ESP (Extra Sensory Perfection)

Discussion in 'Writer's Block' started by Lyme, May 3, 2006.

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  1. Lyme

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    A brick-house built with porcelain features
    A fragile creature
    Grief stricken apparent in alopecia
    The peacekeeper
    The key to life beyond us
    I love her beyond lust
    My trust placed in her
    Illustrious face with a great figure
    Forbidden fruit of youth
    In the fingers of the grave digger
    Manipulated
    My late-night sanctum
    The lone catalyst of my tantrum
    Her tender touch turns to talons
    In her tempers clutch I bleed burgundy gallons
    Her crimson lips lick my wounds
    Her tongue tastes the claret
    My pain is vintage
    Her comfort is twenty-four carat
    In a golden moment of havoc
    My heart beats haphazard
    My brain bleeds black ballads that embarrass the author
    My favourite torture
    I drown in the depths of my mermaid s water
    At war with the storms daughter
    The tornadoes sister
    She s twisting my aura
    I m caught in her barbed wire
    Burning up in her hearts fire
    Bathed in the flames of my fury
    She wears me out like jewellery
    The duel-edged tool of her tomfoolery cuts my character
    A quick-witted challenger to any bachelor
    Bad attitude chick
    Intellectual calendar bitch
    Baby-faced battleaxe
    Make a man switch
    My lip-licking sex sandwich
    The grand dish
    My delicious delicacy
    My delicate enemy
    Our friendship connects with a sexual chemistry
    My opposite energy
    The cause of my pain and the remedy
    I need her readily available
    Making dreams seem attainable
    The untameable force my frames tailored to suit
    But my programming can t compute
    High resolution
    Beauty
    I m blind and mute
    Reciting the music of my youth
    I observe the movement of the universe
    Rehearsed in her steps this evening
    And she s the best-kept secret breathing
    The broad blade that left me bleeding
    Believing in everything and nothing
    She s the source of my suffering
    The cause of endorphin release
    And adrenaline rushing
    Salt water gushing
    Depression
    Embody my expression
    The vessel for my love and affection
    My pain and aggression
    Release of my sweat and suppression
    The seven sins
    My second skin
    She knocks and I let her in
    The spoonful of sugar in my medicine


    Writen by: Jehst......
    I havent written fluently in years. Just felt like sharing these raw lyrics. Gotta love it......

    Download the track: http://download.yousendit.com/80B6278122DB97D6
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  2. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    That's a raw ass title.
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  3. Lyme

    Lyme Guest

    is that as far as you got?
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  4. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    No. But it's my favorite part.
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  5. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    cool title I actually had a dream were I was using esp?....but whatever the poem itself was hot to def....maybe to hot....ya know?....left the poem burnt...lol...to many metaphors and ill lines that it lost its focus....I did like when you stuck on one idea and ran with it....but the blending of rhymes-vocab and using the same letter of each word was borderline overkill ya know?....like focus on just one or the other....but oh well I do the same thing....and now I see why it doesnt work for me...to much at once floods the art work

    keep writing

    props
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  6. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    yo this was good lyme
    i didnt get it though like most poems on here
    but i like your rhymes n shit
    peace
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  7. Lyme

    Lyme Guest

    if you last two actually read it... you'd see who actually wrote this masterpiece... if you cant get thru it download the song... and read along....
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  8. Bhitiah

    Bhitiah Powerful Scriptures

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    "Believing in everything and nothing
    She s the source of my suffering
    The cause of endorphin release
    And adrenaline rushing
    Salt water gushing
    Depression
    Embody my expression
    The vessel for my love and affection
    My pain and aggression
    Release of my sweat and suppression
    The seven sins
    My second skin
    She knocks and I let her in
    The spoonful of sugar in my medicine"


    Yeah...That's hott...I've never heard this before. Maybe I'll have to download it.
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  9. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    not bad at all...
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  10. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    lyme i thought you wrote that
    your shit is wack though
    so im not surprised you wouldn't post it
    and you got some metal issues
    crackerr ass hoe
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  11. Lyme

    Lyme Guest

    ^ is hurt.... what a loser
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  12. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    hurt? right.

    calling me a loser when you live in canada and meet people from united states online just to go fuck them

    right.
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  13. Max Ayodele

    Max Ayodele Godfather

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    Jehst is the truth. "falling" is str8 classic album
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  14. Lyme

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    yep.. def hurt sounds like a little envy as well.


    word @ max, great album... I also love that track Die when u Die. 10 points if you tell me what movie is sampled in that track...
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  15. Thrilla-Ali

    Thrilla-Ali Dapper Don

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    envy on a piece that you never even wrote?
    hurt at somebody i dont even know?

    lyme = r-e-t-a-r-d

    ps. i just dislike people with bad character
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  16. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    I think this is better suited for the Intercourse forum..b/c I read through that whole thing thinking "did she write this" and then got to the end.

    That's dope though, for sure.
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  17. Lyme

    Lyme Guest

    Yeah I'm not some hardcore lesbianaaa.. lol
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  18. MC-Panther

    MC-Panther New Member

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    wow.. now this is my first time in this forum for poetry and to tell the truth i clicked the wrong thing but i took the time to read this..

    lyme you had me goin with this one i read the whole thing and i was like.

    Holy shitttttt this lady has serious talent.. (im sure you still do) i mean.. i was about to tell you to try to get that published or something.. persue a career writing poetry and shit.

    but then i saw that it was written by jehst.. which made more sense cause its about a woman. damn this is probably one of the best pieces of poetry ive ever read on this forum.
    i think you have inspired me.. so maybe shortly i will take an attempt to write a piece , just depends on the mood i guess..

    but yeah what i meant to say is.. thanks for the read and this jhest guy is a prodigy
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  19. absolute zero

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    Don't up old poems!
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