Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by DZK, Aug 19, 2006.
lol werd, thnx for the feed
shits dope man, i can def dig it... flow and deliv. are nice...beats straight... lyrics are dope.. some real shit... nice track homie..get at me
Likin the track man, dope flow n delievery. Lyrics were nice too. Stay at it.
this is dopppe... coool concept.
Beat is tight.
Lyrics are nice, good mulltiEEES
Hook sounds good.
I like the ideas you had here... explaining the lawwws flawwws lol
without just saying FUCK DA POLICE!
Nice track [teet]
damn this shit was ill.. the flow was nasty in the whole song, but it was fuckin insane at the end of the 3rd verse, good shit.. good topic, good lyrics, good delivery.. this was the first time i peeped you, and im impressed man, solid drop
could you peep my track.. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13949470#post13949470
You know I'm a sucker for these typa beats. Flow in this hot, u got some emotion in it...sounds good. Def should be re-recorded for a mixtape cut. I dont know why kids didnt like the hook, sounds dope to me. the soundcard is sounding good, still just a bit thin. UPPPS
thnx for the feed yall
Real surprised at how topical you were on this track but not at all surprised by the subject matter, flow, or delivery. I always like it when you weave your life into the track. Therapy on wax. Another track by F.a.T.!!
I don't think I can play this at the office though (since I'm in the same building as the police academy!) I already downloaded it. Good luck with the soundcard.
your flow is ob-nock-ous.
energy is crazy....
hook is hot....
flow is really shining....take away my rights imma take em right back.
you ever wanna collab get at me on myspace....
no doubt preciate the feed
damn son , someone got a grudge? , I was willin to let shit go , then you gotta go and run ya mouth , SO UNLESS YOURE GONNA ACTUALLY STEP UP OR SOME SHIT
STEP DOWN , and remain the maggot you are , 30 years old on rapmusic.com hahahahah jokes on you fatboy ,
O and damn DZ it must suck knowin Fat sounds better then you these days hahahahahahahah apprentice got the master lookin sorry hahahahahah
look whose fuckin talkin.... GIVE IT UP YOU FUCKING SUCKKKK NO1 LIKES UR SHIT U BEG PEOPLE TO LISTEN N STILL NOBODY LIKES UR FUCKIN GARBAGE.. MAYBE THOSE LITTLE FAGGOTS WHO LISTEN TO NELLY MIGHT LIKE IT BUT ANYBODY WITH A REAL TASTE IN MUSIC LAUGHS AT UR SHITTY FUCKIN SONGS AN LISTENS TO DZK AND FAT AND ya so... just go shooot urself in the fuckin face allready fag.
tight shit mang.
"..I"M SO GOD DAMN SICK OF IT, LEAVE ME ALONE, stop following me pig
I LEFT MY WEED AT HOME.."
nothing to critique.. good shit.. I'll burn it. lol
return the favor ..
beat is nice
poilice beating my people
fuck the law
gov suck my dick
RETURN THE FEED
some realistic shit right here
i like this
good shyt fam.....flow is real nice, but original at the same time....
like....theres cats that ride the beat real well...and then theres cats that create their own flow.....
and thats a reaaal intangible concept to grasp/actually do......props on that
multis is sickening as always.......but yeh u did sound kinda hoarse.....
lyrics are written well........u have a nice conversational flow in all your songs, and the only person that comes close to u in actually speaking to your audience, instead of just sayin random punches/lines and shit....is eminem.....
good shit......return the favor...since they aint gonna give me any feed at all if they dont know about me.......ignoin my shit even tho ill rip em all........even WITH bad quality
Real Talk.............McSpyDee just needs to hop off DZ's dick right quick..
KamikazeLyricist >>> DZK
thnx for the feed, preciate it
mixtape droppin soon my ass...
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