eggo VS HorusTheeGod

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​

    Goodluck, gentleman.
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  2. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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  3. HorusTheeGod

    HorusTheeGod H0l¥

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    I'm thinking 16 if that's cool with you
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  4. eggo

    eggo gg

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    Sure. 16
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  5. eggo

    eggo gg

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  6. HorusTheeGod

    HorusTheeGod H0l¥

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    How do u still battle knowing we all know your a biter ????? Let's see ....



    ....Waffle boy you just a kids meal sitting on a mans plate
    With this rope I'll leave egg hanging like I skipped him on a handshake
    Your style comedy...i laugh it up , u wack as fuck*
    It wont be funny when my punches leave your jaw cracking up
    Your worthless eggo , understand ....this is YOUR end eggo
    With 2 toasters...
    *I'll make sparks fly like when you met your boyfriend eggo
    To beat a legend like me its like taking the ice from under Gretzky*
    I get it....
    Your names ego....but your just two g to spell it correctly...
    Stealing lines , *have no mic presence u speak and stutter man
    So even if you post there's no show like nicki at summer jam*
    See the fact we all know your a biter makes u run and hide
    Beat egg up , then flip this white to the sunny side*
    This your demise , could see the bitch all in your eyes
    Xbox control.....u won't have time to blink before you die
    See I'm like m.bison , enticing ... You just fight lying
    after all you've done for the sport...
    *Your still just known for biting ..... Mike Tyson*
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  7. HorusTheeGod

    HorusTheeGod H0l¥

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    Posted 2 hours after u said lets speed it ...... Ands it's now hr 7 of reading off my verse nice.....editing my votes here
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  8. eggo

    eggo gg

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    Lol eygptian mythology.

    Irrelevant goon. watch, they won't even mention ya soon
    that style is egyptian though.. embalmed n shoulda been left in a tomb
    dog Horus was a falcon. its even worse to others ya worthless
    put ya verses on a pedastal? na..thats jus a perch covered in birdshit
    actin like I got to weather his storm. you'll get lanced in practice
    try to rock me likea hurricane. ended up cloudy with a chance of whackness
    I'll leave a dozen bleedin. can't please ya girl cause ya lovings weakened
    this pussy had to put God in his name,.. n his girl STILL doesn't scream it
    the blindfolds off, we can see ya suck so leave the circle
    tried to act fresh til we saw he wasn't, like a fuckin febreeze commercial
    kid I'm the evil winner. ya fat as fuck so admit ya fiend for dinner
    tried Insanity.. n' only managed to make his chances to win EVEN slimmer!
    his parents confused em explaining life gently. I jus jock the middle finger
    birds n the bees talk.. made em think bitches would flock to his lil stinger
    nobody knows ya, grats on coming back. I been meaning to settle this
    faggot all ya managed to do was go from forgotten.. to being irrelevant
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  9. eggo

    eggo gg

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    I left the house, I didn't expect ya to post tonight. Just got home n posted my verse soon as I hopped on. Relax man.
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  10. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    HorusTheeGod:

    ....Waffle boy you just a kids meal sitting on a mans plate
    With this rope I'll leave egg hanging like I skipped him on a handshake
    .. ehh
    Your style comedy...i laugh it up , u wack as fuck*
    It wont be funny when my punches leave your jaw cracking up
    .. played but decent i guess
    Your worthless eggo , understand ....this is YOUR end eggo
    With 2 toasters...
    *I'll make sparks fly like when you met your boyfriend eggo
    .. nah, wack structure
    To beat a legend like me its like taking the ice from under Gretzky*
    I get it....
    Your names ego....but your just two g to spell it correctly...
    .. decent nameplay
    Stealing lines , *have no mic presence u speak and stutter man
    So even if you post there's no show like nicki at summer jam*
    .. could've been worded better to be more effective
    See the fact we all know your a biter makes u run and hide
    Beat egg up , then flip this white to the sunny side*
    .. lol
    This your demise , could see the bitch all in your eyes
    Xbox control.....u won't have time to blink before you die
    .. ehh
    See I'm like m.bison , enticing ... You just fight lying
    after all you've done for the sport...
    *Your still just known for biting ..... Mike Tyson*
    .. cool flow, decent punch

    Overall this verse wasn't special. U had a few decent lines, with better wording they could've been more effective.

    eggo:

    Irrelevant goon. watch, they won't even mention ya soon
    that style is egyptian though.. embalmed n shoulda been left in a tomb
    .. lol nice
    dog Horus was a falcon. its even worse to others ya worthless
    put ya verses on a pedastal? na..thats jus a perch covered in birdshit
    .. haha
    actin like I got to weather his storm. you'll get lanced in practice
    try to rock me likea hurricane. ended up cloudy with a chance of whackness
    .. lol
    I'll leave a dozen bleedin. can't please ya girl cause ya lovings weakened
    this pussy had to put God in his name,.. n his girl STILL doesn't scream it
    .. nice nameplay
    the blindfolds off, we can see ya suck so leave the circle
    tried to act fresh til we saw he wasn't, like a fuckin febreeze commercial
    .. decent
    kid I'm the evil winner. ya fat as fuck so admit ya fiend for dinner
    tried Insanity.. n' only managed to make his chances to win EVEN slimmer!
    .. nah
    his parents confused em explaining life gently. I jus jock the middle finger
    birds n the bees talk.. made em think bitches would flock to his lil stinger
    .. lol
    nobody knows ya, grats on coming back. I been meaning to settle this
    faggot all ya managed to do was go from forgotten.. to being irrelevant
    .. decent

    Overall this was a nice verse. U started off very nice, and then U fell off towards the end a little bit, but U didn't need much more to win it.

    Vote: eggo

    Better verse, and more consistent.
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  11. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    Good drop & nice start to this week, boys.. Ok, imo, Horus' verse is swagged out w/ decent nameflips... eggo's verse is consistant w/ an egde on setups.

    LOTB
    dog Horus was a falcon. its even worse to others ya worthless
    put ya verses on a pedastal? na..thats jus a perch covered in birdshit

    Vs

    This your demise , could see the bitch all in your eyes
    Xbox control.....u won't have time to blink before you die

    Good shit from both...

    Vote: leggomyeggo (lol)
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  12. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    I think you focused too much on the biting thing. It got repetitive and seemed forced at times. I wasn't very impressed with the setups; I think some of your punches would have been better if you worked on the setups.



    It could have been more consistent, but it was good. Sometimes you forced the issue; you should've reworded the Insanity line to have a better setup. You lost me with the setup tbh. You definitely had enough for a win this week.

    vote eggo
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  13. JQuality

    JQuality Jackoff Quality

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    To beat a legend likeme its liketaking the ice from under Gretzky* I get it.... Your names ego....but your just two g to spell it correctly..



    Vs

    his parents confused em explaining lifegently.I jus jock the middlefinger birds n the bees talk.. made em think bitches would flock to his lil stinger


    Best lines from both god then eggo

    God - lots of filler in your verse, your best name play like was good but could have hit harder...

    Eggo- birds bees line made me chuckle lol not that bed of a set up line...


    I went with the person that made me say ohh instead of lol and the two g to gangster to spell it right got me


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  14. Thorne

    Thorne come at me bro

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    Horus - good effort, got kind of an old school feel to your verses, other than that the punches werent hitting as hard nor the wit was really there.


    dog Horus was a falcon. its even worse to others ya worthless
    put ya verses on a pedastal? na..thats jus a perch covered in birdshit

    i liked this line from eggo, a few others too.


    vote-eggo.
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  15. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Horus:

    ....Waffle boy you just a kids meal sitting on a mans plate
    With this rope I'll leave egg hanging like I skipped him on a handshake

    This your demise , could see the bitch all in your eyes
    Xbox control.....u won't have time to blink before you die

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    eggo:

    dog Horus was a falcon. its even worse to others ya worthless
    put ya verses on a pedastal? na..thats jus a perch covered in birdshit

    I'll leave a dozen bleedin. can't please ya girl cause ya lovings weakened
    this pussy had to put God in his name,.. n his girl STILL doesn't scream it

    his parents confused em explaining life gently. I jus jock the middle finger
    birds n the bees talk.. made em think bitches would flock to his lil stinger


    vote-eggo
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  16. SiegeSupreme

    SiegeSupreme Well-Known Member

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    Good battle. Both had really nice lines. This was one of the better battles this week.
    Horus you had some good concepts & bad ones. Biting like Tyson is really old & played. Skipped on a handshake/sunny side were all good. That being said, Eggo was just more consistent and had a stronger overalll verse. More lines that I felt hit hard and less duds.

    Good to see some nice, new talent in the league
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  17. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Eggo wins 5-1.
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