Enemy

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by Jai-Z, May 23, 2012.

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  1. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Hope u got ur armor on..
    ..Full Metal Jacket, I aint heating wth ratchetz;
    Missilez or rocketz packing..
    ..Im talking laserz and atomic reaction.
    Red Faction..
    ..my headshotz Cap'n high rankz wth my aim view;
    Fuck triggerz and gatz..
    ..my thoughtz weaponized, my pen and lipz moved.
    Fine tuned to that beacon u seeking..
    ..antenna attatched;
    Radiowavez, "Hello, your a rival"..
    ..9-1-1 on my dispatch.
    Emergency servicez..
    ..servicez quick whn that light flickz;
    But once your screamz reach sound speed..
    ..Helpz cry wale like Moby Dick.
    And thatz where I come n..
    ..The Special Forcez of fortressez;
    Green Baretz get planted, but dont expect to see a rose metamorphosis.
    Type 1 to Type 2, evolution of rap;
    The Davinci code of Michio Kaku doctoring mapz.
    Seeing is believing, Stephen Hawking of factz;
    "The future is yourz.."
    ..but Im already living that.
    John Conner this planet, Kyle Reese itz birth;
    Sarah Conner itz life, then Terminator.
    A soldier at war wth myself, psychotic wth penz;
    Keep my enemies close, I reflect from wthn.
    Testing my mark, but no amount of heat can singe me;
    In the crossfirez of my own mind, yea.. I am the Enemy.
    test
  2. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    dam jai u killin em i might have some comp now lol
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  3. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Thanx, Chase bro! Lol
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  4. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Yeah this was nice .. Nice wordplay, rhyme scheme and nice post overall. I got some I just posted check em out and let me know what you think when you get time homie
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  5. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    metamorphoziz

    fixed.
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  6. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    1 "z" buddy.

    metamorphosiz. Lol
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  7. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    lol. jokes aside, I like this...a littel advice: move away from the assembly line type metaphors and imagery....you got to take spittin like you write poetry. meaning it's all aobut how you say things..anyhow, I love the flow and line structure


    Peaczzzzzzzzzzzz jay z
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  8. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    I feel u. I had a few different typez of metaz n this but the imagery I really ddnt wanna expand on n this topic, too rstl for my liking for this topic.

    I appreciate the love though.
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