Extreme Venom VS. LyricalPriest

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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    oh man what am i getting my self into?

    16 bars right?

    no holds barred.

    drop whenever.
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  2. NormanGlockwell

    NormanGlockwell New Member

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    this should be a slaughter good luck tho preist
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  3. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    [key styled]

    extreme venom in his dreams winnin but in reality he isnt..

    you can see me trippin, on these woman, every time i text heat writtens

    he's kitten whos he kiddin, he couldnt conduct a long stroke even if he swimmin
    what it be midget?

    i dont need a response to know he smitten with these lyrics

    he couldnt see me in text even if he's 'vision' he can keep wishin

    me entertaining the battle is mere hollywood aesthetically,

    because dude getting fucked up, and since he's a eunuch he gets to watch respectively.

    he's another lost pathetic geek bout to got tossed a viscous tweet about gettin

    off the bosses friggin meat.

    he's about to take the loss indefinitely crossing pathes with the better polished text emcee

    my pedigree will be the reason why you lost repetitively, claiming that your better then me

    show's your lack of creativity, while these lyrics i create simply expose that you became frigidity because of teenage misery

    mad because the only thing he aint lost.. his virginity.

    he probly respond like "im better times infinity"

    but we aint listening he better consider being renamed instantly
    bc im dunking him like he gettin baptized and we celebrating
    the great christening.

    faggit that wears lip gloss you gettin damaged so bitch get lost, its a fact that your inactive ass pit boss.
    so mis me with that whack rappin ass wish wash..

    ;]

    g'luck hope that was enough competition for you
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    up for the boss
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  5. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    i know i said drop whenever but i expected a verse within at least 18 hours from final post.
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  6. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    Damn nigga you did post last night huh? I was at work all day my bad.. sec...
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  7. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    Ayo.... The workin' nigga, The Workin' nigga
    Sike! i was in the back of the boards hopin this Jerk Gets Bigger!
    More for me to eat, Slaughtering this Priest upon the Platter
    I'm the Decon Takin' the pulpit, Speakin' gettin' Fatter!
    Eatin on the regular, Competitors Feel it in they Spirituals
    I knew he was a trashbag when I seen His name was 'Lyrical'
    Fearin' Who?
    .................. This foo commitin' misdermenors?
    I'm a Felon, Snap his legs off, beat his ass wit his femurs
    You can Ask me, I'm Cleaner then a Whole bottle of bleach
    Swollow me? You might get better, I'll make you SIck.. Follow My Speach?
    Holla & creep off boards Cause its Best to Stray
    He MUST be a Democrat the way he Losing on Election Day
    Better Pay, Cause the homie Venom like the money
    Better yet, i'll Give him some Weight, then Dead him like Big Pun be
    I'll Wet'em it ain't funny, Tell this preacher Duck wit Stealth
    It's good advice in your Sig, muthaFucka, FUCK YOUR SELF
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  8. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    ** nice!! ... votes ??

    [​IMG]
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  9. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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  10. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    no one can vote..??
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  11. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    Its a Tie...thats why nobody is voting, yall gotta do a rematch
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  12. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    E.V. yo lets concetrate on the rstl this week.. and do that tag battle this weekend while we are votiing and shit..
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  13. J o o k

    J o o k Win your battles before they’ve even been fought.

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    Yeah this shit his hard to vote up lol

    Grrrr I can't pick a winner

    Good battle guys

    Welcome back vinny!
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  14. bnasty510

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    [key styled]

    ..........everything is "keystyled" u idiot...

    extreme venom in his dreams winnin but in reality he isnt..
    you can see me trippin, on these woman, every time i text heat writtens

    wack

    he's kitten whos he kiddin, he couldnt conduct a long stroke even if he swimmin
    what it be midget?

    wack

    i dont need a response to know he smitten with these lyrics
    he couldnt see me in text even if he's 'vision' he can keep wishin

    wack

    me entertaining the battle is mere hollywood aesthetically,
    because dude getting fucked up, and since he's a eunuch he gets to watch respectively.

    wack

    he's another lost pathetic geek bout to got tossed a viscous tweet about gettin
    off the bosses friggin meat.

    wack

    he's about to take the loss indefinitely crossing pathes with the better polished text emcee
    my pedigree will be the reason why you lost repetitively, claiming that your better then me

    good...

    show's your lack of creativity, while these lyrics i create simply expose that you became frigidity because of teenage misery
    mad because the only thing he aint lost.. his virginity.

    wack fillers



    he probly respond like "im better times infinity"
    but we aint listening he better consider being renamed instantly
    bc im dunking him like he gettin baptized and we celebrating
    the great christening.

    wack...fillers....diddnt rhyme

    faggit that wears lip gloss you gettin damaged so bitch get lost, its a fact that your inactive ass pit boss.
    so mis me with that whack rappin ass wish wash..

    wack


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    Ayo.... The workin' nigga, The Workin' nigga
    Sike! i was in the back of the boards hopin this Jerk Gets Bigger!
    More for me to eat, Slaughtering this Priest upon the Platter
    I'm the Decon Takin' the pulpit, Speakin' gettin' Fatter!

    lmao

    Eatin on the regular, Competitors Feel it in they Spirituals
    I knew he was a trashbag when I seen His name was 'Lyrical'

    lmao

    Fearin' Who?
    .................. This foo commitin' misdermenors?
    I'm a Felon, Snap his legs off, beat his ass wit his femurs

    wack and yes i know what femurs are

    You can Ask me, I'm Cleaner then a Whole bottle of bleach
    Swollow me? You might get better, I'll make you SIck.. Follow My Speach?

    wack

    Holla & creep off boards Cause its Best to Stray
    He MUST be a Democrat the way he Losing on Election Day

    good

    Better Pay, Cause the homie Venom like the money
    Better yet, i'll Give him some Weight, then Dead him like Big Pun be

    wack

    I'll Wet'em it ain't funny, Tell this preacher Duck wit Stealth
    It's good advice in your Sig, muthaFucka, FUCK YOUR SELF

    wack


    over all extreme took this with better punclines......lp had to many fillers and most of his words diddnt rhyme. this is not a hate vote, im just pointin out the facts


    vote = extreme
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  15. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    i give ex the point but nigga nasty? nigga u cant vote on shit any more STUPID ASS IGNORANT FUCK! you are the whackest battle rapper ever and you think you really have pull .. the battle verse i dropped for you i wasnt even trying i just wanted to give you something to come back for.

    your no where neear my writing caliber. and you saying every bar i dropped as wack lol

    every bar i drop is a world premier. every bar you drop i be like "i wish i didnt hear"

    bang bang bang
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  16. Mista FREEZE 2001

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    *FREEZE laughing*

    U know what's bad I TOTALLY AGREE WITH B NASTY HERE!!! I was trying to understand what everyone else saw in this Battle. I was like TIE? HOW? It wasn't even close to me... Priest lacked flow and originality and I didn't like it much...

    Extreme's verse was cool... Not great but cool. So to me it was an EASY WIN...

    VOTE VENOM...

    This I COMMAND!!!
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  17. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    ur a real cock sucker u know that..
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  18. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    its not that Venom's verse was weaker than Priest....Venom's wording really messed up the impact of his punches, so they came across....so so....priest punches were minimum and his whole verse was so so...so thats why i said tie
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  19. D-MONIK

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    Vote= extreme venom

    preist had a cool flow through but really lacked in the punchline department, venny had a better set up punch format that helped win him this battle, props to both
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  20. Tacky Jones

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    first off, before i get to voting i jus wanna say bnasty is an idiot. not everything is keystyled. a keystyle is the equivalent of a freestyle. if you sit down, put time into your verse its not a keystyle. if you write it in 10 minutes it is a keystyle. maybe thats why dudes so wack. he hasnt realized he can put time into his verse :scared:

    anyway, voting

    priest - you need to work on making your punchlines into better insults. for example

    extreme venom in his dreams winnin but in reality he isnt..
    you can see me trippin, on these woman, every time i text heat writtens

    you're trippin on women when you write verses? so? what does that have to do with Venom? you're job is to insult dude, not talk about how your verses make you trip over women.

    this one too:

    i dont need a response to know he smitten with these lyrics
    he couldnt see me in text even if he's 'vision' he can keep wishin

    what? how did you insult him here?

    priest, when you battle someone, take a few days. read the newspaper, read some shit online. think of some funny burns you heard a friend tell another friend. then turn those into punchlines. it will help you immensely. when i was in the RBL every week i'd hit up newyorktimes.com, read through stories and try to find something funny/stupid i could use. also google funny insults and look at ways to flip those. and dont get discouraged/upset when you lose. nothing happens over night. keep practicing/working.


    Venom -

    You can Ask me, I'm Cleaner then a Whole bottle of bleach
    Swollow me? You might get better, I'll make you SIck.. Follow My Speach?

    Better Pay, Cause the homie Venom like the money
    Better yet, i'll Give him some Weight, then Dead him like Big Pun be

    i liked these two lines that i quoted. the bleach one made me laugh, and the Pun one was nice. i think your experience helped you a lot in this battle, your verse was more polished. had better punchlines and you came with a better set up/structure.

    vote- Venom
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