-Fac3- vs Mrjdm

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Mrjdm998, Mar 9, 2011.

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  1. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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  2. Mrjdm998

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    Your title being "will punch stupid people" sets off alarms
    Because that must be a sign of some serious self harm
    You're the worst kind of texter in my mind
    With a face so ugly it'd turn a third eye blind
    My verse is neatly packaged leaving yours easily shattered
    Your styles like the last letter of your name, completely backwards
    I'm dividing your body to make additions to my trophey case
    The first dash in your name fits because I'm subtracting face
    You need to understand that in the RBL you ain't in demand
    Why do you have a return planned to you think you have fans?
    I refuse to lose to this chump I wasted bars on this cunt?
    I'm waiting for someone to run in and yell you've been punkd

    Erm...yeah, not amazing stuff but fuck it, i'm tired.
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  3. -Fac3-

    -Fac3- Will punch the shit out u

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    Thanks for the battle, I am a little rusty though

    This faggot loves pressure, but kid RM's already got ya figured
    cuz folks his handle ain't the first time he's been on top of a member
    and english cats havin bad dental hygiene..well thats known
    so to get past his flow..
    I dont have to be Jesus since his teeth appear to be steppin stones
    and gettin girls, well thats a part of his life that has a huge void
    cuz the only time this english muffin turns heads is when he flips a coin
    and you beatin me? shiiiit...that'll be the day..
    Lightning strikes twice in one place and jay manuel passes for straight
    Fuck you....mainly because I wanted a battle and got a waste of time
    Was going to drop your name but I wanted a serious verse with all jokes aside
    swoll ya eyes and myagi kick ya scripts right out the scene..
    im to tired to think of a closer...****us i already detatched ya spline..

    time for bed....tried to reply soon as i seen it so i keyd this up for it, be easy man
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  4. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Hm tough because I don't think this is the best rhyme from either rapper...

    Mrjdm has good flow and i like the play on the math words, pretty cool. My favorite line was about his style being backwards..

    Face, came out pretty aggressive, cool little flow to it, and the first line made me chuckle. Good stretch out on the lightning strikes idea, it's played out but you brought freshness with it using Jay Manuel..

    Vote - Fac3

    Peace
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  5. G Force

    G Force Member

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    This is a quick battle to judge with it being so brief.

    It is important to capture your audience with the opener and MRJ did precisely that. it wasn't an amzing opener but deffiantely decent. MRJ had some other OK lines, that 'backwards' line was OK. Fac3 had some good ideas with attacking personals on British jokes. Being British myself i've heard them all and you need to be more creative with them. Fac3 also had a couple decent aggresive lines in there but i just felt MRJ was slightly more direct so he takes it for me.

    VOTE = MRJDM998
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