F.a.T - Killin you softly (freeverse)

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  1. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    rofl
    yeah, he's a real porker


    /sarcasm off
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  2. Hellboundmusic

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    im feelin the simplicity of the beat, it focuses more on the lines, i disagree with the eminem comparison, i think if anything you sound like royce. I dig the style you got some clever lines in there, i would name a particular one but theyre all equally dope. my favorites were probably "meat-cleaver with teeth/bleed on the sink/cheetah with cleats" multi. keep doin the damn thing, i listened to some more of your shit, you seem to have quite the extensive collection happenin and you seem to be really consistent so i respect that.

    if youve got time to:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=993910
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  3. Mic Grippa

    Mic Grippa Mic Grippa

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    well lets see. beat is dumb, but u already knew that...lyrics are dope, but obviously prewritten and practiced. you DID sound like eminem. Not with what ur saying, but How your sayin it. Its not like eturnal has room to say Anything though. i sound negative, but dont mean it that way. just bein honest. overall it was pretty impressive though man...now if you could just develop YOUR OWN sound u would be str8. ;) 1
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  4. smellycheeseguy

    smellycheeseguy Chedda Cheese

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    lol you talk like thats bad... it's a freeverse not a freestyle
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  5. F.A.T.

    F.A.T. peep dots

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  6. F.A.T.

    F.A.T. peep dots

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    hahaha yah... who doesant prewrite the lyrics before recording a verse???
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  7. F.A.T.

    F.A.T. peep dots

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    and there was no practicing involved other than the writing process... this sounds like shit to me
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  9. smellycheeseguy

    smellycheeseguy Chedda Cheese

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    im recording my part for this on saturday in the stuuuudio [teet]
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  10. Thurman_Merman

    Thurman_Merman got sandwiches?

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    lovely
    unfortunately i hate u andrew
    u stopped answering my myspace messages
    wait
    i could never hate dzk
    keep up the good work fellas
    dont 4get the small guys

    peace

    -whiteout
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