enigman - nothing 2 prove

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  1. Enigman

    Enigman PIG LORD

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    this is a disstrack to a guy called abyis over at another board

    www.soundclick.com/enigman

    yeah i know the vocals are way too loud b4 u tell me

    beenz is his homeboy... rest is pretty self explanitory - was a retaliation disstrack from what he spit at me

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    everybody knows that my flows ill, you aint got
    no skill, ima squash this pussy like roadkill
    i seen ur picture, u look like a real loser there
    a fat ugly nerd hunched over his computer chair
    abyis, you needing some help
    you a fat pussy rockin a gap hoody, that speaks for itself
    n somethings wrong with ur face 2
    i wonder what breed of animal raped your mother to create you
    and dont brag about ur company
    cuz its owned by ur best friend without copywrite or publishing
    u lying son of a bitch
    how the fuck u makin money from a company that doesnt exist
    its basic rules u bin told this
    never go into business with someone ur sexually involved with
    u find men sexy for real
    cuz u swallowing beenz, but i dont mean ecstasy pills
    seriously man - if u and beenz players...
    then why u on the net gettin beat down by teenagers
    u got murked by urban and tfab
    so why try coming at me - fag...
    ur rhymes a 1 syllbul, ur lyrics are pitiful
    and spellin ur name wrong dont make you original
    you sound like everyone else
    so dont come at me just cuz u got beat down by everyone else
    i rock enough ice to turn heads with
    u aint got jewls... but i hear beenz gave u a pearl necklass
    cant shit on me with that voice kid
    u sound so constapated i doubt u'd even shit on the toilet
    n all ya songs wack
    and thats why you got 2 fans like kitana from mortal kombat
    you paid alot of cash for that mixer and recorder
    you still suck... but now your 500 dollars poorer
    your songs are never great
    n i wont diss u again cuz i aint gonna help your sorry ass elevate
    that disstrack u dropped was shitty
    now i know benzino aint the worst rapper outta boston city

    EAASSYYYYYY
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  2. Mr. Sam

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    definitely good energy here...nice beat...haha and the hate comes through...ok you definitely should jettison the growl. shit sounds a lot better when your natural voice comes through. also it sounds like you're losing some impact on your delivery cause you're trying to maintain the growl, especially on the punch ins.

    the quality is good though, and so were the punchlines. like i said, though, using your natural voice, or something closer to it, would def make it sound nicer. pz.
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  3. Enigman

    Enigman PIG LORD

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    thanks alot for the feedback

    yeah ill take into account what u said about the voice thing... the voice is the same but what i used on that track is like a super gruff version of it - but yeah ill try toning it down a lil on the next one

    cmon i fed so many ppls shit and only 1 returned :(
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  4. .The omen.

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    aight lets peep this... come in nyce, kinda that fade in typa shyt, i like it... man ur a british rapper it says rite? well lemme say that im feelin ya voice alot more than most heads from that area, u dont have a annoying accent, u got a brutal voice, stayin on beat, lyrics are on point.. this is a battle track? lol spellin ya name wrong dont make u original haha.. goodness.. sound like with a lil experience u could really polish yaself out n have a nyce future in this... good shyt

    rtf if u would... http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=923663
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  5. PhedUp

    PhedUp ¡ The1XL !

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    nothing to prove line was nice

    But yo...CUT ON THE FUCK WORD TALK..is ANNOYING

    You sound grimey n mad..like ur on some physcho murder shit voice , id actually fear steppin to punch you

    Ecstacy line was nice..is clear ya lyrics are nice
    ya quality is aight but ya mic quality needs to be upped a bit jjust a smudge
    ur delivery n emotion are the most things that stand out
    ya flow is just plain...nothing that wow's me...is decent..you know just plain
    Overall the lyrics is what got me

    Overall decent stuff

    Thanks for peeping my shit

    BTW are you Enigman From The Old HIp Hop Expression..if so you might remember me as Hi Tek , Eyerony or Kontent...if you are ya know
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  6. Enigman

    Enigman PIG LORD

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    yeah im the very same

    thanks for peeping
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  7. Mizz Tres

    Mizz Tres Ur woman loves me =/

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    I like the beat but you got an accent. Had some decent lines there, but I think your delivery would improve if you kinda relaxed on the mic.

    The raspy voice ..I donno man. this was coo, you got personals on whoever that was. It wasnt bad. Emotion is nice tho.

    thanks for replying.
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  8. fuck_a_nella

    fuck_a_nella New Member

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    you had some aiight punches n shit, the beats aiight fittin the shit, overall your delivery was ok too you had the energy n shit, dunno the other cats shit but your verse was cool, keep it up .
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  9. Scribe

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    lol, you called that dude an 'assbag'..

    lmao@ wonder what breed of animal raped your mother to create you

    lmao@ u aint got jewls... but i hear beenz gave u a pearl necklass

    damn, you got personal as shit on this dude. harsh..


    good shit btw..

    one
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  10. Enigman

    Enigman PIG LORD

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    thanks for the feedback ppl

    gonna take what u all said into account when i work on my next one
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  11. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    peepin...damn..voice is grimey..odd to me i'd have to get use to it..flow is good tho delivery is good...quality is good...nice energy...lol..lines is good...
    lol@the mortal combat line.....
    ya voice is just diff but i guess thats a good thing....overal pretty good track...keep at it
    n yesterday when u peepd my track u peepd the wrong 1..lol...i had to take the new 1 down cause soundclick messed it up..its back up tho...peep if u get a chance....

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=924637
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  12. Enigman

    Enigman PIG LORD

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    ^ rofl thats MY link homeboy
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  13. MisterE

    MisterE Look @ His Face Now!

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    ^then stop being rude and leave feed!





    intro is funny.......the gutteral shit should be toned down......it sounds a lil too forced, but it seriously sounds like with a lil toning down and a lil polishing your voice would be fucking raw as hell.....your punches are nice, good writing man


    punches are nice ahahahaa at mortal combat


    overall this is tight shit.......your voice is nice man, ESPECIALLY for a UK cat.....i've never heard a UK cat with a deep voice, much less a raw as fuck voice......




    good shit, it would be hard to beat





    return the favor homie


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12588920#post12588920
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  14. Enigman

    Enigman PIG LORD

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    dont tell me what to fucking do. i was saying that he posted the link to MY song instead of his, and i left him two feedback already.

    but thanks for the feed ill get at urs in a minute
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  15. Matter_of_Fact

    Matter_of_Fact Infinite Immortal

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    hmmm

    *returns da feed*

    shit comes in, nice fade in, I like the energy and aggression u got it's nice still, definitely need to turn the vocals down like u were saying already, I'm diggin' your lyrical content in the punches, some weere pretty good still, delivery was pretty coo overall, emotion was their definitely fam, keep doin' your thing fa sho, overall it's a pretty slick diss track, One Love, Holla, Peace

    :~!
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  16. PPRO

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    I liked it, The voice thing got on my nerves but your punches and ablity to rhyme was clear. The voice thing made me think you were about to be wack as fuck but that shit just never did get wack.
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  17. PPRO

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    I liked it, The voice thing got on my nerves but your punches and ablity to rhyme was clear. The voice thing made me think you were about to be wack as fuck but that shit just never did get wack.
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  18. Enigman

    Enigman PIG LORD

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    thanks for everyone that gave me feedback i appreciate it its been for the mostpart real helpful

    and to everyone who i left feed who said they would return in they titles and never 'got round to it' i wont bother feeding u again.
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    uppin for my man
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