EB: Round 1 - Fyatrail vs. Ribonuclease

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  1. Plumber

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    WELCOME to Round 1 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS are not mandatory, but are welcome.

    VERSES are due FRIDAY, April 28th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
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  2. Fyatrail

    Fyatrail New Member

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    Checkin in

    I'll lay down the maximum
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  3. Ribo Nuke

    Ribo Nuke Audiodidact

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  4. Fyatrail

    Fyatrail New Member

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    Heres my 20

    Ribonuclease you got no use in replyin in this thread/
    cuzz i'll break you down in cells like prisoners cryin in their beds/
    sleepers betta wake-up cuzz i brought the alarm/
    cuzz i'll be de-Ribin Nuke like takin apart bodies of bombs/
    I am da rhyme god so listen when you hear me say/
    i'll take rib out add'em to losers, he a bitch anyways/
    goin against Fyatrail you gon wish you went ta hell/
    you aint bangin hammers you think you 50 wen you bend ya nails/
    probably make an album about gettin a manicure ten times/
    even with a row of male ghost writers you still got women lines/
    bunch of puzzy bars voters will mistake em fo tampons/
    take a woman out lika date so it'll be a 'wo' when this 'man' gone/
    you thought you was gon win this lets see how look now/
    lay Rib on his grill like i'm the chef at his cook out/
    you better off in a 'nasty face pageant' listen buddy/
    only time you'd get 'first' prize is when they 'Ribbon uglies'/
    you get it Ribon u c lease amount of votes/
    you low so when i cold reign i'm on top like a mount of snow/
    if you had 'one song' 'floatin in the mainstream' u wuldn't get a 'single sale'(sail)/
    my styles the A.I.D.S virus and your just a single cell/

    *Ribonuclease is a cell
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  5. Fyatrail

    Fyatrail New Member

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  6. Ribo Nuke

    Ribo Nuke Audiodidact

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    Aight Fya, how does bein stupid feel?
    your whole career qualifies as a bloopers reel.
    kid ya whole crew is bitchs and sluts
    I bought the new trail mix and it was missin the nuts
    your not on my level and you nowhere near measure
    Ill stomp ya ass down at the docks - thats pier pressure
    not a person in the tourny thinks this bitch is real
    I can match anything fya does with flint and steel
    fuckin with me, youll see this man bleed
    stress an get hurt - left in the dirt like plant seeds
    stampede cuz we all knowin ya need to die
    a kilometer couldn't hold that many feet inside
    don't try to kick it dunny - cuz you'll get bruce lee'd
    Im from a new breed and checkin his verse is just a newb read
    can't cut it - and this careless kid knows
    I walked all over trail without wearin a pair a timbos
    ya battles don't show new material - just new lies..
    I call each bar of yours Raphael - cuz they get two sighs
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  7. Plumber

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    Upping for votes.
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  8. Imperial

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    damn.. I think Ribo will turn out to be a big threat in this tourney, i liked just about every single line in his verse.. Fya seemed kinda plain, nothin was worded too nicely, nothin hit hard, nothin made me laugh.. Ribo started out wit a funny line, an stayed consistent wit good punches.. nice style, you could actually say some'a that shit in a battle.. i liked the wordplay.

    VOTE: Ribonuclease
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  9. Plumber

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    1-0 Ribo Nuke.

    Upping for votes.
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  10. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    There was nothing really eye opening in this battle.
    Both verses were kinda dull and lacked creativity.
    Based on what I read Rib takes is because he came a lil more harder than Fya.

    vote-Rib
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  11. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    Fya, you started out ok and I thought it would get better, but it kinda fell off towards the end. Ur first few lines were coo though. had some personals wit some ok flow

    Ribo, shit flowed nicely and had some coo lines that I liked. personals were nice with the trail mix and shit. good shit man.

    Vote Ribo
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  12. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    Ribonuclease you got no use in replyin in this thread/
    cuzz i'll break you down in cells like prisoners cryin in their beds/
    you better off in a 'nasty face pageant' listen buddy/
    only time you'd get 'first' prize is when they 'Ribbon uglies'/

    vs.

    Aight Fya, how does bein stupid feel?
    your whole career qualifies as a bloopers reel.
    kid ya whole crew is bitchs and sluts
    I bought the new trail mix and it was missin the nuts
    not a person in the tourny thinks this bitch is real
    I can match anything fya does with flint and steel
    ya battles don't show new material - just new lies..
    I call each bar of yours Raphael - cuz they get two sighs

    ribo wins.
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  13. Plumber

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    4-0 Ribonuclease.

    Upping for votes.
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  14. Mount

    Mount New Member

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    ..fya - dude your only semi-decent line was the opener and that was a stretch, rest wasn't consistant at all and weak


    .. ribo - some funny, hard hitting stuff in your verse. a bit lacking in creativity at times, but a pretty solid verse



    ..vote - ribonuclease for a better verse as well as punches
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  15. TheGunslinger

    TheGunslinger New Member

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    Fyatrail- not too bad, some of ya concepts could have hit harder. you had some pretty nice lines in your verse but the inconsistency brought down the value of it.

    Ribo- i really didnt like your opener but then you brought the heat. very consistent had some nice punches.

    Ribo wins this match up.
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  16. Plumber

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    Ribonuclease wins 6-0 and advances to Round 2.
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