emergin theme

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  1. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    ima get you buzzin like a static shock see my rap cache is hot
    i go old school like classic rock an knock you off before you blast a shot
    i dont give a fuck man yo ass can rot aint nobody gonna stop this shit
    think you see me backin down go see an optometrist
    nobody rocks a more fluid spit than this rap enthusiast
    shootin off rhymes faster than a bunch of uzi clips
    verbally infused with wit what you call flash i call stylish
    droppin the most vile spits never stoppin til everybody either dies or quits
    im just a straight shoota im kiddin it curves to the right
    typin these rhymes cuz if i spit on the mic the surface ignites
    emersed in the hype owner of an ego like kanye west personally though i think hes common at best
    its sick the way i vomit a mess an make damn sure to have the most dominant text
    have cats sayin listen to what hes sprayin if anyone gettin shot he gotta be next




    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1235413-hour-glass.html
    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1230936-chase-murda-presents-game-tight.html
    test
  2. Arsenic P

    Arsenic P A.K.A. PROPOSITION P

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    this is was good trc i like the openin two lines the best the only critique i can give on this shit is your transitions on your lines you got good shit just you transitions could be better.1
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  3. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    yeah i tend to focus on the rhyme itself ima work on that though thanks man
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    ill shit my guy! damn if i battled u i woulda had some competition.. LoL... thanx for the comment on westcoast anthem.. ever wanna collab lemme know the drill!

    PALMS UP!
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  5. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    thanks man i appreciate that but i aint that good i cant freestyle and my topical shit needs work so i gotta elevate a lot
    test
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