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  1. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    this piece goes with bonita applebum
    (should prbably listen to it while reading)
    almost same ryhme scheme so just dream becuase i cant place it on the wavestream

    .......for......
    heres my application for this occupation
    a proclamation for my word delegation
    vivid illistration for the pen embrassing
    long winded for the dreams im chasing
    tight surroundings for verb incasing
    soul for the foot pacing
    some flavor for your tasting
    thoughts for your imagination
    some time for your wasting
    elevation for the skyscraping
    i lay text for my and your sentation
    a feel for your temptation
    and mad air for the ventalation
    a camp for your positive concentration
    a few ideas for your implications
    arrival for my destination
    destiny for my designation
    phrases to repeat for a inchantation
    a few cuts for the abrasions
    some space for a invasion
    pronuciation for what im saying
    reflection for the image im displaying
    a passport is the reason for why im delaying
    off the tupay for this beat thats playing
    silence for those not convaying
    rapmusic for those just gazing
    stay tuNed for ipoet without refrazhing
    ohhhhh for what need more lines with lowercasing
    lyme got some of that forbidden fruit for my tasting?
    so peace for i have no other verbaliztion
    test
  2. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    some one else make a part two
    only if you can dig the format
    test
  3. Lyme

    Lyme Guest

    oh wow.. look what you've gone and done.. I'd love to do a continuation but cant compete with your heat.. at this time..

    :)
    test
  4. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Best piece that I've seen you do, mos def. I'm digging the rhyme scheme to create a point, I thought this was something that NEEDS to be continued and I'm sure someone will (Soultan, probably). Anyway, strong choice of words, strong point, etc. All in all, it was a great, extravagent piece of work. Keep the thoughts gaining, family. My blessings..
    test
  5. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    man irts been forever since i heard thst song - nice
    test
  6. Lyme

    Lyme Guest

    thats his dogs name too [vn2]
    test
  7. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    wow...love your work

    the rhymin in this was so dope......

    might come at u with a part II

    would be a good challenge for me

    up
    test
  8. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    glad to see you all liked it
    ipoet hit me up with part to
    and ill re post it
    test
  9. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    need some pencils or paper or something
    van damn
    thought there where some writters in here guess ill have to do it
    !!!!!!wack!!!!!!
    test
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