EKGenius VS JQuality

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​

    Have fun.
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  2. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Going 16.. Is that cool with you?
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  3. JQuality

    JQuality Jackoff Quality

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    ducked my pic battle call but to be honest....


    would of played in ya favor...wouldn't of been a rep. hurt
    cuz we all no theres no uglier picture EK, then ya own text verse!
    i skimmed ya 6 post & was like, "what i need heaters for"
    they all ask for some type of permission & you'll never make leaderboards!
    this a easy thrill, readin ya verse is a sleepy pill... style pure fetus!
    my weak 1 opposition is an Easy Kill so thanks Genius!!!
    i hope you got bars for days son, punches for nights...i mean it well...
    ill be satisfied if you go hard or go home! either way its with a L
    he'll probobly say Quality this and Quality that n you probobly right
    but one fact i do know is, RBL dont need my audios to know Quality nice!
    stick n stones break bones but words will never catch me offended
    as you can tell im runnin out of shit to say about EK... LOL! no pun intended!



    you can still go sixteen but im done
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  4. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Sorry bro.. Not really down to picture battle
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  5. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    My bad didn't realize you just edited in a verse.. i'll go 12 too

    Laughing at this dirt face suffering from wackness at its worst case
    Cus his SKILLS 'stays second place' since he 'never had it in the first place'
    And for my amusement, I will 'slit his throat' during this guy's abusement
    Until he finds a 'leak on his apple' just like his 'Ipod's music'
    He'll lose it, with his 'old and played concept,' I'll burn this gay vagina
    Cus 'Quality is below standards' - his verse is made in China
    J'll 'remeber this beating' with punches from a fighting man's palms
    The type to leave a 'chip on his shoulders' - and attach 'iron man's arms'
    But all fun and games g, so Why a pic battle? word is you look fucking gay, see
    Post it, and everyone'll stay 'mocking-J' like its 'hunger games three'
    I be busting J's teeth, cus WITH 12 LINES - he got his ass kicked
    With two more, J will 'disappear for a year' like 'Mitt Romney's taxes'

    G'luck man
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  6. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    I'll EDIT this post with votes later
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  7. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    JQuality:

    would of played in ya favor...wouldn't of been a rep. hurt
    cuz we all no theres no uglier picture EK, then ya own text verse!
    .. forced setup, been a rep. hurt? lol
    i skimmed ya 6 post & was like, "what i need heaters for"
    they all ask for some type of permission & you'll never make leaderboards!
    .. cool flow, not really feeling the punch
    this a easy thrill, readin ya verse is a sleepy pill... style pure fetus!
    my weak 1 opposition is an Easy Kill so thanks Genius!!!
    .. cool flow again, decent
    i hope you got bars for days son, punches for nights...i mean it well...
    ill be satisfied if you go hard or go home! either way its with a L
    .. ehh, filler
    he'll probobly say Quality this and Quality that n you probobly right
    but one fact i do know is, RBL dont need my audios to know Quality nice!
    .. cool
    stick n stones break bones but words will never catch me offended
    as you can tell im runnin out of shit to say about EK... LOL! no pun intended!
    .. ehh

    Overall this verse had a good flow but there were no punches. The Quality line was ya best shit, and it wasn't really aimed at ya opponent.

    EKGenius:

    Laughing at this dirt face suffering from wackness at its worst case
    Cus his SKILLS 'stays second place' since he 'never had it in the first place'
    .. ehh
    And for my amusement, I will 'slit his throat' during this guy's abusement
    Until he finds a 'leak on his apple' just like his 'Ipod's music'
    .. This could've been cool, but the setup was forced.. abusement? lol
    He'll lose it, with his 'old and played concept,' I'll burn this gay vagina
    Cus 'Quality is below standards' - his verse is made in China
    .. uhh, nah.. China doesn't actually make below standards lol
    J'll 'remeber this beating' with punches from a fighting man's palms
    The type to leave a 'chip on his shoulders' - and attach 'iron man's arms'
    .. no
    But all fun and games g, so Why a pic battle? word is you look fucking gay, see
    Post it, and everyone'll stay 'mocking-J' like its 'hunger games three'
    .. this was cool
    I be busting J's teeth, cus WITH 12 LINES - he got his ass kicked
    With two more, J will 'disappear for a year' like 'Mitt Romney's taxes'
    .. with better wording this could've been nice

    Overall this verse was not good. You had some forced setups. The mocking J line was cool, and was probably the LOTB, IMO.

    Vote: EKGenius

    He had the LOTB. The mocking-J line won it.
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  8. eggo

    eggo gg

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    would of played in ya favor...wouldn't of been a rep. hurt
    cuz we all no theres no uglier picture EK, then ya own text verse!
    na.
    i skimmed ya 6 post & was like, "what i need heaters for"
    they all ask for some type of permission & you'll never make leaderboards!
    not feeling this.
    this a easy thrill, readin ya verse is a sleepy pill... style pure fetus!
    my weak 1 opposition is an Easy Kill so thanks Genius!!!
    aight.
    i hope you got bars for days son, punches for nights...i mean it well...
    ill be satisfied if you go hard or go home! either way its with a L
    weak.
    he'll probobly say Quality this and Quality that n you probobly right
    but one fact i do know is, RBL dont need my audios to know Quality nice!
    self glory. not really a punch at him. so na.
    stick n stones break bones but words will never catch me offended
    as you can tell im runnin out of shit to say about EK... LOL! no pun intended!
    weak closer.


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    Laughing at this dirt face suffering from wackness at its worst case
    Cus his SKILLS 'stays second place' since he 'never had it in the first place'
    hm. naa
    And for my amusement, I will 'slit his throat' during this guy's abusement
    Until he finds a 'leak on his apple' just like his 'Ipod's music'
    this was ok.
    He'll lose it, with his 'old and played concept,' I'll burn this gay vagina
    Cus 'Quality is below standards' - his verse is made in China
    not feeling this.
    J'll 'remeber this beating' with punches from a fighting man's palms
    The type to leave a 'chip on his shoulders' - and attach 'iron man's arms'
    nope.
    But all fun and games g, so Why a pic battle? word is you look fucking gay, see
    Post it, and everyone'll stay 'mocking-J' like its 'hunger games three'
    ok.
    I be busting J's teeth, cus WITH 12 LINES - he got his ass kicked
    With two more, J will 'disappear for a year' like 'Mitt Romney's taxes'
    cool concept. coulda been worded harsher but aight.


    JQuality, kind of a bland verse. only punch I was feeling was your nameplay on EK. your quality punch was a no go, don't use self glory as a punch. a whole punch said your nice, even if its creative it doesn't do anything for ya verse. your suppose to be knocking down your opponent. didn't really have any great concepts for punches after that.

    EK, lose the ' ' ' ' after every phrase or word ya think ties a punch together. we read it we get it. a good punch doesn't need to be ' around it ' you just word it in a way where we'll understand. apple line was alright not very hard hitting. mocking J line was cool, and mitt romneys tax punch was ok, woulda been better if ya worded it a lil harsher.

    Kinda close, EK had fresher concepts though and had overrall better verse.

    v/EK
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  9. SiegeSupreme

    SiegeSupreme Well-Known Member

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    vote/ EK
    better wording, fresher concepts. I liked the made in China & Romeny taxes lines the most, though they coulda been wordd better.
    Quality was also nice but your punches lacked the sting that EK had. Seen a lot of potential form both though, so keep it up
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  10. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Thanks for the feedback.. definitely keep eggo and mask's criticism in mind
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  11. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    Both oh you have great potential. Sometimes, myself, will fall into the same category... but great flow doesn't compensate for a decent punch.. lotb, is the apple leak/ipos music line. Honestly haven't seen that before. But, overall, a close matchup, good read...

    Vote - ekgenius
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  12. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Quality:

    would of played in ya favor...wouldn't of been a rep. hurt
    cuz we all no theres no uglier picture EK, then ya own text verse!

    this a easy thrill, readin ya verse is a sleepy pill... style pure fetus!
    my weak 1 opposition is an Easy Kill so thanks Genius!!!

    i hope you got bars for days son, punches for nights...i mean it well...
    ill be satisfied if you go hard or go home! either way its with a L


    vs

    EK:

    Laughing at this dirt face suffering from wackness at its worst case
    Cus his SKILLS 'stays second place' since he 'never had it in the first place'

    He'll lose it, with his 'old and played concept,' I'll burn this gay vagina
    Cus 'Quality is below standards' - his verse is made in China


    vote-Quality
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  13. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Not reallt liking much in your verse. I think you really need to work on your concepts, at least the execution. I thought you had potential in some of those lines, but the setups or wording killed them.

    I guess I was nit picking, this verse was alright. I don't know what to say other than work on your wording; but we all could work on that /shrug

    Vote EK
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  14. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    EKGenius wins 5-1.
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