EB: Round 2 - Charles vs. square

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  1. Plumber

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    WELCOME to Round 2 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory, now as of Round 2.

    VERSES are due SUNDAY, May 6th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
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  2. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    18, post early


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  3. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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  4. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    lets gooo
    the truth is, charles aint the real name of this wack herb
    he's been under guise all his life.. & over, & sideways, & backwards
    he's the king of the faggots -- speedy to give men blows
    he goes down pipes so fast his tongue signed a contract with nintendo
    but i love charlie's sister tho.. & u know she loves me long time
    we tried a long distance relationship.. and 12" worked out just right
    beating u aint worth any merit, & u losing is hardly new
    ask any vets around.. they'll tell u every vet has killed a charlie or two
    plus u broke & a cheapass jew. everyday ur life is do or die
    the only holiday getaway u can afford, is a resort to suicide
    but i'm a good guy, i'll help u out. lets meet up & see how the day goes
    we can paint the town red.. and u can do the other 6 colors of the rainbow
    how is this wack bitch famous in the past? he aint got that writers edge
    i cant understand ur climb to femme, like watching spiderman in french
    so c'mon -- how u gonna win? u best off cheating, & to hope to God
    & cut corners around square so much that i turn into an octagon
    bring on the name flips; square root, square one.. bitch, whatever u got
    cuz no matter how u flip a square u back where u started -- & still wack as fuck

    yea motherfucka.


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  5. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Yea. Im back, mahfucka.

    square never bin gangster, let alone pullin a tool
    only way he relate to a Korean killin is gettin bullied in school
    but u must be cool, u do get an audience when droppin free's
    its all ears.. cause the crowd usually chop theirs off & leave
    this queer meets dudes & his next thought is a wet foreskin
    square like fed ex, male scent always be there the next mornin
    no wonder, as a kid when mom n' pops wud meet with grownups
    the fun was centred around swingin' more than wii controllers
    - while u watched and recieved a boner, how do u go lower dude?
    when u like to see ya rents go down more than poor homeowners do
    its over, ya through - plumber be takin u out after this one
    & i aint talkin bout the one u broke ur sink on purpose to hit on
    u scared of the cusses u make,
    if i saw you in real life you claim there was a mistake
    the only time i'd hear 'sQ's me'.. is if i was in somebody's way
    we've covered ya gay, but you finna break me? Hardly..
    text wars like highschool, u never see a square takin charlie
    i read ya verse & woulda made fun at how weak ya clout was
    but that means playoffs for me & not for u.. like the last league at prowlers

    Now sleep.

    *Edited for Charles.
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  6. c@sp3r

    c@sp3r New Member

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    this is a really ill battle. one of the closest ones i´ve read since this tournament started. both were at each other´s throat, and both had some ill ass concepts. i enjoyed lines from each verse, and both were very consistent. it´s damn hard to make a decision here. so i´m just going to go with who i felt lines hit harder and were funnier, because consistency is obviously a factor in both verses, as is nice lines, flow, and everything else a verse needs. therefore,

    vote = charles

    ~1~
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  7. Sound

    Sound ya heard?

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    he's the king of the faggots -- speedy to give men blows
    he goes down pipes so fast his tongue signed a contract with nintendo
    beating u aint worth any merit, & u losing is hardly new
    ask any vets around.. they'll tell u every vet has killed a charlie or two

    v.

    this queer meets dudes & his next thought is a wet foreskin
    square like fed ex, male scent always be there the next mornin
    we've covered ya gay, but you finna break me? Hardly..
    text wars like highschool, u never see a square takin charlie


    battle really came down to who was more hungry. i think that Charlie attacked waaay more than square did. i mean some of the end lines just weren't rhymin well to me.. got/fuck, and french/edge is a strain.. Charles, definitely came at your opponent strong. not many stand out lines to me, but the ones i quoted were good. same for square.. but i think Charles just barely edged this.

    v/ Charles.
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  8. MakeShyft

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    the truth is, charles aint the real name of this wack herb
    he's been under guise all his life.. & over, & sideways, & backwards
    he's the king of the faggots -- speedy to give men blows
    he goes down pipes so fast his tongue signed a contract with nintendo
    but i love charlie's sister tho.. & u know she loves me long time
    we tried a long distance relationship.. and 12" worked out just right

    vs.

    but u must be cool, u do get an audience when droppin free's
    its all ears.. cause the crowd usually chop theirs off & leave
    no wonder, as a kid when mom n' pops wud meet with grownups
    the fun was centred around swingin' more than wii controllers
    - while u watched and recieved a boner, how do u go lower dude?
    when u like to see ya rents go down more than poor homeowners do
    this queer meets dudes & his next thought is a wet foreskin
    square like fed ex, male scent always be there the next mornin

    I felt that this was close. You both had some harsh lines.. but i think that charles took this one. His verse connected more, i liked his flips they were fresh. Again, realllly close, square had some dope quoteables, but charles did to.. and when it comes down to it consistancy with dope punches wins, so.

    V/ charles
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  9. Mr. Ecks

    Mr. Ecks I'll suck ya cock for free

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    Good battle. Both came hungry and went at each other in a vicious manner. Very enjoyable read and I liked both verses. Only thing I felt slacked was Charles wording. Some lines I got and understood and liked, but some I either didnt really get or I had to read over a few times to understand it. I liked how Square didnt overdo any Charles nameplay, but still had a solid verse. Like I told yall, both of you brought it to the table but I can only choose one and that will have to be the person who verse I liked more

    Vote: Square
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  10. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    Good verses from y'all. Mainly liked the first half of both. Nintendo, 12" and suicide lines were funny as hell from square. All ears was a helluva line from Charles. Mail scent was a sick concept, but thought it could've been pulled off a lot better. Overall I'd say I enjoyed square's verse more.

    Vote: square
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  11. Plumber

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    3-2 Charles.

    Upping for votes.
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  12. Urban-Legend

    Urban-Legend High on Stress

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    he's the king of the faggots -- speedy to give men blows
    he goes down pipes so fast his tongue signed a contract with nintendo
    beating u aint worth any merit, & u losing is hardly new
    ask any vets around.. they'll tell u every vet has killed a charlie or two

    vs.

    this queer meets dudes & his next thought is a wet foreskin
    square like fed ex, male scent always be there the next mornin
    we've covered ya gay, but you finna break me? Hardly..
    text wars like highschool, u never see a square takin charlie


    square came nice, w/ the exception of all the self-hype in his verse, that really killed it 4 me. Charlie came perrrty decent as well tho, he had the fed ex line that was nicely put down. but i thnk squares consistency took this for him, but try n stay away from the self hype.

    v-square
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  13. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    Both of you came out swinging and it was a good battle. I felt Charles had moer of an edge for the win. Squares verse read well but it seemed that in the end Charles was more hungry for the win

    vote-Charles
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  14. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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  15. Sirius Lee

    Sirius Lee u unno me!

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    Aww man this a really close battle and a fun read, both of you had some flaws but there was also some punches thrown that made me say "oh shit"


    Square:

    You got the right ideas and everything, really funny shit, but you reach a little too much with you punches. for instance your first bar, the "guise" line was a reach and seemed a little stretch. You had a few bar like this which kind of took away from ya dopeness of your verse cause you had some real hot lines like "vacation/resort" and the "12"" line.. those two lines to me were by far the best lines of the battle.. Flow was suspect but overall a solid to good verse


    Charles:

    Square had slightly better disses but you definitely were the sharper of the two. one thing i wasnt really feelin from either of you were the reaches when you two would take parts of a word and try to play off that. its makes you have to go back read it again which kind of takes away from the quality. Your flow was good at times and you were a little more consistant than Square



    I expected this to be close and was.. Square had great ideas but just wasnt as sharp as Charles this time around so my vote goes the Charles


    v/ Charles
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  16. Plumber

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    5-3 Charles.

    Upping for votes.
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  17. kungfugrip

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    square

    the truth is, charles aint the real name of this wack herb
    he's been under guise all his life.. & over, & sideways, & backwards
    but i love charlie's sister tho.. & u know she loves me long time
    we tried a long distance relationship.. and 12" worked out just right
    beating u aint worth any merit, & u losing is hardly new
    ask any vets around.. they'll tell u every vet has killed a charlie or two
    plus u broke & a cheapass jew. everyday ur life is do or die
    the only holiday getaway u can afford, is a resort to suicide
    but i'm a good guy, i'll help u out. lets meet up & see how the day goes
    we can paint the town red.. and u can do the other 6 colors of the rainbow


    Charles

    this queer meets dudes & his next thought is a wet foreskin
    square like fed ex, male scent always be there the next mornin
    its over, ya through - plumber be takin u out after this one
    & i aint talkin bout the one u broke ur sink on purpose to hit on


    ehh iono.. i think square took this hands down. square's nintendo punch was
    gay, so was his spiderman in french line. but nothing really stood out from
    charles.. those two lines i quoted were DOPE. but nothing else really hit for
    me.

    v/square.
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  18. Globalken

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    vote - Charles

    This was a close battle. A dope one too both came to show with good solid verses that u could tell took time to craft. Square was one some dope shit. But I just felt Charles more. His first half was flames mostly. lemme see. yeah the first three punches were all real dope. close one but I gotta give it to Charlie. His verse is the one I preferred. Peace.
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  19. Charles

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  20. Sonny Dimebags

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    Square-the truth is, charles aint the real name of this wack herb
    he's been under guise all his life.. & over, & sideways, & backwards
    plus u broke & a cheapass jew. everyday ur life is do or die
    the only holiday getaway u can afford, is a resort to suicide
    so c'mon -- how u gonna win? u best off cheating, & to hope to God
    & cut corners around square so much that i turn into an octagon

    Charles-but u must be cool, u do get an audience when droppin free's
    its all ears.. cause the crowd usually chop theirs off & leave
    this queer meets dudes & his next thought is a wet foreskin
    square like fed ex, male scent always be there the next mornin...muahahahah hott
    its over, ya through - plumber be takin u out after this one
    & i aint talkin bout the one u broke ur sink on purpose to hit on....lolol

    This battle was pretty ill both cats came with some piff i enjoyed reading this shit . Square came wit some nice bars but Charles verse was a better read for me he had some lines that slayed and were some nice concepts so he gets my vote

    Vote-Charles
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