East: 7. Ish Bish kanish Vs 10. Residual

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  1. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    7.Ish Bish kanish Vs 10.Residual

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  2. Residual

    Residual I'm Gay

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    i'm gone have a hard time doin' this.
    i'll try and make it


    probably this:

    10. RUTHLESS MIC:
    Relate your rap style to a restrained maniac.
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  3. Residual

    Residual I'm Gay

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    here, so you won't win by a no show
    24 lines then

    10. RUTHLESS MIC:
    Relate your rap style to a restrained maniac.

    First,here's a message for some: my rap style's wretched in blood
    Since my multis flow off the tongue like flesh on the gums
    See I'm earnest kids, my fiyah verses gone burn you bitch
    But Res don't 'straight' jacket, he got them turns and twists
    I herb the kids then blast an' maul in hits with acid claws
    After I take the W then bounce...off them padded walls
    I'm a maniac of pillars with some boilin' blood for filler...
    Res is fuckin' sick, he's a cereal, toast and orange juice killer
    It's fuckin' dark in here, my hands are tied an' burnin' from...
    The urn of one I turned to cut an' then drank her virgin blood
    See I murder faggot foes, those transvestites I hurt an' maul
    Then take those girly men an' 'dress' their wounds in skirts an' bras
    I wreck with more flow an' the gore foes until their tore yo
    Ya'll kids want 'unexpected twists', then check ya fuckin' torso
    More so, I alleviate pain, my flowin is dope an' raps in chains
    I ain't a basket case, but I'll slash ya face an' place it in a basket case
    I smash an' hate, Res pumps the crowd w/sprays that buck the cloud
    SEe I'm crazy now 'cause even my mind left, right, up and down
    Don't even duck the sound, geeks come off it, I'm a fiendish prophet
    Who slices the meat right off kids 'til they bleed like leaky faucets
    I take a knife to the man, fuck all you kids, I'm righteous an' grand
    I robbed an' killed you, then took ya modem, got ya life in my hands
    That's why I laugh ya know, they never caught 9/11's terrorists though
    I'm restrained, but who says you can't crash planes from remote control?

    There, quick 24 for ya.
    Bye.
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  4. genitalwartz

    genitalwartz New Member

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    word i was bout to post.

    keyed the shit...its like 2 times the amount of yours, lmao. my bad.


    6. PROPHETIONAL:
    doing good with yourself, whether business or hustle (one in the same anyways) you return to your home town and neighborhood after 8 years but it's all gone and different now... still a hood, but not the same hood you remembered. row homes were tore down to build apartment complexes. the mini mart is now a pizza place, the pizza place is now a bar. the bar is a car lot. shit like that.
    ->one thing that is still there is the basketball courts. you see knuckleheads hangin out there just like you and your peeps used to back in the day. so you grab a ball and go to shoot around for old time sake. suddenly amongst the new faces you recognize some of them as old friends. however your old friends are junkies though, buying shit off the young cats that seemingly took the hood over... what happens, how do you react?


    A successful career, respectful, accountin’ for clients…
    And my lifestyle must amount to the highest…
    A mountain of dimes with, a pile of pennies and bills…
    But I can’t get my mind off my town, even though many get killed…
    Descending and ill, my mental was beginning to shift…
    Everything I looked at was either Spinning or flipped…
    A sickening pit I called my room caused me ache and impatience…
    And the president of my company told me to take a vacation…
    My fam ain’t with me, so damn that city…
    But something makes me want to return to it, and the land ain’t pretty…
    So I called up an old friend, to see if I could stop off…
    And his daughter answered the phone; to tell me he was shot…
    Whatever, I wasn’t worried, we hadn’t talked in years…
    I was as happy as ever, I didn’t even drop a tear…
    I asked to go visit their home as I was sittin’ alone…
    I felt I had the perfect life, yet I was missin’ a soul…
    So I packed my things in a suitcase with my gat and bling…
    Cracked my knucks, even threw in a wooden bat to swing…

    Imagine heading back to a home where white chalk is the impression…
    A million faces gazing on the sidewalk with no expression…
    You condemn me cuz you’ve got a crutch for every toe…
    And I don’t have any crutches let alone know where to go…
    It’s like a war fought continuous and the sides are getting deeper…
    The gang violence forced the crypt keeper to stab the grim reaper…
    Waterfalls of steamy slime splash through the curb’s gutter…
    And with no freedom of speech to speak out, the word’s stutter…
    The metro busses stop for no one, and they run more fucked…
    Trains don’t work cuz the conductor’s duct tape the doors shut…
    I’d call a cab but someone’s sleepin’ in the phone booth…
    And that’s there home too, as they lay covered in boxes…
    I’m too scared to move him; I can see a shotgun under his pockets…
    There’s a farmer’s harvest unemployment line in the back street…
    And a main part of town to view families doin’ crappy…
    And where’s the crack been, this whole city’s a freak show…
    Where everyone from junkies to losers to the creeps go…
    There’s no way out, just hope for dough, and you’ve gotta cope alone…
    Cuz there’s no hospital’s here.. Just endless broken homes…
    The street’s are filled with the dusty December air…
    Nothin’ is where I remember, except violence everywhere…
    But the courts stayed put, the sport’s played good…
    Ain’t took a shot in a few years.. My forced game should…
    Still be alright, but not the NBA image’s self…
    The only place this place resembles, is no different from hell…
    I’ve got a game goin’ quickly, plain, old and simply…
    But I hear among the voices a few know my name with me…

    Old friends are no more, just schoolmate’s and addicts…
    As I see weapons drawn and I knew its entrapment…
    The red’s hit the blue’s, til the blue’s became bloody…
    And the red’s didn’t know to help or keep gunning…
    And I got mixed up in this all, I don’t know how it happened…
    All I saw was a random look at me, and then the clappin’…
    But I recognized the face, the guy was straight frontin’…
    It was my cousin.. Damn, I knew I forgot something…
    My fam was left in this dump, as I kept livin’ lush…
    And thought to myself, I was at best just a punk…

    Trapped by fate, I smiled, and blew a kiss to the sky…
    Wonderin’ why, I ever came back to this place…

    holla@me in round 2.
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  5. Residual

    Residual I'm Gay

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    geezus you won, that's a lot.

    holla.
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  6. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Up over Ns's
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  7. W1CKED

    W1CKED . . of Gods & Earths

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    ha@"Res is fuckin' sick, he's a cereal, toast and orange juice killer"
    lol@"Ya'll kids want 'unexpected twists', then check ya fuckin' torso"

    This wasnt much of a story. It was more like random ramblings. Nothing standout flow-wise or rhyme-wise. You reapeated yourself a couple times. It was decent.

    Ish:
    Nothing standout flow-wise or rhyme-wise. The story was pretty nice though. I felt like i could stop reading at any time during Res's and not miss anything but i felt like i had to read yours or i might miss something good. The end was pretty hot. You just have a better verse. Ni8ce showing.

    Vote: Ish

    -W1
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  8. V dot Acular

    V dot Acular New Member

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    im going with scenario

    told a better story, res was too simplistic for me, i dont know if he thought no-show, but it was just mediocre to me
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  9. Residual

    Residual I'm Gay

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    pretty much but ur a moron if you saw no...'flow' in there.

    good verse IBK, holla
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  10. Atheist

    Atheist Storyteller

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    Vote: Ish.


    Residual was screwed ever since he decided on doing that topic. Was just a very bad idea, because it didn't allow any room for twists or anything - it was more of a self promotion verse. Sorry.
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  11. bigKEN

    bigKEN Hoosier Daddy??

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    vote- Ish

    just a more intriguing piece, very carefully plotted and laid out

    Res had a sick piece in my opinion for the topic chosen. But he couldn't really build much off of that, so a good story just killed his verse.
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  12. genitalwartz

    genitalwartz New Member

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  13. genitalwartz

    genitalwartz New Member

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    elevator man:

    top floor please.
    :)
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  14. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    Vote Ish...

    He had the more complete story...

    Residual's story fit his description of a rapper crazed but Ish had the complete package...
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  15. Gummo

    Gummo New Member

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    vote: ish

    res. your story/topic writing.. just didnt appeal to me in this piece.. seemed more like you were tryin to battle someone or someshit wrather tan story tell.. ish on the other hadnd, did a nice job writing on his piece was nice put together and put it to the topic very nicely... look forward to reading more.. nice job tho none the less... kee it up
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  16. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    i liked both... res comes abstract an cool
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  17. jweaksfromdapike

    jweaksfromdapike The Pain and the Poetry

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    vote=ish...

    just put together a better story with his topic chosen..the flow was on point along with a great job with imagery and emotion...res..i actually liked that verse..that it was ill...and your flow was crazy...but your topic really took away from it i thought..just didnt have what it took to beat ish..
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  18. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    ISH vs JOWELZ is set!
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