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  1. BeEgEe

    BeEgEe El Warm Shot

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    selfish yet selfless, disposed with ease
    don't hold your breath, don't choke or breathe
    you'll be waiting for her, till the oceans freeze
    hopelessly..cursed.. since your extreme mistake
    feels like 10 years since you've seen her face
    what did you do for her to preach this hate?
    you didn't think her heart would leave this space
    damn/man.. her kisses had the sweetest taste
    retrieved from grace? a story not to be told again
    absent the passion, potentially your closest friend
    blinded by whatever, should have focused then..
    just another warm body you'll never hold again
    there's nothing even really to say, your too fake
    some life you got now, one night... two dates?
    fools play, you know when you lay down at night
    drifting/wishing...she still ain't found in your life
    like a ghost, you see simple visions of her face
    dwelling on all of the decisions you could change
    running down memories of kissing in the rain
    for what? shes just not missing you the same
    the little mysteries of pain, nothing for relief
    that feeling of your brain rushing you to sleep
    sure, poetry might give you something to believe
    but she won't see nothing touching in your speech​
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  2. anonyMISSme

    anonyMISSme New Member

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    Lol nice allie i wont consider it a blow nicely put
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  3. Mikaella Ocean

    Mikaella Ocean Well-Known Member

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    wow... that was really good Brian!
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  4. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    very nice... i love the flow but i think i love the heartfelt sentiment more... well done
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