Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Mrjdm998, Mar 9, 2011.
Your title being "will punch stupid people" sets off alarms
Because that must be a sign of some serious self harm
You're the worst kind of texter in my mind
With a face so ugly it'd turn a third eye blind
My verse is neatly packaged leaving yours easily shattered
Your styles like the last letter of your name, completely backwards
I'm dividing your body to make additions to my trophey case
The first dash in your name fits because I'm subtracting face
You need to understand that in the RBL you ain't in demand
Why do you have a return planned to you think you have fans?
I refuse to lose to this chump I wasted bars on this cunt?
I'm waiting for someone to run in and yell you've been punkd
Erm...yeah, not amazing stuff but fuck it, i'm tired.
Thanks for the battle, I am a little rusty though
This faggot loves pressure, but kid RM's already got ya figured
cuz folks his handle ain't the first time he's been on top of a member
and english cats havin bad dental hygiene..well thats known
so to get past his flow..
I dont have to be Jesus since his teeth appear to be steppin stones
and gettin girls, well thats a part of his life that has a huge void
cuz the only time this english muffin turns heads is when he flips a coin
and you beatin me? shiiiit...that'll be the day..
Lightning strikes twice in one place and jay manuel passes for straight
Fuck you....mainly because I wanted a battle and got a waste of time
Was going to drop your name but I wanted a serious verse with all jokes aside
swoll ya eyes and myagi kick ya scripts right out the scene..
im to tired to think of a closer...****us i already detatched ya spline..
time for bed....tried to reply soon as i seen it so i keyd this up for it, be easy man
Hm tough because I don't think this is the best rhyme from either rapper...
Mrjdm has good flow and i like the play on the math words, pretty cool. My favorite line was about his style being backwards..
Face, came out pretty aggressive, cool little flow to it, and the first line made me chuckle. Good stretch out on the lightning strikes idea, it's played out but you brought freshness with it using Jay Manuel..
Vote - Fac3
This is a quick battle to judge with it being so brief.
It is important to capture your audience with the opener and MRJ did precisely that. it wasn't an amzing opener but deffiantely decent. MRJ had some other OK lines, that 'backwards' line was OK. Fac3 had some good ideas with attacking personals on British jokes. Being British myself i've heard them all and you need to be more creative with them. Fac3 also had a couple decent aggresive lines in there but i just felt MRJ was slightly more direct so he takes it for me.
VOTE = MRJDM998
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