East: 3. Shock Vs 14. Mic Typson

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  1. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    3.Shock Vs 14.Mic Typson

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  2. Name User:?

    Name User:? is supercoo

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    seen lol

    might go with the gay guy topic lool......
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  3. Name User:?

    Name User:? is supercoo

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    they're looking at me, omg omg toodles come here
    ooooh it's cooking up here, drawn foolishly near
    oopsy it's me, but i just wanna grrrrrrowl
    oh how will this turn out i'm on tha prrrrrowl
    i shiver and cowar i wanna get u in bed.......
    be tied up and wrecked, from behind or give head
    listen, come close tell no-1 it's room twenty one
    grab my shaft and i'll teach u a lesson son
    u'd better run cos i'm all hot and flustered
    thoughts are running so am i to the door number
    knock knock, he's coming eeeew that was dirty
    hi there?, gimme a kiss let's get flirty.....
    quickly i just wanna wrap you in silk *ouch*
    now thats a nice shaft i think i'll get down.....
    and now im turned on quickly get it in me
    out of my mouth and into my ring piece......
    oopsy it doesnt fit me? thats soooo not nice
    quickly get the KY and rub on both sides.....
    aaaaah thats right thrust as u like......
    ooooh look in the mirror i can watch u inside.....
    my bum holes sooo how do you say this.....
    not virgin like, it's been played with.......
    omg he's now coming, i'll now focus on tight guys
    n who wulda thot i was talkin bout lotus n white eyez



    lol i got alll yucky..... and bored......
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  4. genitalwartz

    genitalwartz New Member

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    sick.

    literally.
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  5. JOWELZ

    JOWELZ Bah Fangooly Da Bear

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    Kinda started off like a gay Ludacris...

    I couldn't finish... I'll try and read it when Shock drops...

    but ewwwwww....

    *punches whoever made this topic*
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  6. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    ROFLMAO

    LMFAO
    -dead-

    EWWWWW

    LOL@ish
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  7. Neggativity

    Neggativity shock aka solution

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    your in cartoon land .. expand

    I sit infront of the tv .. watchin bugs bunny.. ya..
    thinkin that if life was animated .. it'd be so much funnier..
    the clock ticks and a few more episodes pass..
    imagine if my schoolfriends were like taz & instead of my class..
    i eat the rest of my food.. throw the dish in the sink..
    put my shoes on and finish my drink..
    leave the house .. as i stutter n say..
    'all in my life i've never experienced this utter dismay'
    houses, grass, sky and the people .. all fail to be real..
    i ask myself what the fuckin hell is the deal..
    all of a sudden sumtihn passes me at the speed of light..
    then it turns and approaches me .. i scream in freight..
    how cna it be .. roadrunner stoppin by for conversation..
    "hi im roadrunner, welcome to the cartoon nation"..
    he directs me on my path .. to the warner brothers tower..
    "your lucky, this wouldnt of happenned if u'd been born another hour"..
    i make my way to the wb office .. passin porky pie..
    then i turn the corner n' silvestre caught my eye..
    leave my past .. even part with my wife..
    to be apart of this world, thats larger than life..
    i reach the wb towers, bugs bunny's inside..
    atfirst actin wierd, he begins runnin to hide..
    then he appears behind me ..starts to explain my purpose..
    informs me that without this world my brain is worthless..
    "you've entered are world, this is what will happen within, so listen"
    he explains the objective and we begin the mission

    The mission

    we must search for the ancient scroll..
    form years ago , which the matrons stole..
    its located accross the mountains and seas..
    skies and land .. fountains and trees..
    bugs hands me a postcard, i fill out and send my wife..
    me n the bunny .. best friends for life..
    i soon get tired, rest on a bench for a minute..
    bugs soons informs that this is when the adventures beginnin..
    driven by determination and the fact that i must'nt fail..
    me n bugs go thru so much we could write a book of tails..
    stayin strong together, overcomin the tests of enemies..
    after each obstacle is complete it becomes one of my best of memories..
    we battle dragons .. huge tigers n blizzards..
    overcomin the bizarre climate and blizzards..
    until eventually we reach our destiny..
    there stands the evil witch , cookin a recipe..
    bugs makes himself useful, causes distractions..
    while im the main guy, i get all of the action..
    the witch fails as she tries to attack bugs bunny with knives..
    i grab the scroll and we make a run for our lives..
    the witch looks for her transport, she doesnt snatch it too quick..
    on my way out i complete the mission and snap her broomstick..
    we run and run and run like it was a 100 metre race..
    until we reach a place that keeps us safe..
    we read thru .. borin .. borin .. borin.. what a waste of a trip..
    i wish death upon the retard who created this shit..
    i laugh but please .. a 3 yrd old could write this crap with ease..
    this shits so borin id rather read poetyr in japanese..
    i search the page for the author of this bullshit..
    no doub t in my mind .. ofcourse he's a dull bitch..
    whats the identity of this gay loser .. fuck gay this jerk sounds worse..
    ahhh there we go..
    Written by Name User, rstl tournie, 1st round verse.
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  8. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    ok, ummm, to totally different verses, but im going with shock, user was really outclassed here, i know the topics were pretty much off setting, but shock gave me something to be impressed with, flow was nice, and he told an ill story, i dont if user didn't care and just wanted to try his wits and drop some horrid humor, but this was a lopsided match, it's a tourney, and the est man moves on

    vote-shock
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  9. prophetional

    prophetional hokey muh-fuckin' pokey

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    vote=shock.

    user wasn't very vivid in his verse (thank God). kinda vague, shock had a more complete verse.... like stated above, simply outclassed here.
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  10. Gummo

    Gummo New Member

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    i have to agree... user could have made his verse a whollleeee lot more vivid., but that would have just made people question his sexual preference.. LOL.. not to bad of a job tho.. the comedy in it was ok.. could have been better, and the diss at the end was just.. blah... didnt like.. shock.. pretty avg verse.. i liked the creativity in it for the most part, but i def feel you could ahve put more into it.. i think you slacked when you read his verse.. i dunno... both could have used a lot more details.. not bad tho..

    vote: shock
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  11. JOWELZ

    JOWELZ Bah Fangooly Da Bear

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    I gotta agree with the masses...

    Thankfully... This vote can count or not count... I couldn't finish the first one... It was funny, but not really something I wanted to read... The twist was coo, I peeped the end...

    Nice shit Shock... Outweighed his verse like a fat man on a see saw...

    vote- Shock
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  12. Neggativity

    Neggativity shock aka solution

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    yeah i brought what i had to .. keyed .. id sya no longer than 20 mins

    thnx for the votes
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  13. KI l la Phofilla

    KI l la Phofilla New Member

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    faggot

    white's dope
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  14. Neggativity

    Neggativity shock aka solution

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    dont clog my thread newbie
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  15. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    it was a mistake to use the gay topic. it was writin ok, but i didnt enjoy reading it.

    shock's was writin better, plus had a more enjoyable topic.

    vote shock

    good luck to whoever wins
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  16. W1CKED

    W1CKED . . of Gods & Earths

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    Name, wtf?
    Man, that shit was nothin short of gay porn.
    The topic was just....Just.....Wrong.
    Nothing special about flow or rhymes.
    It was just disgusting, dog...
    I feel violated...

    Shock, dope topic choice.
    "nothing stand out about the flow or rhymes.
    how cna it be .. roadrunner stoppin by for conversation..
    "hi im roadrunner, welcome to the cartoon nation".."
    Wtf?
    The roadrunner doesn't talk...

    I like how you built the story.
    I was expecting a twist at the end, but I thought it would be something else. Nice surprise.
    Overall, a better verse.

    vote: shock
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  17. Neggativity

    Neggativity shock aka solution

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  18. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    time check
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  19. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Up over Ns's
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  20. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    mic totally put himself behind the eightball with that shit ass topic, shock told a better story with more vivid imagery and a better flow, just totally blanked him here


    *goes along with the crowd*

    Vote= Shock


    *runs off to hookups dodging tomatoes*
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