'Edge of a Dream'...can't sleep... leave links

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by VerbHertz, Jul 26, 2005.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. VerbHertz

    VerbHertz Lexicon

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    6,815
    test
  2. VerbHertz

    VerbHertz Lexicon

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    6,815
    there are so many flaws in this

    i smoked a pack last night before recording and i dont smoke, my lungs are dominated

    but fuck it, up
    test
  3. VerbHertz

    VerbHertz Lexicon

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    6,815
    i can feel the love
    test
  4. Praverb

    Praverb I breathe hip hop...

    Joined:
    Sep 26, 2002
    Messages:
    6,538
    wooooooooooooooo

    I like the beat fam...woooooooo

    ur emotion is dope fam...hehe

    lyrics are on some next level ish...delivery could be alittle better but blah it's not horrible just sounds like u rushed it hehe woooooooooo haha ur angry hehe...rotflmao at sounding like Denku abit woooooooooo

    woooooooooooooo wow at the adlibs they off abit fix them hehe

    get at me

    pz...I like the hook
    test
  5. VerbHertz

    VerbHertz Lexicon

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    6,815
    beat is jakki - FHH

    i might re-record it today, but i am realllyyyy hung over and ironically only slept about 3 hours and can't keep my eyes closed lol. thanks for the feed pra, i'll hit that track i think is saw of yours on the front page.
    test
  6. TheoReTiKaL

    TheoReTiKaL New Member

    Joined:
    Oct 2, 2004
    Messages:
    698
    beat is kinda cooo....

    lyrics is ur nicest asset to this tracc... flo is str8, ur riite bout the couple flaws pronunciation n an occasional akward extension of words... delivery n voice pretty good... overall pretty good ish...

    plz return the favor on my "Three Potential Legends - Westside" tracc when u can

    holla
    test
  7. VerbHertz

    VerbHertz Lexicon

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    6,815
    done and done
    test
  8. Vise

    Vise Ya Tu Sabes

    Joined:
    Dec 13, 2002
    Messages:
    404
    this beat sounds nice.....



    okay, your not bad at all...iono why i thought you'd be bad to begin with =/....flow wisw your on.....the delivery does sound a lil ackward in spots...but when it's on, it's on.....hook sounds a lil low. i could tell how low soon as ur second verse came in.... not bad at all tho...just up the chorus a lil bit




    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=912687

    ^^return that
    test
  9. VerbHertz

    VerbHertz Lexicon

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    6,815
    get links tomorrow... well, i already got theo's... but chea
    test
  10. exothermic

    exothermic Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 7, 2002
    Messages:
    10,648
    listening....

    voice is wierd lolol british or somen?... flows cool iono u needa calm down tho lolol alittle too jumpy wid ur flow lolol calm down lolol... delvierys cool need to polish it up alil tho... lyrics iight.... chorus not the greatest.... overall iight shit

    return feedback plz
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12373812#post12373812
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)