F.a.T - Killin you softly (freeverse)

rofl
yeah, he's a real porker


/sarcasm off

im feelin the simplicity of the beat, it focuses more on the lines, i disagree with the eminem comparison, i think if anything you sound like royce. I dig the style you got some clever lines in there, i would name a particular one but theyre all equally dope. my favorites were probably "meat-cleaver with teeth/bleed on the sink/cheetah with cleats" multi. keep doin the damn thing, i listened to some more of your shit, you seem to have quite the extensive collection happenin and you seem to be really consistent so i respect that.

if youve got time to:
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=993910

well lets see. beat is dumb, but u already knew that...lyrics are dope, but obviously prewritten and practiced. you DID sound like eminem. Not with what ur saying, but How your sayin it. Its not like eturnal has room to say Anything though. i sound negative, but dont mean it that way. just bein honest. overall it was pretty impressive though man...now if you could just develop YOUR OWN sound u would be str8. 1

lol you talk like thats bad... it's a freeverse not a freestyle

holler

hahaha yah... who doesant prewrite the lyrics before recording a verse???

and there was no practicing involved other than the writing process... this sounds like shit to me

nice ish

im recording my part for this on saturday in the stuuuudio [teet]

lovely
unfortunately i hate u andrew
u stopped answering my myspace messages
wait
i could never hate dzk
keep up the good work fellas
dont 4get the small guys

peace

-whiteout