EB: Round 2 - eyedeal vs. Ribonuclease

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  1. Plumber

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    WELCOME to Round 2 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory, now as of Round 2.

    VERSES are due SUNDAY, May 6th, 2007.

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  2. Ribo Nuke

    Ribo Nuke Audiodidact

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    Whats good dilly, how ever many you wanna go.
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  3. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  4. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    i guess i wont have any competition,
    until i face Oneduh in round 4

    Ayo,

    last week i lowered HotDog’s pride, and now when I stop you
    they’ll say i’m Korean, cuz I possess the ability to drop Nuke’s
    and trust me, u won’t rise in the tourney by bein’ a wack performer
    instead u’ll keep Lowe at the bottom.. like the Dodgers battin’ order
    Ribo? This guy wack, i’m really not concerned with this fake
    so i'ma just leave rib-eye black, without even burnin a steak
    this n!gga tries but he dies.. all because his punches sound weak
    & his eyes are on the Prize, but we still won’t see Ribbon round 3
    he knows he can’t win with them lines, half are bland wit no flow
    so i told ‘em to try blackmail.. & now he’s datin’ an african homo
    i’m already prepared to win this tourney, but i’m sealin’ this first
    because i’m quick to leave RN dead.. without even killin’ a Nurse
    now watch as knives rip ur chest up, then u’ll get clowned whore
    and kids’ll see One-Rib.. without you even makin’ it to round 4

    fuck outta here
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  5. Ribo Nuke

    Ribo Nuke Audiodidact

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    Ribonuclease vs Odin(eyedill) 12-16-2005
    "ya actin nervous, rappin with a lack of purpose,
    when eye-drops.. we all see clearly how wack his verse is!"

    Eyedill vs Hotdogvenderman Last week
    "i’m on a mission, & if u tried to destroy me
    u wouldn’t make an eye-drop, if u were a Visine employee"




    thought youd be better with time.. this guy got worse
    how you gonna use an eye drop line that I dropped first?
    Don't abide by my orders get a foot to the face
    its like im organizin the way you get put in ya place.
    Allright Eye, how does bein broke feel?
    dudes with million dollar briefcases screamin NO DEAL.
    ya fuckin stink - I can't believe it homie
    you got more Pitt stains than Angelina Jolie
    ya fat moms a cookie slut doin hands on things
    she should sew her pussy shut with her tampon strings
    gimme that brittle neck, I would love to choke you
    God said let there be light - one of your punches broke through
    ya bitch is a dude - we ain't impressed with ya wife
    you beat the Meat last week, and will for the rest of ya life
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  6. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    Eye, I saw most of these punches comin a mile away. the nuclear shit and droppin bombs lines were highly expected. Still, some of the lines were ok and hit though. thought u kinda took this like Ribo wasn't gonna show. Too much braggin talk about next rounds with no focus on makin this round's verse decent imo

    Ribo, damn man.... u had me lmao with that sew his mom pussy shut with tampon strings line. that was clearly the line of the week and definately the best line of this battle. Ur flow has always been solid with me and you had the better punches by far.


    Vote Ribo
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  7. warpath.

    warpath. New Member

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    eyedeal
    last week i lowered HotDog’s pride, and now when I stop you
    they’ll say i’m Korean, cuz I possess the ability to drop Nuke’s
    and trust me, u won’t rise in the tourney by bein’ a wack performer
    instead u’ll keep Lowe at the bottom.. like the Dodgers battin’ order

    this lil area was nice.... lines hit solid and the punches made sense.... that dodger line was the nicest.... i just liked that whole drop nuke's concept n shit.... good job..

    now watch as knives rip ur chest up, then u’ll get clowned whore
    and kids’ll see One-Rib.. without you even makin’ it to round 4
    ...nother nice line...assuming one meant oneduh... dunno though... if not, i take this back.... but if that's what you meant... dope line...

    cool verse... you had some decent lines and some fillers... altogether the verse was nice, those lines i quoted outweighted the bad shit.... some lines improperly worded too, but as i said.... wasn't a bad verse...

    ribo
    ya fuckin stink - I can't believe it homie
    you got more Pitt stains than Angelina Jolie
    ya fat moms a cookie slut doin hands on things
    she should sew her pussy shut with her tampon strings

    ...lol, this whole lil area was jokes.... tampon strings line was funny as fuck.... angelina jolie line i swear i've seen before, or saw somebody write it before.... dunno, not sayin you recycled... but it looks mad familiar.. either way.... nice job here...

    ya bitch is a dude - we ain't impressed with ya wife
    you beat the Meat last week, and will for the rest of ya life

    lol... this another line that was funny... suggesting that meat does stand for hotdog... then this a ill line.... if not, sorry for getting it wrong but this line just decent.... but if it's about who i think, then dope concept....

    this was a really close battle.... both had some lines i liked, some i didn't, but both came consistent... it's hard to decide, but i had to base my vote on who i just felt line for line had a better verse... and in the end i felt that person was eyedeal. so eyedeal gets the vote....

    pz......
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  8. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    word, & just so Ribo knows
    I recycled that eye-drop line last week
    I actually used that a few years ago lol

    i can find the thread if needed

    1-1, uppin'
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  9. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    i thought rib might take it but his verse wuz kinda bland...he had his opener which wuz coo...then fell off from there...tha jolie line looks familiar too...but wuteva...tha lines i liked from deal were nameplays...tha 1st 2 were cool...his closer wuz ok...but havin back to back lines wit tha same structure - 'without even'...that took away from tha hardness of tha closer...


    vote=eye
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  10. ~M Blaze~

    ~M Blaze~ ....grapes.....

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    nd trust me, u won’t rise in the tourney by bein’ a wack performer
    instead u’ll keep Lowe at the bottom.. like the Dodgers battin’ order
    Ribo? This guy wack, i’m really not concerned with this fake
    so i'ma just leave rib-eye black, without even burnin a steak

    VS

    thought youd be better with time.. this guy got worse
    how you gonna use an eye drop line that I dropped first?

    ya fuckin stink - I can't believe it homie
    you got more Pitt stains than Angelina Jolie


    This battle was close... I got sick of Eyedeals rib name plays, but a couple were good. I liked the Derek lowe punch, and im a sucker for sports punches.. it was my favorite.. I liked ribos short bars... they were worded nice... but some of the lines were just too simple...

    close but.. Vote: Eyedeal
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  11. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    i seriously shouldntve slept
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  12. Imperial

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    Dill started out good, dropped a lil, then finished strong... Ribo started out weak an not polished, then got better as it went along.. overall, i liked more of Dill's lines.. like a couple more

    this was kinda close, but i think dill got it by a little

    I was expectin ribo to make it far in this tourney, but i ono.. we'll see how this one turns out..

    VOTE: Eyedeal
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  13. Plumber

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    4-1 eyedeal.

    Upping for votes.
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  14. yo logic

    yo logic its globalken yall :)

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    are you the same eyedeal that used to go by the name Logic? The white dude who sounds like eminem and has dope audios?

    holler back
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  15. c@sp3r

    c@sp3r New Member

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    eyedeal

    last week i lowered HotDog’s pride, and now when I stop you
    they’ll say i’m Korean, cuz I possess the ability to drop Nuke’s
    cool.
    and trust me, u won’t rise in the tourney by bein’ a wack performer
    instead u’ll keep Lowe at the bottom.. like the Dodgers battin’ order
    haha, nice line.
    Ribo? This guy wack, i’m really not concerned with this fake
    so i'ma just leave rib-eye black, without even burnin a steak
    nah.. didn´t like this one.
    this n!gga tries but he dies.. all because his punches sound weak
    & his eyes are on the Prize, but we still won’t see Ribbon round 3
    cool wordplay.
    he knows he can’t win with them lines, half are bland wit no flow
    so i told ‘em to try blackmail.. & now he’s datin’ an african homo
    nah, badly worded.
    i’m already prepared to win this tourney, but i’m sealin’ this first
    because i’m quick to leave RN dead.. without even killin’ a Nurse
    haha, dope.
    now watch as knives rip ur chest up, then u’ll get clowned whore
    and kids’ll see One-Rib.. without you even makin’ it to round 4
    nice.


    ribo

    thought youd be better with time.. this guy got worse
    how you gonna use an eye drop line that I dropped first?
    aight.
    Don't abide by my orders get a foot to the face
    its like im organizin the way you get put in ya place.
    nah..
    Allright Eye, how does bein broke feel?
    dudes with million dollar briefcases screamin NO DEAL.
    badly worded.
    ya fuckin stink - I can't believe it homie
    you got more Pitt stains than Angelina Jolie
    aight.
    ya fat moms a cookie slut doin hands on things
    she should sew her pussy shut with her tampon strings
    nah.
    gimme that brittle neck, I would love to choke you
    God said let there be light - one of your punches broke through
    decent.
    ya bitch is a dude - we ain't impressed with ya wife
    you beat the Meat last week, and will for the rest of ya life
    haha, nice closer.

    this battle was alright. it was sort of close in a sense, but i think ribo didn´t really have a haymaker line. some cool shit, but he mostly didn´t say anything. eyedeal had an alright verse and the better lines and verse easily, so he gets my vote

    vote - eyedeal
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  16. Robby Digital

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    Vote: Eyedeal

    He Took This To Me. Close Battle, But Ribo Nuke Just Didn\'t Have Enough Good Lines. Lot Of Fillers In His Verse. When It Came To It, Eyedill Just Had The Harder Hitting Verse And Funnier Lines So He Gets The Vote
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  17. Plumber

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    eyedeal wins 6-1 and advances to Round 3.
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