East Round 2: 2. Doc Richards vs 7. Savir

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  1. TRAP.

    TRAP. i'm soo old school.

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    The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations

    Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks.

    Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
    No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
    Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

    -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
    -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

    -You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
    in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
    deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
    drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

    -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
    Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
    for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
    line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
    my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


    -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


    -NO 1 Sentence Voting


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  2. Savir

    Savir ...

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    In..


    Goodluck.
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  3. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    lets make it pic


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  4. Savir

    Savir ...

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    I expected this, but nah...

    1) What hasn't been said about your pic?
    2) I don't have one. No camera phone, no digital shit, no scanner.

    :(
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  5. Savir

    Savir ...

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    nvm. I'll try....but I'll do it later.
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  6. Savir

    Savir ...

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    gl




    Dem's girl is mine....this faggot just sits on the shelf
    the bitch'll bore one helluva seed....while you fuckin bore everyone else
    I'll send em to hell, the old vet'll get served up
    cuz by the age of your concepts we can tell how mature verse sucked
    & he's a disappointment, i'll leave frowns on this scared bitch
    with shot's at chagrin, that'll leave you a lot more than embarrassed
    what's with the pic battles? you know this loser is done with
    when he shows his face online....more than he does in public
    Fucka gets bruised in fights, he's the sore loser type
    you bout to get raped worse than when you faced Booga at Hype
    I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
    & throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars




    shieet...
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  7. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    how to NOT flip a line

    ima bash his fucking skull, watch me blaze this fucka
    have em run and hide in the caves that I left in his facial structure- Savir last week

    have prospectors diggin out the caves left in his chest- Inkwell 6 months ago





    fact is, you predictable, i know what comes with this geek..
    stretched lines....played punches....and a vote from nique


    it's serious
    sev's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
    after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey
    i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
    sevir's shit'll bring out the kid in you
    ...like abortion clinics
    the voice in ya head gassin you is trickin in the fight
    it'll go off when i shut the door on ya ass
    like the refridgerator light
    reppin RapBattles cause no other site wants him
    only raised the people's eyebrows...
    when ya shit hit rock bottom
    Stuck on this text shit...your the type we'll never see blow
    & you had your shot at greatness...then you opted to reload
    the differences in our styles...yo it's showin miles
    precision punches aim rings around ya eyes
    similar to your voting style



    anyone who says the three-line style compromises flow...just dont vote


    word;round 3;word
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  8. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    v/ Doc Richards

    just came across smoother..id say it was pretty close content-wise, but demik
    came wittier, the closer was nice & a few others.

    Sevir had some personals, but werent creative enough nor excecuted well-enough to be like dope..
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  9. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
    & throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars

    LOL. nice. the pic thing was cool too. thought the rest was blah though, lots of played concepts.

    it's serious
    sev's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
    after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey

    lmao, this was pretty sick. rock bottom was cool too.

    v-Demik

    savir didnt bring it like last round, if he did he wouldve gotten the W prolly. he had two line i liked and demik had 2lines i liked as well, but i felt demik was more consistent. he had other decent shit and savir had a lot of that blah shit i wasnt felin. u know ur my boy, but i felt u got the L.
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  10. Zo Ad Dog

    Zo Ad Dog Guest

    lol @ How to not flip a line.

    Vote Demik Richards

    Just an overall better verse. Quit using that fucking reload line tho, I hate it.
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  11. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
    & throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars

    cool line, only line demik really had that was dope


    this also proves super's a fuckin idiot, cuz that rock bottom line was terrible





    doc had a KILLER beginning

    it's serious
    sev's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
    after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey
    i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
    sevir's shit'll bring out the kid in you
    ...like abortion clinics

    and this

    Stuck on this text shit...your the type we'll never see blow
    & you had your shot at greatness...then you opted to reload
    the differences in our styles...yo it's showin miles
    precision punches aim rings around ya eyes
    similar to your voting style

    decent ending



    fridge line was utter garbage, so was the rock bottom line


    but i got doc wit the upset, think demik coasted cuz his quotables were lackin, but beyond that, he just didnt CLOWN doc
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  12. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    ok wait


    Doc Richards= Demik
    Savir-= Savir



    so its 4-0 me
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  13. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    headless voting was so horrible its sad. how does he not know demik is doc when they are in the same crew?

    what's with the pic battles? you know this loser is done with
    when he shows his face online....more than he does in public
    Fucka gets bruised in fights, he's the sore loser type
    you bout to get raped worse than when you faced Booga at Hype
    I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
    & throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars

    savir had these lines here that were ok the rest was bullshit


    i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
    sevir's shit'll bring out the kid in you
    ...like abortion clinics

    this was line of the battle

    Stuck on this text shit...your the type we'll never see blow
    & you had your shot at greatness...then you opted to reload
    the differences in our styles...yo it's showin miles
    precision punches aim rings around ya eyes
    similar to your voting style

    this capped off an ok verse, but the rest was wack. closer was ironic

    close battle but the winner here is demik. he just had a better verse i believe
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  14. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    I'll send em to hell, the old vet'll get served up
    cuz by the age of your concepts we can tell how mature verse sucked
    & he's a disappointment, i'll leave frowns on this scared bitch
    with shot's at chagrin, that'll leave you a lot more than embarrassed
    I'll rip his arm off with slices cuz I cripple whores
    & throw em into stonewall's that'll rival Jackson's during Civil Wars


    vs

    it's serious
    sev's done and'll sooner fall than hurt me
    after i expos his chest like a montreal jersey
    i cant stand ya verse, or the childish shit u forcin in it
    sevir's shit'll bring out the kid in you
    ...like abortion clinics


    Tough... some personals from both, but savir doesn't have a voting ring, so that ones kinda gay. anyway, demik probably had the nicest lines, but also the worst ones.... savir had more consistently fresh lines, not bad wordplay.

    v. savir

    tight battle though...
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  15. Yo Razah

    Yo Razah Feels super old.

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    Savir had the stone wall line, rest was blah..

    Demik had this

    fact is, you predictable, i know what comes with this geek..
    stretched lines....played punches....and a vote from nique


    & the abortion line


    vDemik
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  16. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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    -Looks at Demiks line & his voting ring & then Razah's hate vote.

    V/Savir.

    You guys might as well put Demik in the Finals. Dickriding faggots.
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  17. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    savir only had 1 good line...demik had more...he wins...


    vote=demik

    1Ne
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  18. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    this is a tragedy.

    demik won..but to say that most of sevir's verse was blah

    ...u must be fucking crazy

    im not voting..its pointless..
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  19. God Speed.

    God Speed. New Member

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    im gonna pretend all i seeis demik won
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  20. Savir

    Savir ...

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    Good battle Doc...read your verse and thought it would be close, but
    I was already losing before the verses were up.
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