Ed James - Mediterranean Eyes

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  1. EdJames

    EdJames I'm Ed James Bitch

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    Ed James
    Mediterranean Eyes
    Produced by Ozone Productions

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    Hey guys, new song. This originally started off as just a hook for KB but I was feeling the vibe of it so extended it as a full RnB track for the album...I'd appreciate any feedback you can give.
    test
  2. Track Gunnaz

    Track Gunnaz GUNNA #1

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    ozone is serious on the beats, he always got hot ass drum kits. yo ozone lemme get some kits off you. i'll cop

    the song is tight kinda j-timberlake ish i think, but maybe with a lil more soul in the vocals.

    everything else is pretty much on point cept for that part i told you about
    test
  3. BoDi

    BoDi www.iambodirock.com

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    this is on point...beat is nice and simple..allows ur vocals to stand out just enough. that HOOK is serious yo. i'm definitely feelin that.

    good work..

    p.s. - i got some fire for you to sing over...guaranteed.
    test
  4. Mr. sickVisionz

    Mr. sickVisionz The Gentleman's Producer

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    Lyrics are straight on this. The beat is good. I like the hook. Its hard to seperate whats the hook from the pre hook (or do you just have a really long hook?). A different way mix on the stacks would help to make it sound different IMO. This is a cool track though, i'm feelin it overall.

    Hit Me Back:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1028714
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  5. Hard Target

    Hard Target eshbat

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    you definally killed this.

    your harmonies at 1:40 are something serious
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  6. EdJames

    EdJames I'm Ed James Bitch

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  7. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    good good

    DAMN BIOTCH i heard this hook yesturday.. and you didnt take my suggestion on the echo..

    the verse still is mixed not so hot

    i feel like your mixes on your high parts sounds perfect.. but you need to work on the mixing of your lower singing... i can hear some breaths.. i think with the lower singing picks up to much of a breathing sound
    test
  8. EdJames

    EdJames I'm Ed James Bitch

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    No I didn't...didn't really know what you meant!

    I suck at mixing...:(
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  9. EdJames

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  10. ReTRO GoDD

    ReTRO GoDD New Member

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    song is tight beat is crazy ..ozone do his thing

    www.soundclick.com/rapatavismone
    hit me up on aim or aol to collab if you want some help and shit

    retrogodofrap or goddsevilgenius
    test
  11. (( Ozone ))

    (( Ozone )) t-t-t-t-toxiq

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    damn EJ... i didn't know your recording situation was back on point again

    i'ma get at you with a whole new batch of classics

    by the way, pm me the mp3 to this.. i got a couple of 'higher ups' i wanna play this for.. shit is flames
    test
  12. K-Great

    K-Great Katastrofik Is KING

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    Lovin The Beat On this.. Singing Is On Point, Sounds Great Quality wise...

    Wish i had that Quality man, lol. But This Ain't Downloadable So I'ma Play it A Couple Times, Nah Mean..

    pz

    Reply to My Track:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1028614
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  13. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    the beginning humming and yeahs and the beat are dope

    this shit is just really dope really professional...i dont like R&B too much but this i could hear on the radio for sure...its really good nice track...u should have just thrown an emcee's verse in there somewhere anyway still

    return the favor please
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1028783
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  14. EdJames

    EdJames I'm Ed James Bitch

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    Uppin'

    Wow, thanks for all the great comments, really appreciate the support...
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  15. Gimme-A-Name

    Gimme-A-Name Im black.. ur not....and?

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    8/10, lovin the vibe. I remember when I first started hearin ya shit man. The mixing and production has stepped up so much. Haha, old times. Anyway man, shit sounds clean as hell. Keep the hotness flowin. Beat is aight, but you always had that gift to make any beat sound like hot fiyah.
    test
  16. EdJames

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    very uplifting style of track.... harmonies are all on point, got a very nice sound overall.....beat is really nice, mellow, but still upbeat, i like the harmonies on the verses....mixing could be done a bit better, but didn't sound bad at all on my system.....i'm feelin' this one.....return the favor......
    test
  20. EdJames

    EdJames I'm Ed James Bitch

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    Thanks man.

    Any more opinions?
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