FIRE AND SWORD: Deth to 4rro9ant

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  1. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    And now to the judges...
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  2. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    500 looks and no votes yet? Aesthet1c, IAB, Jai, Prole, Coup, LungZZZ, etc etc etc where yall at?
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  3. Aesthet1c

    Aesthet1c The Morning Star

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    Good:

    -Nut, n git up like:"Gotcha covered! Where's 4rro9ant? Just follow the caw of buzzards!!"
    -They'll find your whole squad's nogs chopped under the block dumpster with twisted tops like Turkish knots
    -I said, you see Deth come n-u clear...NUCLEAR...When I diss a peer n detonate ya tryck free then devastate ya city!!

    (2nd Verse)

    -Is beyond salvation for even God's great miracles, n I ain't being satyrical
    -Battle Deth? Wrong, bro!! I'll wipe out what you wrote like your writin redacts you Then crush clowns with rough nouns like Titans of Wrath do
    -You're the atheist in this battle, cuz you ain't got no kinda prayer when I give you that cold blooded iguana glare.

    That's a scary ass look haha

    Deth, man. You gott watch the descriptions "Melt his bones tuh scavenged strips" melt and scavenged strips dont really correlate well..


    Good:

    -Yo, Stryque I'm still alive because I've already beaten Death
    -Naw phuk that, make Deth continuously eat rights He ducks that, gut punch him 'till he no longer eats right
    -Put up your dukes, so you can puke Alphabet Soup, further proving you'z a fluke
    -It's clear this porcupine has no spine, not a sharp enough guy

    (2nd Verse)

    -Dump Deth in a Siberian tundra, now time has you frozen
    -Heat removes your dentistry, place me in Golgo 13's league (lol anime)
    -Guess who pulled a bait and switch at the very last minute
    -I witnessed this clown come up short like a horny midget


    Overview:

    Deth, you came off with hard punches and a better read.
    4rro, your wordplay/creativity overpowered deth's and your own schemes haha

    V/4rro, he simply had better lyrics with creative punches.

    Sorry the vote isn't as big as usual.
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  4. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Good vote, Aesthet1c! 4rro is up, 1-0.
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  5. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Need more votes, folks. IAmBent, Coup d'etat, Resilient, Shadowwarriorfx, LungZzz, L u c y, Jason Anthony, Lyrical Priest, smittyrhythm, G Force, Sir Bustalot, Genthegod, Chase Murda, AtomicGo, patrown, zyclon b gas, demi-god, GalaTea, mizzoe, TheProle, Sir-E, BloodGang, Jai-z, Bar nigga, exodus31315, MCKusssshh and others...drop a vote when you can. Just copy and paste this right here:



    Opener--
    Flow--
    Word play--
    Name play--
    Rhyme scheme--
    Punches--
    Personals--
    Humor--
    Knowledge--
    Themes--
    Vocabulary--
    Flips (in 2 round battles)--
    Creativity--
    Structure (legibility)--
    Attitude--[ ferocity, focus, swag ]--
    Realness--
    Metaphors--
    Simile--
    Sound Manipulation--
    Originality--
    Enjoyability--
    Structure--
    Closer--



    and put down the lyricist who you thought won those categories^^^, a four line explanation. Boom. Done.
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  6. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    I appreciate all and any votes given. Enjoy the bars!!!
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  7. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Vote Deth, and Ima tell u why.

    Some ppl dont understand, u can not win a battle off of a boat load of filler. 4rrogant had nice flow, but he was all over the place and barely dissed Deth, and he did.. he wasnt vry good at it. Sometimez his wrd association was okay, other timez.. it was vry random.

    I dont quote linez, especially n long lengthy battlez like this too many linez to breakdwn or reread.. but Deth was solid and had some pretty good bangerz. He out punched and out executed his wrdplay better than 4rrogant.
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  8. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    I'm confused about the voting system here.
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  9. Aesthet1c

    Aesthet1c The Morning Star

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    We basically throw in our opinions, ending with Vote / 'name'
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  10. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    Not how it was told to me based on what was posted thus far, but as long as I get feedback that helps me progress my writing skills, it's all good.
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  11. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Actually, in RWZ rules battles, you're supposed to copy and paste the voting rubric that I have here. It's really easy. you should know what the categories are,and if you don't? page 1 has a full breakdown of each category and each definition.

    Just copy and paste. Put the name of the lyricist who won each category in your opinion. Leave 4 lines of feed afterward. Quote 2 bars from the winner, 2 bars from the loser to flesh out your point. There ya go. Literally under 5 minutes. But the RWZ guideline is comprehensive, so it gives SPECIFIC POINTERS to the writers AND IT MAKES THE VOTERS BE MORE THOROUGH, AND LEARN MORE WITH EACH VOTE. this makes them better voters AND better writers. They're able to distinguish between style preference [ they liked somebody's style better ] as opposed to CONTENT [ they liked one guy's style better, but the other guy had better substance..and yes "style" is part of the voting guideline. It's in the "swag" area ].


    The winner is the person with the best overall verse. This makes every competitor a better lyricist, a better judge, and gives them a concrete direction to take their writing and endeavors.
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  12. mizzOe.

    mizzOe. valiumaddict

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    Opener--
    Flow-- deth
    Word play-- deth
    Name play-- 4rro
    Rhyme scheme-- deth
    Punches-- deth
    Personals-- deth
    Humor-- eh didnt really laugh at any verses
    Knowledge-- wtf?
    Themes-- ...
    Vocabulary-- deth
    Flips (in 2 round battles)-- deth
    Creativity-- deth
    Structure (legibility)-- 4rro
    Attitude--[ ferocity, focus, swag ]-- gay
    Realness-- son its a text battle... lol
    Metaphors-- deth
    Simile-- tied, but deth edged
    Sound Manipulation--
    Originality--
    Enjoyability-- deth
    Closer--

    vote - deth

    p.s - long ass verses for a text battle... just sayin
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  13. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Thank you for your unique perspective and for using the RWZ voting guideline categories, man.You're the only one to do so thus far. Thank you, mizzoe. Terrific vote!

    2-1, Deth is up
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