EB: Round 1 - eyedeal vs. HotDogVendorMan

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  1. Plumber

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    WELCOME to Round 1 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS are not mandatory, but are welcome.

    VERSES are due FRIDAY, April 28th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
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  2. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    ya know ya need me need me neeed me

    saaaaaaay whaaaaaaaaaaaat?

    12-14
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  3. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  4. Phenomenonymous

    Phenomenonymous picture perfect...

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    in the rules it says verses are minimum of 14 lines doods
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  5. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    well, wtf, 14 then lol
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  6. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    Eyedeal?
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    Listen,
    I'm puttin on a clinic, so watch deal fold under pressure
    & u WILL show up...on ur back covered by a sheet n' rolled on a stretcher
    Vital Signs? shit the force of the teck might assist u
    by straighting out all the ups n downs that livin life gives u
    see I doubt ya hard E, kid u'd never bust a skull for chips
    so for being a lyin dog on these streets, ima run u over bitch
    & with his hefty girlfriend, id rather stay with porn
    cuz fuckin her's such a physical challenge
    ...that she comes with Double Dare waiver forms
    so try to come hard, though ur not the man to beat
    & I'll prove ur not game..or else ud already be on my mantel piece
    call me fat, i already had ya moms& sister exposin the panties
    but if u wanna fucking name call...I'll list those 2 hoes in ya family
    I got this locked. lets be honest kid im raw & done playin
    so ur shot @ round 2 just went belly up like me sunbathing

    out.
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  7. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    ayo,

    it's $150 for the tourney winner, man listen
    i’ll just pay J-Nyce $500, so next round I get some competition
    i’m on a mission, & if u tried to destroy me
    u wouldn’t make an eye-drop, if u were a Visine employee
    u fuckin’ annoy me, u know my verses don't need 'em
    but urs must have subliminal messages..
    cuz they tell me ya wack every time i read 'em
    i’m fareal, J-Nyce put u in a death situation
    one so nasty.. the Saw producers demand another demonstration
    plus ya game’s shot, with lines that attract murder
    & it’s ironic ya name’s Hot..
    cuz after this u’re on the back burner
    is this slut for real? u can’t make it to round 2 with luck or skill
    u can comprise ya way through.. but u still won’t cut a Deal
    you’ll lose cuz you didn’t concentrate, you gotta release ya whit
    but don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. that car was a piece of shit
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  8. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    edited for spelling.. holla with votes
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  9. Plumber

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    Upping for votes.
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  10. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    Decent battle fellas.

    HotDog

    You started promising but then you ended with a lot of filler. You had some okay disses butit could've been better


    Eye

    Your verse was okay but it read like you were rushing to complete it. It could've been better as well. You had a couple played out things in there but it was enough to clutch the win.

    vote- Eyedeal
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  11. yo logic

    yo logic its globalken yall :)

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    master peace must be readin a different battle. Hot Dog came nasty as fuck. his verse was hard. the first 6 bars were straight fire. all of it was pretty much fire actually. the one before the closer was dope as hell too.

    Eye came alright. Seemed like he didnt put as much work into his verse as Hot Dog did. More of a quick jawn. Had some straight lines in there though. The focus line was funny.

    I liked both verses but I gotta go with Hot Dog. He was consistently tight and more innovative. Dope verse Dog. Good luck in the tourny my man. never heard of you before but you got lyrics.

    Good battle fellas

    vote - Hot Dog Vendor Man
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  12. te_ora

    te_ora New Member

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    hotdogs opener was ight, but i wasn't feeling the next 2. double waiver was ight too, woulda been cool w/ betta wording. prove ur not game was illl. closing two were also ight.


    eyedeals back burner was actually a pretty nice nameplay. focus also wasn't too bad. but i wasn't really liking nething else. shit like subliminal messages had potential as a concept. but otha stuff like the nameplay off yaself & ur opener jus weren't working.


    v/ hotdog
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  13. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    Hot Dog, nice shit. the punches started hittin nicely midway thru and stayed consistent til the end. Flow was cool and the double dare line was nice. Cool shit man.

    Deal, you had some cool shit in urs too. Had a nonchelant tone to it like you really didn't feel u needed to try much to beat this guy. Think maybe u shoulda tried harder cuz some of ur punches didn't do much. the saw producers was ok, but nothin hit harder than that in urs.

    line of the battle is that double dare line from hot dog

    his verse had more and hit harder

    Vote hotdog
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  14. Robby Digital

    Robby Digital New Member

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    Vote = Eyedeal

    Just A Much Better Verse. Concepts Were Fresher And I Enjoyed His Lines More. Hotdog Had A Cool Verse And His Lines Were Decent As Well, And The Battle Was Actually Kinda Close, But Eyedeal Won It. Both Didnt Really Have Any Outstanding Ish, But When It Came Wire To Wire Eyedeal Just Ran With I Suppose. Whichever Of You Make Next Round, I Strongly Suggest You Focus On Your Punchlines, But Yea Eyedeal Won
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  15. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    & with his hefty girlfriend, id rather stay with porn
    cuz fuckin her's such a physical challenge
    ...that she comes with Double Dare waiver forms
    so try to come hard, though ur not the man to beat
    & I'll prove ur not game..or else ud already be on my mantel piece
    call me fat, i already had ya moms& sister exposin the panties
    but if u wanna fucking name call...I'll list those 2 hoes in ya family

    vs.

    i’m on a mission, & if u tried to destroy me
    u wouldn’t make an eye-drop, if u were a Visine employee
    u fuckin’ annoy me, u know my verses don't need 'em
    but urs must have subliminal messages..
    cuz they tell me ya wack every time i read 'em
    plus ya game’s shot, with lines that attract murder
    & it’s ironic ya name’s Hot..
    cuz after this u’re on the back burner
    you’ll lose cuz you didn’t concentrate, you gotta release ya whit
    but don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. that car was a piece of shit

    vote=eye
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  16. Sonny Reddz

    Sonny Reddz New Member

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    both verses were decent. HDVM, I expected more from you, maybe u slept on the cat. Eyedeal gets my vote for more witty and clever lines, plus he hit harder

    v/ eye
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  17. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Eyedeal got this. Hotdogvendorman was aiight but real basic. wasnt feelin that run this bitch over line, the sunbathing line or that body bag line. Shit was just basic dissin. Eyedeal had that saw line, eyedrop line, cut a deal. Wasnt really close. Vote - EYEDEAL.
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  18. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  19. Plumber

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    5-3 eyedeal.

    Upping for votes.
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  20. Mr. Ecks

    Mr. Ecks I'll suck ya cock for free

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    Vote - Eyedill

    Just felt he had a better verse and better lines. Hotdog came cool as well and wasnt exactly outshined, but I just dont feel he had enough to walk away with a win here. Both need to step their game up for round 2, but from this stance I see eyedill winning this battle by a close margin.

    Good luck to whomever advances

    - ECKS
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