Fall Topical Tourney:: awedishin \/ vember

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  1. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    verses due 11:59pm eastern Tuesday
    votes due 11:59am Saturday

    Rd 1 is open mic week, create your own open mic, it can be about anything, just make sure it's good enough to impress your voter

    ::line limit::

    20 bars min :: 40 bars max

    no more no less

    there will be no extensions, bitching, or bull shit tolerated

    if you want to win and think you can win, show up on time, follw the rules, and post a quotable verse

    good luck to everyone

    test
  2. Vember

    Vember New Member

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    hmm....it can be about anything, im better off with a given topic but anywayz....IN
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  3. Dikembe Mutombo

    Dikembe Mutombo New Member

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    Sleepless Nights


    Room completely dark - except for the orange tip,
    of the cigarette hanging from my lips that I just lit~
    contemplating another day's worth of pain and agony~
    sometimes I think my sensitivity only brings out the fag in me~
    take another drag cuz see - I've been here before, down the same path~
    my past is scattered with the wrath of life's harshest reality acts~
    fallicy and facts - they've all been scrambled within my brain~
    not insane, I'm just stained by everything that goes against the grain~
    in my veins the blood slows as my mind and body grow weak~
    and my pain - it does show in the bags right above my cheeks~
    And beneath my eyes - take a deep sigh and realize what lies ahead~
    another night I'll sit and cry and try to sleep in my bed~
    all alone - I've grown prone to lying side by side with my love~
    But my love has gone awry - I no longer have that glove~
    Bare hands - a bare man who cares and may try too hard~
    I stare and glance there - hoping to see through the dark~
    For inner peace I've embarked only to find myself stranded~
    I pray everynight to my Lord - going to him open handed~
    Begging for guidance - uplifting - the smallest sign of help~
    Lord knows I've seeked and I've searched - but can't find myself~
    I don't mind myself - Hell I'm only crazy if I answer my own questions~
    When I go to him I take nothing beyond my confessions~
    And this session is everynight - I lay restless til the light~
    of Day breaks - then I'm stuck in anticipation of another night~
    My plight goes on and on as my eyelids gain more weight~
    About to lose my job because I just can't stay awake~
    I have Faith - but it seems fate has taken control on a power trip~
    Lay awake and count mistakes - see how long an hour gets~
    a sour tip on my tongue - it's permanently left bitter~
    I've turned into a no one - I was once a go getter~
    But I don't suffer from insomnia - my disease is within my own torso~
    my heart and soul have gone broke so my emotions run forceful~
    Strong winds and gusts of grief keep me afloat above sleep~
    And I just can't let go of the boat because my love goes deep~
    I've grown meek, I hardly eat - just enough to stay alive~
    If I reach I know I can make it - for another day I will strive~
    But as I put out my last cigarette thinking how smoking will soon end my life~
    I lay here staring into the black and think - can I take another sleepless night?
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  4. Vember

    Vember New Member

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    just lettin every1 know i will show, im tired as fuck tho, so i dont know, dont really feel like doin it, but i'll put somethin together tonight n edit it in here, pz
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  5. HighPawTheCyst

    HighPawTheCyst New Member

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    ^boo at you, just post something
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  6. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    unseen can you close this please

    awedishin moves to round 2
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