legend grip the weapon spit the Tek n
    DEVIL EYE BEAM FRY YOU like some shit from TEKKEN every FRICKIN SECOND!!

    Jai-z's a hott head? For real kid? She's wakk enough tuh say I'm KUNG POW
    You're a daughter but you'll get SONNED NOW.when my tongue growls best RUN NOW
    Or get spun round Kung Lao'd slung down gun pow'd n thumped out

    Tekken line was nice, i've been away from the tekken series for a bit now so the reference doesn't hit as hard as it would if i was a regular on that shit, your closer was real tight with the rhyme structure and was a nice way to end the verse, overall though...I think your verse was a dope display of lyrical ability, flow was on point and would translate well onto a real track, however in punchline department I think you lacked a bit so i will have to give the first round to Jai- Z


    SECOND ROUND


    Jai Z dropped another overall solid verse, she attacked DEth throughout, she a had a couple heavy hay makers like prestle convention and last supper, other than that all were ok punches

    DETH had once again the best multis ive seen in a long time, but the explanations that i read before his verse and with how much he fed offa Jai's shit I couldn't help but to feel like he was unoriginal while being original, the explanations took away from the overall feel of his verse and every line of his was a play off of Jai's second verse, that would make me give this round to Jai as well

    Overall

    Vote= Jai- Z
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  11. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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  12. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    ok.. incredible battle and Jai-Z is a formidable opponent..

    Jai-Z- you had some crucial punchlines and great setup stragedies .. i can't really say there was anything wrong with it. i will quote a few of my fav lines and score u in each category.. i just want to say, u had a lot of fresh material, and im jealous!!!

    youre prone to gettng rattled
    cz whn your life got Hecktic? He was 2-11 and you lost that battle
    (seemed personal, good punch)
    you got more "I'llz" n your chain of linez than every actual Walmart
    (took me a minute to realize u meant ailes haha clever)
    your verse got highlightz? Oh, mustve clicked and dragged my mouse
    (very creative)

    some of ur lines where forced tho

    if youra Dethstar movng n on my circle of fire? Ths battlez a pentagram

    Brandon Lee me, I'll take these 2 shotz I got and turn you nto a fun fact

    now they'll b a couple spit-ballz, but only bcz you sucked at eatng it
    (made me laugh tho)

    a few errors in delivery and punctuation swayed me from a few punches but im not discreditting your ability. it's just critique to determine a winner

    Punchlines-8.5
    Flips-3
    Personals-8.5
    Wordplay-8
    Metas-8
    Simile.........
    Vocab-7.5
    Humor-8
    Attitude-8
    Creativity-8.5
    Opener-sorta nice about the ducks..
    Closer-missed me on that deth star shit

    god damn this is a long process...


    Deth- you have a creastive ability to really use colorful rhyme scheme and word play ur rhyme patterns are extremly difficult and at times difficult for the reader to follow.
    i didn't mind one bit u explaining ur verse before hand with ur expose.. i feel that in text, it is appropriate. because in a live battle we have a crowd to help the listener decypher the punches.. it's hard to connect to an audience of retards and exposing it before hand is like covering ur bases i have no gripe about that.. and it helped me understand a bit more i appreciated that.

    I top my craft! My LETTERS PACK UNLIMITED POWER like JESUS' AUTOGRAPH!
    (HEEEAT!!!!)
    I'm sick as heck n slit tuh sections ya wig n chest n rip ya best hymns!!
    (is that word manipulation? great word play and rhyme scheme)
    You're a daughter but you'll get SONNED NOW
    (nice)
    The fists I drop makes ya lid jiss pop til you're shiscabobbed INSHALLAH!
    (first time ever i seen international reference hit so hard in a punchline)
    My growls uh work ya verbals plus my THAUMATURGIC CIRCLE merks yo PENTAGRAM
    ( i woulda looked this up in another window and figured this word out without the expose, but since he added that def before hand the punch really had an effect)
    When I SPRAY THIS ROD you'll find it DON'T PAY TUH "DODGE"...cuz GM WENT BANKRUPT!!
    (sickest punchline imo)
    I'll CATAPULT a STACK OF MOLT at this HALF ADULT! It ain't a SACK OF DOPE when I STONE YOUTH
    (fatality)

    VOTE- DETH

    close one.. deth had more crazy lines and rhyme scheme was outta this world his punches were hyped up due to that.

    jai-z should work on crowd control

    i know that sounds crazy but there is a means to control the readers thru energy and exciting lines and shit.. good job to both
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  13. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    i forgot one thing for deth's vote

    Punchlines=8.5
    Flips=9
    Personals=8
    Wordplay=9.5
    Metas=8.5
    Simile....
    Vocab=9
    Humor=8
    Attitude=8
    Creativity=8.5
    Opener=9
    Closer=9
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  14. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    jai'z for comparison

    Punchlines-8.5
    Flips-3
    Personals-8.5
    Wordplay-8
    Metas-8
    Simile.........
    Vocab-7.5
    Humor-8
    Attitude-8
    Creativity-8.5
    Opener-sorta nice about the ducks..
    Closer-missed me on that deth star shit
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  15. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Ill explain my vote tomorrow morning.

    But

    Vote - Deth.

    Again, explanations coming tomorrow.


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  16. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    two things before i vote

    first off, i cleaned this thread up. stop freeposting. that isnt what this forum is for. you want to do that, go to the emcee hookups or pm

    second, the new rule is you must post two voting links with your verses. i'll give you each until wednesday to vote on two battles and post the links in this thread or i will close this battle

    now for the voting

    first round:

    jai:

    See all you do is bluff, I did my research, youre prone to gettng rattled
    cz whn your life got Hecktic? He was 2-11 and you lost that battle

    Dont start, I'll finish you, before you evn think, blink, or breathe 1st
    your mom brought Deth to life, but Ima bring you to the fuckng hearse

    Faggot ass bitch, your dojo skillz gay as fuck, you gv head to karate folkz
    whn Sensai sayz, "Hit Lap!", you break barrierz wth the back of your throat

    the verse was pretty basic. lines were stretched as fuck, and the rhymes were pretty simple. but i was digging the punches i quoted

    deth:

    its obvious you've been watching grindtime/other battle leagues. that style doesnt work in text. this verse probably would have been dope on grindtime, but this isnt grindtime. you need to work on your style, completely. i like the constant multis but you need to work on your set ups and punches. this doesnt fit text at all, man.

    after the first round, i'd have to give this to jai. on to round 2

    jai:

    You heathen, if therez no sleepng? You gota go hard while awake
    I mean going ham on your verse wont wrk, the voterz are an Islamic race

    I dont evn wanna finish ths, Im bored, but I guess I'll stick it out
    your verse got highlightz? Oh, mustve clicked and dragged my mouse

    same as before. simple rhymes, but these two punches were nice. after reading his verse though, it really made me appreciate your style/structure.

    deth:

    bro, i seriously dont know what to say. again, none of your lines were worth quoting for me. im not trying to be an asshole in any way. you need to work on your structure. go with

    set up
    punchline
    set up
    punchline

    kind of structure. work on your punches, work on your style. read verses in the RBL and pick up on that. and drop the explaining your punches. before or after. you dont need to do that. if people dont get it, its just not a good line, or wasnt worded well

    i repeat, i'm not trying to be an asshole. to either of you. but this was a weak battle.

    vote- jai
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  17. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Uppin for votes...
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  18. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  19. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    This should be moved now****th 3-2.Good battle.Jai? You deserve a rematch.Hope to see you in the RBL...along with everyone who voted against me.LOLOL.
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