EXTINCTION LEVEL LINGUISTICS: Deth to Essenc3

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  1. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Should you choose to follow through with the battle, here are the RWZ rules:


    2 rounds 48 bars RWZ rules. Flips allowed. checky check. Since I'm a gentleman, I'll let the lady--that's you Ms. Bloodgang--choose the order. 1-2-2-1 or 1-2, 1-2. Good luck.


    Here's the RWZ Guideline:

    The standout feature of the RWZ Guideline is THE CHALLENGE FEATURE. There are two forms of Vote Challenges. No challenge can be longer than 12 written lines in paragraph form. All categories are judged by the definition of the category. So if someone thought your flow was equal to someone else's flow...but the other guy had say a 2 syllable rhyme scheme and you had a 4 syllable rhyme scheme or compound rhyme scheme greater than 2...your flow is BETTER [ as long as it's still smooth and rhythmic ] because it's harder to keep a smooth flow with a greater syllable count, and it takes more skill to do so with power, proper vocab, creativity, etc. One of the harder things to judge is say...Punchlines. There are clear definitions for what constitutes a punchline, but everybody has their own subjective flava on that. So nobody can IGNORE something that's a punchline according to the rule definition, nobody can call it filler...but everyone has their preferences so a particular style of punch will be voted by one person as ill and another person will think it's trash, and that's just how it is. Gun bars are punchlines. Swag n flow bars are punchlines. Personals are punchlines. Everyone has their preferences, and ALL preferences are equally valuable. The REAL QUALITY LYRICIST can put almost every style of punch in a single verse. A verse with a variety of punches in it should be given the punchline category over a verse with only a single kind or a limited variety of punches in it.

    You can do a CATEGORY CHALLENGE...as in, you disagree with the votes or vote cast in a specific category. Say...you didn't think you lost the Punchline category. We look at the definition of punchlines, cite the bars you thought won you the category, your opponent is allowed ONE RESPONSE to your challenge if your opponent opposes your position. The voters may choose to justify their votes with ONLY ONE RESPONSE NO LONGER THAN 12 LINES. Then the mod is called in to arbitrate.

    If 3 or more categories are successfully challenged? A VOTE CHALLENGE can be issued...and that could change the vote against you to either a null vote or a vote for you. Moderator's discretion.

    The moderators have to be fair and unbiased. The RWZ Mods are Jason Anthony and Lyrical Priest



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    Originally Posted by DethStryque
    B) 23 categories to judge battles.

    - Opener: The power of the first two bars in ya verse

    - Flow: how smooth and unbroken the rhythm and rhymes are

    - Word play: The witty exploitation of the meanings and ambiguities of words, esp. in puns. It must make sense when written AND spoken. No textcee wordplay.

    - Name play: witty exploitation of the meanings and ambiguities in names. It must make sense when it's written AND when it's spoken, no "textcee" nameplay

    - Rhyme Scheme: The ordered pattern of rhymes. The more sophisticated the rhyme scheme, the more creatively placed areas in a rap that bars rhyme? Th The more advanced the rhyme scheme. Rhyme scheme - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

    - Multis: rhymes that contain two or more syllables,Multisyllabic rhyme is used extensively in hip-hop, is considered a hallmark of complex and advanced rapping

    Inners: rhymes that happen near or at the center of a bar

    - Punches: Definitions for punch′ line`(n )the climactic phrase or sentence in a joke speech humorous story or rap that produces the desired effect. That means that BOAST punchlines, KNOWLEDGE punchlines, FIGHTING WORDS/THREATS, descriptive violence, etc etc are also punchlines and must be credited as such. Anything that attacks the opponent, and/or gives props to the rapper that's rapping, is a punchline and must be considered as such.

    - Personals: Diss punchlines that can be directed only at a specific person, and oftentimes include disses aimed at something that the person has done, something they wear, their voice, mannerisms, etc.

    - Humor: Bars that have the quality of being amusing or comic, esp. as expressed in literature or speech.

    -Knowledge: This is probably the most powerful and most overlooked area in rap battles. The greater your knowledge base and the more effectively you apply it, the better your rap is and the harder it is to craft a rap like that. Raps showing a thorough grasp of common and uncommon subjects deserve to receive higher marks than those that don't, and this Guide knows and respects that fact.

    -Themes: You know how rappers could select a sport or whatever and draw punchlines visuals wordplays metas etc built around those? In the URL this idea is mistakenly called "schemes". A more accurate word is "themes".

    - Vocabulary: The use of words that clearly get your meaning across; however the more unusual the words used that STILL get the meaning across clearly? The better the vocabulary. Vocab isn't an excuse to use big words to confuse the crap outta anybody; vocab should make your meaning more clear. Your intentions more precise.

    - Flips (in 2 round battles): The skill and art of turning a punchline, word or phrase that your opponent used on you back on your opponent

    - Attitude: the swag, ferocity, threats, intensity and energy of a rap. Street rappers and ganxta rappers often excel in this area.

    - Realness: When a rapper speaks about real life events and circumstances then brings them home in the rap being spit by applying those events to the opponent. URL rappers do this alot when they speak about the character of the person they're facing.

    - Metaphors: A figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable. [ ex: my faith is a rock ]
    A thing regarded as representative or symbolic of something else, esp. something abstract.
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  2. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    - Simile: A figure of speech involving the comparison of one thing with another thing of a different kind, using the words 'like' or 'as' (e.g., as brave as a lion).

    - Sound Manipulation: the deliberate combination of rhyme scheme and vocabulary to produce, repeat, and/or emphasize specific sounds. this includes alliteration.

    - Creativity: The use of the imagination or original ideas, esp. in the production of an artistic work. Creativity is oftentimes nonexistent or very narrow in raps. Break the barriers and use all the creativity you want; just be sure that you use high levels of creativity in the application of all of the categories in this Guideline.

    -Focus: Have you ever seen a rap that was dope but never seemed to be going anywhere? Seemed like it was directionless? There should be progression in the rap. Readers should be able to grasp a "theme" in the rap.

    - Originality: How ORIGINAL is the material? Have we seen the material in this rap used many times or rarely used? When comparing the raps, who used the "fresher", less commonly used but still applicable direct and understandable material?
    - Enjoyability: Pure enjoyment. Totally subjective

    - Structure (legibility): self explanatory

    - Closer: Your last bars should be either the most powerful bars in the rap or tied with the opener. Finish with absolute madness, every time.

    Flips allowed. All votes must follow the standard definition for each category and are subject to Category Challenges if the votes don't conform with the definitions of the categories.
    To vote? All you gotta do is copy and paste the list below, list the name of the lyricist that won each category next to the name of each category, and follow your category breakdown with a 4 line minimum quick expo.




    Opener--
    Flow--
    Word play--
    Name play--
    Rhyme scheme--
    Punches--
    Personals--
    Humor--
    Knowledge--
    Themes--
    Vocabulary--
    Flips (in 2 round battles)--
    Creativity--
    Structure (legibility)--
    Attitude--[ ferocity, focus, swag ]--
    Realness--
    Metaphors--
    Simile--
    Sound Manipulation--
    Originality--
    Enjoyability--
    Structure--
    Closer--

    4 bars must be cited from the winning verse that won it and 4 bars from the losing verse that lost it in your eyes as a voter.


    Deth overmastered his opponents in every way with his superior lyricism, flow, vocab, punches...dude was just too much in every way. Those other guys did their best? But they just couldn't face their Deth. [ Cite 4 bars from the winning verse that sealed the win for the voter, cite 4 bars that lost it for the loser. Cite what you liked that the loser did. You must ALWAYS find SOMETHING that the loser did that you liked...even if you say: "well, I liked that he TRIED to do such and such..."]

    Another way to vote is to say:

    Deth won most of the categories except [ list categories ]. Here's why he won those categories [ list categories ] and here's why he lost these categories [ list reasons ].



    top to bottom voting takes like 5-6 minutes and is still thorough
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  3. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Okay, this battle is to anyone...or any TWO...lyricists who want to come in, face me, and feel the fatal Stryque of Deth. Essenc3, if you're still here [ after accepting the battle challenge via PM ]? Step up. Anyone who actually wanna battle besides Essenc3? Step up and I got room for you, too.
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  4. Essenc3

    Essenc3 New Member

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    Let's go.
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  5. Essenc3

    Essenc3 New Member

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    Getting sick of waiting for this lil fucken fagot.This lil kid thinks he's straight legit, deathstrike he aint nice, like he rips kids to peaces as he types,..haha ya right..., I've seen your writtens, they lame an weak as fuck, praise my system, I'm insanely gifted, your day to day business,. gayness on some fag to fag missions, your claim to fame is you take a mates taint the first date that's really really lame,.. you should be ashamed, this dude is really really gay, I'm the opposite,.. pure evil.., apocalypse, I kill people,.. take me to your consulate,ill demolish and kill all the occupants., you'll need to find a seismologist, to measure my accomplishments, I'm raw with it,opulent, obstinate, your incompetent u annoying like a pimple so call me an antioxident, n if you think you've forsaken me, budday, your in for a rude awakening, ill blaze this queen, like mary g, you'll be dazed for weeks,your raps are all make believe, when I red your battle with cise all I could do was grieve I couldn't read the hole 48 why are you so naive, you suck so ima teach, watch as I conceive, these awesome rhyming skeems, you ended your bars with dude like ten times... like haha try justify those multilines don't ever say you beat me your beneath me I'm so high above you can't even fucken see me. That's a rap he said, like he just sang a sick song, I'm king kong bitch a one man lynch mob, you think youll beat me, your fucking wrong, let's get it on, ill one punch this chump, if he gets up then two lumps, he's gone,try to talk shit yall homos should acknowledge, ima beast and a profit, my very speech releases toxins that defeats these impostas, get on yo knees and kiss the sausage, or admit my flow flawless...

    I'm not really what 48 works out too on pape so for whatever reason if its under or over a bit don't cry. Lol
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  6. Essenc3

    Essenc3 New Member

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    Waiting... For you to spit is killing me my god.
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  7. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    You are absolute trash, bro.
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  8. Essenc3

    Essenc3 New Member

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    Battle me then.
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  9. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    You are 24 bars short. You need twice as many bars as you have written.

    Also
    Hit
    Enter
    After
    Every
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  10. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    this nigga said.. "praise my system". lolololol after i read that part... i stopped. i have no idea what that meanz.
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  11. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Essenc3...are you going to drop the rest of your bars in your first verse or what? You are 24+ bars short of what you need. Let's get this battle going, dawg.
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  12. Gsus

    Gsus aka Wordz bka G. Legit

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    I got this....drop ya verse Deth, u know how we do....show these lil guys a battle
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  13. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Fix your sig. 8 lines for less.^
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  14. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    whaaasssuuuup brutha it's GOOD to see you.

    Aight, I'll drop tomorrow. Won't be home settled til later tonight.

    2 rounds. 48 bars. Flips and allat. RWZ rules. You already know, bruh.
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  15. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    You got jokes. You got 8 lines in your sig, too, they're just not caps and all blue.
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  16. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    No you, Deth. Lol.

    And mine is 7
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  17. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Ah man, you gonna get me for a one line difference? Lololol.
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  18. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Of course, brother.
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  19. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Lolololol you ain't right, bruh. Aighty then.

    But I LIKE my sig. It's ill and original.
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  20. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Vote -Deth's Sig

    It's better than Essenc3's verse lol
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