Faithful Hearts

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  1. $eqra

    $eqra sometimes it hurts

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    Faithful hearts become one.
    In a time when there love is forbidden.
    A secret shared between the two.
    Her heart sinks into despair knowing that the decision she made will alter their life forever and she will never forgive herself for that.
    The choice he made that night has change there trust in each other.
    But yet the two still thrive with all they have been through neither is ready to give up on the secret.
    Midnight passions erupt between them.
    Heavy breathing and moving knowing that every day may be there last together.
    And yet their love still binds these hopeful hearts together.
    From friends to lovers they make the move into the future stepping out together.
    Holding hand in secret under the cover of darkness.
    Waiting for the moment they can reveal all to friends.
    And even then fear still strikes.
    Knowing that they will never be accepted.
    Her love for him is unending and she will not yield.
    His love for her unquestioned and no pretty maddens shall turn his head.
    And with all this joy and passion they have for each other it may never come to light. However even when true love becomes a memory she is content in living knowing that once he love her.
    He truly loved her for all she was.
    That is all she have and it has to be enough to carry her through to her death.
    At this time however every thing reminds her of why she loves him.
    It feels like the first time every time nothing has changed.
    And trust that her love will be everlasting and in her next life she won’t make the same mistakes she will chose him.
    test
  2. Lyme

    Lyme Guest

    very powerful left me feeling hopeless.. if this isnt fiction my dear, nothing should hold these two apart..

    1 love
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    yes powerful piece indeed. Very emotional, very true.

    one luv
    test
  4. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    damn...this spoke to me soooooooo much...**shakes off past memories**.....


    It feels like the first time every time nothing has changed.
    And trust that her love will be everlasting and in her next life she won’t make the same mistakes she will chose him.

    ^^loved that. thanks for writing this, it was lovely.
    test
  5. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    A very nice write. It picked up pace into quite a powerful and intriguing piece.

    Maybe off here and there. But it seemed to me it just let rip onto paper...raw...

    ..er...yeah..

    ..resp..
    test
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