East: 4. AlphaOmni vs 13. Shadows Edge

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  1. TRAP.

    TRAP. i'm soo old school.

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    The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations

    Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks.

    Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
    No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
    Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

    -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
    -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

    -You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
    in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
    deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
    drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

    -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
    Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
    for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
    line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
    my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


    -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


    -NO 1 Sentence Voting


    MOD AIM CONTACTS:
    -Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell
    -TRAP. - jaysus chrLst
    -demik - akademik416
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  2. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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  3. AlphaOmni

    AlphaOmni Registered Drug User

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  4. AlphaOmni

    AlphaOmni Registered Drug User

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    You shouldn't even be here Shadows, my flow alone will beat you...


    Rivers inkin the dope quotes… sinkin this choked hoax
    Left drowned in his own sorrow for thinkin his hope floats

    intro

    Not a chance, there’s a real pussy look to ya verses in battles
    And we can all see the bitch inside, still lurkin in Shadows

    punch

    I’m quick to sever ya steeze, a deadly predator clever indeed
    Alpha could make an ‘Atheist prey’ …competitors better believe

    bragging

    Ya can’t get more from a rhyme, I’ll leave ya forced to resign
    For being big-headed with a brain mass just a portion of mine

    punch

    Rivers callin ya bluff, and in battle that’ll cost you a crutch
    Cuz you can’t expect to get props if you’re soft to the touch

    punch

    He can’t match me, my style is nicely flowed and its doper
    This runner-up is losing hands-down, like he folded in poker

    bragging/punch

    Last time we battled was childs play… you surely remember
    Funny how Edge hasn’t yet grown into a worthy contender

    punch

    I’m raw with rhyme, you won’t get ahead with appallin lines
    …Since Shadows have always been known to just, ‘fall behind’

    wordplay

    You got a flawed design, plus ya rappin’s more than sad
    Rivers got a leg-up more times than a Captain Morgan’s ad

    bragging

    You’ve wasted life as a small fry, so now you’ll die as it too…
    Face it Edge, even your own PUNCHES stack higher than you

    punch

    Every line you got is like your face, and it caught me blind kid
    Cuz in the same sense neither one has a single thought behind it

    punch

    I got the right maneuvers, kid you only spit hype and rumors
    We battled once before… but Edge is leaving here twice the loser

    bragging/closer


    JUST to clarify for you kids. it's obvious you guys don't understand the process behind writing a well-rounded verse. ya know just cuz a verse has a masterful flow, DOES NOT MEAN IT SACRIFICES CONTENT INSTANTLY. you can have multis flow and punches. its not just about punches.
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  5. Young Lac

    Young Lac New Member

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    flow was nasty on that verse...
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  6. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    beef aside..

    pretty good shit.
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  7. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    when did we ever battle?

    ao's plan is simple, think he'd just show n win,
    had one RBL battle just to shake the rust off... that voting ring
    best quit gloating kid, cuz i see right through you
    such a fucking wi.gger, even the whites of his eyes are rockin fubu
    kid i'll school you, its part of the journey
    so learn youre lesson.... every other fucking person in the tourney
    ya shit's worn, g... and when the voter's judge this
    ya best hope ya flow beats me, cuz it wont be your fucking punches
    see my hunch is, i could beat you if i had just one thrown
    cuz you can call my lines wack.... & finally be bad to the bone
    i more than hold my own, they lied to ya, punk
    cuz fuck taking a back seat to me, this bitch is tied up in the trunk
    all of ya lines are junk, you're barely a factor
    so when i drop, best settle for second cuz only a minute after
    & you're ugly beyong laughter, with ease your wasted
    cuz I just stab you in the back, as would anyone that Ceasar face, kid
    your disgracing... money, job... fam wish you had this
    bitch, your tax bracket got more upset than fucking march madness
    it's beyond sadness, y'all should know this
    river deposits in banks are so small, it takes millions of years to notice
    road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
    alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds
    another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
    cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses
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  8. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    Hmm... I edited because it replaced "wi.gger" ... I hope that's not an issue. That would be a gay reason to end a good match. Vote up people.
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  9. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    Best two lines IMO

    Alpha

    Not a chance, there’s a real pussy look to ya verses in battles
    And we can all see the bitch inside, still lurkin in Shadows

    Every line you got is like your face, and it caught me blind kid
    Cuz in the same sense neither one has a single thought behind it

    Nice to me...you had some okay lines some better then the others..those I thought were your better two...

    Shadows Edge

    road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
    alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds

    another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
    cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses

    Those were your best lines but the starts of your verse to me was terrible...didnt have anything worth while in it.. u picked up at the end and the tax upset/march madness line was okay..but no fire..

    My vote alphaomni IMO
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  10. Tang.

    Tang. The One & Only.

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    this battle is flames


    some really off the hook shit in here




    not voting, sorry.
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  11. Savir

    Savir ...

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    Alpha

    Every line you got is like your face, and it caught me blind kid
    Cuz in the same sense neither one has a single thought behind it


    vs.


    shadows.edge

    kid i'll school you, its part of the journey
    so learn youre lesson.... every other fucking person in the tourney
    ya shit's worn, g... and when the voter's judge this
    ya best hope ya flow beats me, cuz it wont be your fucking punches
    & you're ugly beyong laughter, with ease your wasted
    cuz I just stab you in the back, as would anyone that Ceasar face, kid
    your disgracing... money, job... fam wish you had this
    bitch, your tax bracket got more upset than fucking march madness
    it's beyond sadness, y'all should know this
    river deposits in banks are so small, it takes millions of years to notice
    road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
    alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds
    another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
    cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses



    vote-shadowsedge with the straight merking. What's with people giving
    a damn about TEXT flow?....Punches win...
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  12. Pav_

    Pav_ New Member

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    Alpha

    Not a chance, there’s a real pussy look to ya verses in battles
    And we can all see the bitch inside, still lurkin in Shadows
    Every line you got is like your face, and it caught me blind kid
    Cuz in the same sense neither one has a single thought behind it

    Shadows

    ya shit's worn, g... and when the voter's judge this
    ya best hope ya flow beats me, cuz it wont be your fucking punches
    i more than hold my own, they lied to ya, punk
    cuz fuck taking a back seat to me, this bitch is tied up in the trunk
    & you're ugly beyong laughter, with ease your wasted
    cuz I just stab you in the back, as would anyone that Ceasar face, kid
    road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
    alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds
    another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
    cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses

    Vote Shadows
    He had the better punches, alpha had better flow though
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  13. AlphaOmni

    AlphaOmni Registered Drug User

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    ok, on to the real votes now
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  14. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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    ^Word. Because you really lost. Flow will never win battles. I mean, your flow was dope, but your punches were decent to none. I think you focused on your flow more than your punches. Anyway.


    Alpha:
    Not a chance, there’s a real pussy look to ya verses in battles
    And we can all see the bitch inside, still lurkin in Shadows
    I’m raw with rhyme, you won’t get ahead with appallin lines
    …Since Shadows have always been known to just, ‘fall behind’

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    Shadows:
    ao's plan is simple, think he'd just show n win,
    had one RBL battle just to shake the rust off... that voting ring
    i more than hold my own, they lied to ya, punk
    cuz fuck taking a back seat to me, this bitch is tied up in the trunk
    & you're ugly beyong laughter, with ease your wasted
    cuz I just stab you in the back, as would anyone that Ceasar face, kid
    road to the finals is hard, but it's greater now
    alpha's bound to give me trouble.... by voting against me in the later rounds
    another hater now, leave ya rep with wounds to nurse
    cuz i look forwords to the finals, this bitch looks forwords in other verses

    Vote-Shadows.

    He came with wit, wordplay, creativity, and fresher concepts, but Shadows, don't turn into a Feeble and overdo the wordplay. Nice verse though.

    Good battle, but I still think Shadows took it quite easily.
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  15. Sonz1

    Sonz1 Registration Please

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    I don't think these voters caught most of Alpha's punches...but I would say Shadow still this....his last few lines were pretty hard..
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  16. Young Lac

    Young Lac New Member

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    i gotta say i thought alpha had this, cause i didnt really think this shadow cat was anyone, dont really know that he is anyone now..but he won...

    alpha had a sick flow tho..punches just lacked, and that hands down line was playyyyyed as fuck...

    meh@ a lot of the forced lines in both verses...
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  17. Mr. Skull

    Mr. Skull G.T.P.

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    Alpha - Dope flow, content suffered a bit because of it but good overall verse

    Shadows Edge - Flow not as strong as Alpha's, but your content was better than his. Stronger punches so you win...


    Vote - Shadows Edge
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  18. PMX_And1

    PMX_And1 New Member

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    Alpha had a better flow, hands down, it was sick
    but it really comes down to the punches and thats where shadow came out on top
    good battle though

    vote - Shadows Edge
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  19. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    v- Shadows Edge

    ya shit's worn, g... and when the voter's judge this
    ya best hope ya flow beats me, cuz it wont be your fucking punches

    ^lol..
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  20. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    vote-shadows.....wow...kid surprised me ....came dope...rivers i think under estimated him...pz
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