EB: Round 1 - Knucklez! vs. K. Nettz

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  1. Plumber

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    RapMusic.com/RBL Presents:

    Text Wars I (Text Tournament)

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    Plumber (J-Nyce)
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    WELCOME to Round 1 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS are not mandatory, but are welcome.

    VERSES are due FRIDAY, April 28th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
    - NO EXTENSIONS will be allowed unless a case of emergency.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    THE FOLLOWING NON-COMPETITORS OF THE JUDGING PANEL MAY VOTE:
    1. ResiduaL
    2. DaTrusHurtz
    3. Mic Booth
    4. Inkwell
    5. Oz

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1041360

    Have a great battle.
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  2. Knucklez!

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  3. K Nettz

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  4. K Nettz

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    i was thinkin about usin my new style, but you aint fuckin with that
    cuz we know before the match starts...knucklez'll crack
    ...and start gettin worried,... the boy is afraid
    shit,..
    the most exciting thing about him is the exclamation point in his name
    but im used to seein those when voters quotin my verses
    like DAMN!...SHIT! HOLY FUCK!... excuse em for cursin...
    nigga my shits money in the bank, this loser is WORTHLESS
    this bitch'll end up going bankrupt, losin his purses...
    talkin about.."i was losin on purpose"...
    man niggas like you the type to like cruisin in hearses

    some 10 minute shit im goin out tonite and didnt want to no show
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  5. Plumber

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    You do have until tomorrow, midnight West Coast time, 3:00 A.M East Coast time to post, and that's 10 lines. It must be 14.

    If you have to do something tonight and can't show by that time tomorrow, then yeah post now. But if not, I'd just write something like you're regularly battling without rushing.
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  6. Knucklez!

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    nyce? why you give this chitlin a chance duke
    bit on bboys so much, he started stealin there dance moves
    i don't know who told u you could fuck with the one ta
    revolutionize the style that fathered niggahs like OneDuh
    took stay in school literally..you made sure of it
    since your job is the name of the guy who sponsored this tournament
    got fired for foolishness on some G-unit shit
    for holdin a MOP so long and not knowin what to do with it
    if you come to my hometown feeling like you worthy
    you'll have the kidd on the netts like i'm passing in new jersey
    what i'm pondering is what makes you think you're astonishing
    they only say holy fuck!..when describing your catholic priest fondlings
    now its k netts vs knucklez! but before the night will end
    it'll be first round exit vs the text war finalist....
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  7. Plumber

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    Too late to edit post. This battle is ready for votes.
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  8. Knowl 723

    Knowl 723 New Member

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    Knettz verse was short, which gave'ev less punches to throw. It started out well, I like the opening "knucklez'll crack" line, then kept it consistent with the "point in his name" line and followed suite with the "SHIT! HOLY FUCK!" line. All 3 bars were solid and affective punches, nothing special, but solid. Then the verse fell completely off with the "losin purses" and "cruisin hearses" lines. They were weak attempts that weren't even delivered correctly. Overall, like I said a short verse gives you less punches to throw, so that means the punches that you do throw, ALL have to hit hard. I'm not sure if you did that.

    Knucklez opening was cool, I like the "••••••" line, the "ONeDuh" line was just okay, didn't do anything to hurt the verse. The next 2 bars, the were okay, again nothing special, but they didn't hurt your verse either. The jason kidd line was nice, thought you could've ended it better though. The "Priest fonddlings" line was ncie but it made me wonder if you were feeding off his verse which I thought wasn't allowed, but thats not my call. The last bar, like most of your verse, nothing special but didn't hurt you either.

    Vote - Knucklez
    Your verse was filled with a lot of average lines, but it was consistent and never really fell off. Knettz's verse started off well, and fell off kind of hard, and since it was short, there wasn't room for a come back.
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  9. Plumber

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    1-0 Knucklez!

    Upping for votes.
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  10. K Nettz

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    good verse fam...i shouldnt have slept
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  11. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    knucklez had tha better verse...nett started off strong but then died out quick...if knucklez doesn't lose for feedin than hes tha obvious winner...


    vote=knucklez
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  12. te_ora

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    knettz seemed half-assed. ! point was a decent play off dudes name but i wasn't feeling nething else. verse had a nice flo, lacked nice punches

    knucklez opener was cool. plumber and mop were solid too. holy fuck didn't wrk cuz u only jus called him a plumber lol, i wouldn't have felt it eitha way actually. i liked the swag u had on ya closer, ignoring the fact it didn't rhyme, but it's not a quotable typa line.

    v/ knucklez comprehensively.
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  13. Robby Digital

    Robby Digital New Member

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    Vote = Knucklez!

    K. Nettz Obviously Didn\'t Drop To His Full Potential.. As Cassiu$ Dude Used To Be Pretty Nice, Too Bad He Didn\'t Drop His Best In This Or This Could\'ve Been A Better Battle.. But Knucklez Took This With Ease. He Had A Better Verse Obviously And Much Better Lines. So Knucklez! Gets The Win
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  14. DiC GeTs GuLLy

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    K, some cool lines in there, but it's easy to see u didn't put much into this. it flowed pretty cool. opener was nice. really thought you could spent a few more minutes to make this better. Uv obviously got some skills and this coulda been better

    Knucklez, this was a good verse. most of the lines hit and the flow was there all the way thru. I don't know about the oneduh line, guess that's a personal I don't know the history behind.

    Vote Knuck
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  15. Sonny Reddz

    Sonny Reddz New Member

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    i don't know who told u you could fuck with the one ta
    revolutionize the style that fathered niggahs like OneDuh
    took stay in school literally..you made sure of it
    since your job is the name of the guy who sponsored this tournament
    got fired for foolishness on some G-unit shit
    for holdin a MOP so long and not knowin what to do with it
    if you come to my hometown feeling like you worthy
    you'll have the kidd on the netts like i'm passing in new jersey
    what i'm pondering is what makes you think you're astonishing
    they only say holy fuck!..when describing your catholic priest fondlings



    vs
    i was thinkin about usin my new style, but you aint fuckin with that
    cuz we know before the match starts...knucklez'll crack
    ...and start gettin worried,... the boy is afraid
    shit,..
    the most exciting thing about him is the exclamation point in his name






    Knucks crushed Netttz, tho knuckles did feed wit the HOLY FUCK line.

    v/Knuckles if hes not DQ'd
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  16. Plumber

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    6-0 Knucklez!

    Upping for votes.
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  17. Ribo Nuke

    Ribo Nuke Audiodidact

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    K Nettz - Only line I really liked was your opener, the rest was rushed and just didn't really connect at all.

    Knuckles - Ok this was decent, just a bunch of decent punches nothin really that good. Overall you pulled this off because it was a bit more consistnant.

    Vote - Knucklez
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  18. Plumber

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    Knucklez! wins 7-0 and advances to Round 2.
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