episode one of my FIRST ORIGINAL PRODUCTION is out "RED DOT" this is big for me, check it

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  1. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    vocal mixing by RM's own Babble.
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  2. Dru-P

    Dru-P Alaskan Assassin

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    Shit was cool, I was listening on headphones so the audio was annoying me a little bit but propbably wouldn't be annoying on speakers. Shit cracked me up when you shot that girl and her legs went flying. Thought it was gonna go all Reservoir Dogs when you were dying in the car.
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  3. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    one motive of this was to pay homage to different scenes every episode, that scene was definitey inspired by REservoir DOgs
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  4. Free Lynx

    Free Lynx ®m legend Peter Parker

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    love the intro music . Very well done... The only thing I wasn't feeling was the two dudes in the beginning something didn't seem natural..i didn't believe them to b thugslol


    however I was thoroughly entertained and will be tuning in... You've come along way homie
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  5. L u c y

    L u c y (Administrator) SWERVE

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    LMAOOO "he got shot in his other eye"

    I was 100% engaged & into this - I love it. Great job Nim.
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  6. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    Thanks lynx

    Other than Cain that's kinda what I was going for with the other 2 "gangsters"

    Vulnerability and panic


    They not supposed to be thugs
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  7. NBA1K

    NBA1K Never Broke Again

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    dope !

    yeah, they didnt seem like "thugs" hence why they was kinda like, "impressed" n shit by the dude who actually was ...
    well thats what it seemed like to me ...

    but shit was dope bruh ..
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  8. murderah

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    dam @Nimrod got no rank in RM.com no more
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  9. Mr. Truth

    Mr. Truth Well-Known Member

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    shits dope, im just now getting into some camera work myself and watching your videos improve shows what hard work can do

    what kind of lighting equipment do you use nim
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  10. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    True

    I'm Kobe of rm
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  11. Djay Cas

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    good job. the music for when you walked up to the door was dope
    at the end it plays again but it goes into some other shit. and it was like =/

    the turn down for what song was dope as end credits music
    and the girl singing your intro music is great. she the same broad you used to post on here, young broad you was managing or somethin?


    aside from the music though I thought your acting wasnt bad at all
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  12. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    Nah this is Sonyae elise


    The girl ur mentioning is Zewdy


    Thanks
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    Bad Dude Are you bad enough?

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    ??

    Explain..

    I aint watch yet tho.
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  15. Sneez

    Sneez Danish Curling

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    nim looked dumb as hell smoking :funny:
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  16. Sneez

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    nim thought he was Omar for a second
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  17. g.t.

    g.t. RM Radio Host

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    Its good quality and production - the writing left much to be desired. Overall awesome for a first short episode.
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  18. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    what aspect of the writing didnt you like.. what scene, dialogue, etc
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  19. g.t.

    g.t. RM Radio Host

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    The plot.

    The dialogue was fine. But a we know of the plot is: random ppl at a table, one is free from prison and theyre celebrating. A hit squad shoots him, but he wasnt the target. Hit squad volunteer goes in to make it right, gets shot in process.

    Victims call some dude getting laid -


    Thats what i mean by lacking, theres no "there" there, but ill tune to future episodes to see how it fleshes out. Im a
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  20. Bad Dude

    Bad Dude Are you bad enough?

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    I wasn't sure if this was supposed to be serious

    the soundtrack needs major work

    i understand you have a talent in film, but I think you need someone who has talent in post production also...that means using the right soundtracks

    that trumpet driven beat just sounds too goofy and adds a comedic feel to the film.

    just my opinion
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