alright. i was really going to give this to tony. his piece while not on topic, was more striking. that was because it had less which took from it. the tupac quote almost made me stop reading altogether, and did distract me for the rest of the piecce, but there is more involved in eloquents piece. all i have to say is if eloquent was a little bit more selective with lines, (the concrete line really wasnt even needed,) it wouldnt have been close.