F.a.T - Killin you softly (freeverse)

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  1. F.A.T.

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  2. smellycheeseguy

    smellycheeseguy Chedda Cheese

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    im probably gonna get in onnn thatt second verse just to feel thuggggggg. [teet]
    then ill send it to you if you want aiiiiiiiight?
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  3. emcee50killa

    emcee50killa New Member

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    wow, this was garbage.

    you are a wanna be eminem with no flow.

    everything you say is what he taught you minus the smooth delivery.
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  4. Loced-Out

    Loced-Out LoCed-Out aKa L-O

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    ^I hope u aint that one cat from a while back that kept dissing DZK for recognition an was(is) on eminems dick an tried flowing like him
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  5. F.A.T.

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    lol @ your ignorance
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    .(going to your page)
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    haha... speaking of an eminem wanna be
    first song, "drug anthem"... could it scream eminem any louder, the only difference is you asked for gods forgiveness, lol
    oh but wait your a "christian rapper".... how come all of your songs are about drugs?
    i guess the fact that your a hypocrite is beside the point

    a very high percentage of the shit i say (minus the obvious jokes ie. robbing a bank) have been my own personal experiences...
    "i'll drink a full 5th, and drive my whip til it do full flips"
    2003, i drank a 5th of capt. totalled my car and got a dui
    "been livin on prescriptions for half my life"
    ive been prescribed adderall since middleschool
    "everybody blames the parenting
    i say its bad marraiges
    or, lack there of,"
    my parents were never married
    .............
    but i guess since Em and I have the same skin color, it means that everything i say, i learned from him, its not possible for anything i say to be true... because its already been true once before for somebody else... WTF? I guess that would mean that all black rappers are tupac and biggie wanna bes right???
    go take a few more glamour shots in your sleevless Jordan T's like your idol slim'a'lim does and then go kill yourself
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  6. DEVIZEqld

    DEVIZEqld LARTA BRUSH

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    sounds good
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  7. DEVIZEqld

    DEVIZEqld LARTA BRUSH

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    FAT N DZK got bust a track over my shit, got them free downloads up again

    larta
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  8. emcee50killa

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    Ok, I'll withdraw half of my statement....and rephrase the other part.

    In real life, I don't think dzk vocals are going to help you, they slow your flow down and make it sound choppy sometimes....

    Use your real voice without being afraid of your high's....just spit it like if was hyper and just talkin and laughin with your homie's without thinkin about it...

    and drink sprite instead of Captain.

    holla
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  9. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    ^^^As a Certified Hater, I must advise you to get your own shit tight before criticizing others. Also, it is probably good to realize things like the arena in which you choose to hate, who you are hating on, and whether or not you are anywhere close to their talent level. In this particular case, you have made bad decisions. Regroup and redirect. Or you can do what F.a.T. said.

    btw, next time F.a.T. just call me about the track and I'll give feed. This site is like a female to me. Good for a little friction but nothing good really comes out of it.
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  10. KnightMere

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    yooo this shit was dope as hell F.a.T...and dz i to liked the simplicity of the beat...hot shit man..

    F.a.T ur wordplay/flow was so sick as hell on this man...props..u really stepped ur game up..that last stanza was dope to:
    "my teams is as deadly as 7 Jet Li's
    on jet skiis armed to the teeth with machettes."


    nice drop man...
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  11. F.A.T.

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    yessirrr
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  12. In-Vek

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    *is going to drop on this*


    ill email it to u..im sure youd like to hear all the random kids who drop on it lol
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  13. smellycheeseguy

    smellycheeseguy Chedda Cheese

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    lol Eturnal just disses good rappers so people will come see how bad his stuff is. :wink:
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  14. Mepsyiah

    Mepsyiah Prophecy

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    this track was sick as shit like usual...dope rhymes...nice beat....nice flow/delivery on it...good production nothing is wrong with this shit....nice drop F.a.T. and nice production DZK...


    Take Me Away
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  15. TraGiC

    TraGiC Recognize Real

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    the question is how fat is FAT?

    he sounds huge

    wow
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    lol @ Eturnal what a loser
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  18. F.A.T.

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    hahahaha
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  19. F.A.T.

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    giggidy giggidy
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