Finesse- Animal Instinct [drop links]

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  1. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    ight the cassidy beat...I like how you flipped the hook, this is something to listen to when I'm high, off top I think you should work on pronouncing ya words a little better. You already know about the quality, so I won't touch on that area, swag is there, you got the cockyness going on...first verse was ok, second verse was better, flow improved etc. Overall like someone else said this sounds like a mixtape cut..I'm not really a fan of people rapping over other peoples beats anymore unless it's a battle nah mean, but you did ya thing. I'd like to hear you make an original song with a beat that nobody's heard to see how you work with that...keep elevating man... peace
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  2. Telling The Truth

    Telling The Truth DL My New CD

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    I dont really like the beat but you ride it well. If it was better quality I think that this shit would be a banger. The lyrics arent the best but your delivery kept my attention all the way through. The track could use some improvement but I still like it.

    Peace
    CP Sick
    test
  3. E_Spangler

    E_Spangler GHOstBuStaH

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    returnin the fav-

    lol, man, im on dialup and playin myspace shit cuts out every 5 secs, but ill do my best.....aight, beats pretty cool, feelin it....flow is nice, basic tho...lyrics are ok....delivery is pretty strate....the hook is aight...overall, this is a strate track...u got skillz man, just come more creative with the flow and lyrics....bring something unique to the table homey...keep spittin...peace
    -EGON
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  4. Verbatim

    Verbatim Mr Write

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    aight aight...boboy stance beat.....cool cooll..hook is ok...verse is cool...could be ennunciated better...and you should use a compressor cause your going in an out and you can tell when you move away from the mic...lyrics are cool...hook again its growing on me....yea goes in and out more the next verse too...flows pretty fluid though..delivery is cool...overall this is cool..only thing I would have to say anything about is the ennunciation....keep at it my dude..one
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  5. FinesseNYC

    FinesseNYC FinessetheGreat

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    good looks. more replies
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  6. Aziaddict

    Aziaddict New Member

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    Your shit is coo. I like the fact that the hook is catchy. and it is funny. your flows and delivery are one point. besides the quality, this joint is gettin me high as fuck. nah, i'm just playing. it's a good drop.

    peace and blessings.

    Aziaddict

    WWW.ARGMUSIC.COM
    test
  7. KaSe_MuNNy

    KaSe_MuNNy New Member

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    I feel you champ! A blunt in my hand, I'm high as fuck, I'm high as fuck! Strictly dutches homie!

    Get on your grind cuz you nice young..

    Brush them haters off, stay up.

    - Kase

    Oh yea, http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=915066

    when you get the chance, bump that Metro MusiK homie!
    test
  8. FinesseNYC

    FinesseNYC FinessetheGreat

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    word i got everybody here. uppin.
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  9. FinesseNYC

    FinesseNYC FinessetheGreat

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    no doubt yall
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  10. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    word of advice, stop doing that chea chea shit, it sounds horrible


    always hated this beat, but lets see


    u have a strong voice, but ur flow isnt fluid at all, it doesnt come out natural


    charisma is kinda lacking, u dont sound like your into your music, if it sounds like your bored yourself, what do u expect the listener to think

    thats what u need to work on


    ur lyrics aint bad, just work on that charisma


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=915924

    check that out when u got time, thanks in advance
    test
  11. Battlefields

    Battlefields Swaggin' On You

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    imam edit this

    FLipped hook well but you need to enunciate more

    Highs fuck sounds like what your tryna

    verses is aight

    second verse you were havin trouble riding i seems

    you got an ill voice if you use shit right

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=915877
    peep
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