EB: Round 1 - Knowl O'Brien vs. Charles

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  1. Plumber

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    WELCOME to Round 1 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS are not mandatory, but are welcome.

    VERSES are due FRIDAY, April 28th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
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    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

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  2. Knowl 723

    Knowl 723 New Member

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    I'll drop a quick 14...


    Cali is active
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  3. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Time to kick ass and chew bubble gum.. and im alllll outta gum
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  4. Knowl 723

    Knowl 723 New Member

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    The name's Knowl, not O'brien

    Shove my verse down ya throat so you can throw up the best
    Verse ever out ya mouth, or spoke with your breath
    I'm Jesus with the flow or the pen
    Walk on water? I stomp skulls, yea I'm over ya head
    I'm hyped, why? cause Charles got his mouth on my pipeline
    Where I pump nice lines, dope to the dome, like sniffin up white lines
    Put up triple-doubles like Jason Kidd, whoop ya ass thrice times
    Sir Charles funna fall, but he ain't racing no old white guy
    Throw ya body down, leave ya soul floatin through the climate
    Find it, beat it with a cloud, then kick it off the air like Don Imus
    Chuck I read ya old shit, your names as creative as your performance
    When I'm done I'll have ya mom in her cubicle, taking down ya portrait
    Knowl speak carnage, you kiss "ya boo's" face, I skeet on it
    So sick when I print, I put Nyquil in my ink cartridge
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  5. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    The kid is back.


    to get in the b boys hall of fame heads been killin dudes
    while U wrote OVER 1700 words on why you think u shud be in it too
    that shit is a bitch move - whats a gay stripper gon' do to me?
    we all seen a KO in the cage in spandex, like watchin ufc
    i won hundreds of battles, so its right that i spank you
    u just a drop in the ocean .. with bricks tied to ya ankles
    snitch on the street, gay in the pen, fags on some sick sick
    dudes be sittin on grass knowles like havin a picknick
    everyone KNEW i'd win, the result'll soon get to ya
    i had the advance before the shit came out like bootleggers
    stop writin, you an OLD head so ya spits are borin
    im kickin knowledge back to the stone age, like richard dawkins
    yeah yeah, the old days in text were just glorius
    we'll never beat 99' .. kinda like you in this tournemant

    Bye, bye.
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  6. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    Knowles:

    Throw ya body down, leave ya soul floatin through the climate
    Find it, beat it with a cloud, then kick it off the air like Don Imus
    Chuck I read ya old shit, your names as creative as your performance
    When I'm done I'll have ya mom in her cubicle, taking down ya portrait
    Knowl speak carnage, you kiss "ya boo's" face, I skeet on it
    So sick when I print, I put Nyquil in my ink cartridge

    Charles:

    that shit is a bitch move - whats a gay stripper gon' do to me?
    we all seen a KO in the cage in spandex, like watchin ufc

    snitch on the street, gay in the pen, fags on some sick sick
    dudes be sittin on grass knowles like havin a picknick
    ^(could've been worded better though)

    stop writin, you an OLD head so ya spits are borin
    im kickin knowledge back to the stone age, like richard dawkins
    yeah yeah, the old days in text were just glorius
    we'll never beat 99' .. kinda like you in this tournemant

    Good battles Negroes:
    Aight, i think Charles got this one for me. I'm a guy that likes personals and name play, and Charles had more of 'em (or just better ones). I just found Knowles stuff basic, like the white lines joint, but I did like the Don Imus one. In the end, I just went with the one I enjoyed more.


    v=Charles
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  7. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    decent battle here... i was expectin more from charles, he used to be dope.. i never heard of knowl, but he impressed me wit the first half of his verse.. i think his disses were harder an worded better than Charles'.. Charles had some good lines too, but nothin too spectacular. I was hopin to see some classic shit from him, but i gotta give it to Knowl, i liked his style more.

    VOTE: Knowl
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  8. Plumber

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    1-1 tied.

    Upping for votes.
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  9. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    i got charles taking it. he had the swaggy, more wit and his lines hit harder overall. knowl didnt come bad but some of that shit was on like a flex than more so a battle. still not bad either way, more consistent was charles.

    v-charles

    everyone KNEW i'd win, the result'll soon get to ya
    i had the advance before the shit came out like bootleggers

    solid flip on a used concept

    yeah yeah, the old days in text were just glorius
    we'll never beat 99' .. kinda like you in this tournemant

    iight

    the ufc line coulda been better.

    knowl had

    the don imus which was solid for another already deadened concept. closer was cool on some braggin shit.
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  10. Knowl 723

    Knowl 723 New Member

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  11. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    i'm not sure about first dudes verse, had a killa flow and read awesome, but that was like a mixtape verse, with some simple punches, and some oder concepts that wouldn't be that effective in text. like to hear it though...lol good shit


    charles

    to get in the b boys hall of fame heads been killin dudes
    while U wrote OVER 1700 words on why you think u shud be in it too
    LOL really?
    that shit is a bitch move - whats a gay stripper gon' do to me?
    we all seen a KO in the cage in spandex, like watchin ufc

    stop writin, you an OLD head so ya spits are borin
    im kickin knowledge back to the stone age, like richard dawkins
    yeah yeah, the old days in text were just glorius
    we'll never beat 99' .. kinda like you in this tournemant

    cool, ya concepts were a bit more advanced, some shit that didn't connect
    but pretty solid verse,

    charles just takes this with a few more concepts

    Vote-Charles
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  12. warpath.

    warpath. New Member

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    knowl o'brien
    Put up triple-doubles like Jason Kidd, whoop ya ass thrice times
    Sir Charles funna fall, but he ain't racing no old white guy
    Throw ya body down, leave ya soul floatin through the climate
    Find it, beat it with a cloud, then kick it off the air like Don Imus

    you had a cool verse.. some shit i was diggin, but alot of it i really wasnt...dunno, it just wasn't as polished as a verse should be..you were lacking in some areas, and even these punches alone that i chose to quote aren't really that good...they were cool, don't get me wrong that's why i put em, but they just didn't have that much of an impact in my opinion...dunno, but yea...decent verse...


    charles
    to get in the b boys hall of fame heads been killin dudes
    while U wrote OVER 1700 words on why you think u shud be in it too

    that shit is a bitch move - whats a gay stripper gon' do to me?
    we all seen a KO in the cage in spandex, like watchin ufc

    everyone KNEW i'd win, the result'll soon get to ya
    i had the advance before the shit came out like bootleggers

    cool verse...i liked that first line, cool personal lol.. K.O line was nice, and the 3rd line was just creative.. didn't hit majorly hard, but the effect it had was just the amount of creativity it had in it... cool verse...some shit i didn't really feel, like the last line, but shit like this i felt was hitting hard enough to credit you for a victory.. props...

    so i feel charles takes this battle.. just for a better verse, and more harder hitting lines.. good showing by both..

    pz...
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  13. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    JUDGE VOTE

    Shove my verse down ya throat so you can throw up the best
    Verse ever out ya mouth, or spoke with your breath
    U wanna open strong man... weak opener
    I'm Jesus with the flow or the pen
    Walk on water? I stomp skulls, yea I'm over ya head
    ehh, i'm not a fan of self-glory n' over ya head lines are played
    I'm hyped, why? cause Charles got his mouth on my pipeline
    Where I pump nice lines, dope to the dome, like sniffin up white lines
    Flows nice, but the wording for the punch is all messed up, not feelin' this
    Put up triple-doubles like Jason Kidd, whoop ya ass thrice times
    Sir Charles funna fall, but he ain't racing no old white guy
    Really just a statement hypin' yaself again, there ain't a diss to this
    Throw ya body down, leave ya soul floatin through the climate
    Find it, beat it with a cloud, then kick it off the air like Don Imus
    Seen a bunch of Don Imus lines lately.. this was aight at best, but again the wording is indirect n' not hitting
    Chuck I read ya old shit, your names as creative as your performance
    When I'm done I'll have ya mom in her cubicle, taking down ya portrait
    ehh, this was too basic n' comes off as kinda played
    Knowl speak carnage, you kiss "ya boo's" face, I skeet on it
    So sick when I print, I put Nyquil in my ink cartridge
    lol, funny wordplay here, but its not a diss to him

    vs.

    to get in the b boys hall of fame heads been killin dudes
    while U wrote OVER 1700 words on why you think u shud be in it too
    This coulda been better if u mixed wit with the personal, but good personal and punch
    that shit is a bitch move - whats a gay stripper gon' do to me?
    we all seen a KO in the cage in spandex, like watchin ufc
    lol, the wording on this coulda been better, but cool nameplay
    i won hundreds of battles, so its right that i spank you
    u just a drop in the ocean .. with bricks tied to ya ankles
    punch is kinda basic, but imagerye is good n' alright punch
    snitch on the street, gay in the pen, fags on some sick sick
    dudes be sittin on grass knowles like havin a picknick
    lol, another nice nameplay, funny shit
    everyone KNEW i'd win, the result'll soon get to ya
    i had the advance before the shit came out like bootleggers
    nah, this was too simple n' wasn't even really a punch
    stop writin, you an OLD head so ya spits are borin
    im kickin knowledge back to the stone age, like richard dawkins
    I think 2 nameplays was enough... wasn't feelin' this one as much as the other 2
    yeah yeah, the old days in text were just glorius
    we'll never beat 99' .. kinda like you in this tournemant
    lol nice closer... simple, but harsh, nice punch

    Okay, this wasn't even close. Knowles had a really nice flow goin', but in terms of punches, all he had was a bunch of self-glory and some poorly worded statements. Charles, on the other hand, u came pretty decent my man. Wasn't feelin' the bootletters n' kickin' knowledge shit, but had some nice stuff, especially ur closer. I think u got this easy.

    Vote - Charles
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  14. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    Charles had the better overall best, the picknick & ender sealed it vs. Knowles who had the portrait line which was kool & ender was worded weird

    vote-Charles
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  15. Knucklez!

    Knucklez! New Member

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    the charles old man line was all knowls had to me, and charles pretty much stayed consistent enough to beat out that one line throughout his verse. knowls might have taken the w if he didnt go mixtape verse on us.

    anyways vote = charles
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  16. Robby Digital

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    Vote = Knowl O\'brien

    Just Felt His Verse Was Better. The Old Charles Line Was Killer, Lol It Made Me Laugh. Charles Had A Nice Verse Too, Made This Battle Really Evenly Matched. But I Just Felt Knowl\'s Shit More. Charles Style And Wording Was A Little Harder To Get Into As Well. His Pronunciation Of Some Rhymes Just Didn\'t Work. Knowl Beat Him In This One. Good Battle Though, Both Came And Showed And Were Matched Nicely, But Knowl Won In The End
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  17. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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  18. Plumber

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    8-2 Charles.

    Upping for votes.
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  19. Plumber

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    Charles wins 8-2 and advances to Round 2.
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