East: 2. Doc Richards vs 15. Oliver Thenet

Discussion in 'RBL TOP 20' started by TRAP., Oct 19, 2004.

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  1. TRAP.

    TRAP. i'm soo old school.

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    The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations

    Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks.

    Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
    No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
    Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

    -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
    -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

    -You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
    in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
    deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
    drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

    -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
    Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
    for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
    line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
    my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


    -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


    -NO 1 Sentence Voting


    MOD AIM CONTACTS:
    -Formal Logic - Mrwriteswell
    -TRAP. - jaysus chrLst
    -demik - akademik416
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  2. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    lets make you write
    no pics and no recycling
    say 16?
    g'luck and lets post by wednesday or thursday
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  3. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    i say 20, with pic, no recycling


    cool?
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  4. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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  5. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    shit i didnt know we had a whole extra week
    get me the pic
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  6. Text45

    Text45 Jock 9mm.

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    ok

    14 lines


    with pic


    no recycling




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  7. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    if this is demik, remove the pic cuz you never sent yours
    and if that link is a pic of you, i cant see it cuz im banned on there anyways
    sooooo
    14 lines...no pic and im dropping in like an hour or so
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  8. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    dude fuck that



    im usin your pic


    mines there


    so get one of your buddies to get it for you
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  9. Pav_

    Pav_ New Member

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    Lmao you look like a pussy.. a white version of superdooper

    Fat clock head faggot
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  10. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    hey, remember when i beat you on your own site?
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  11. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    gimme like 10 extra mins dem....cuz i took a nap.
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  12. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    not due till 3 am est



    im just writing now too yo
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  13. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    good shit, cuz them other leagues had a niggga rushin...i forget its more time here
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  14. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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  15. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    right off the bat, im not accepting votes from nique, savir, eternalpath or pav

    fucka 411hype aim ring



    im beating him now, for the 6th time in a row.....


    youre lines are long enough to stretch around ruben studdard twice- Deon aka Oliver_Thenet

    his pic
    http://www.411 hype.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=2709

    Aimin for your kind, straight up, I blast gays
    my lines stretch twice around ruben?
    they still cant meet your fat ass half way
    and any punch you attempt is a poor zing..
    the kid aint even likin ya shit...
    he just cant beleive you ate the whole thing...
    you got bigger problems, so dont even bother kid
    for instance, you got the kid captive..
    but how the HELL are you gonna swallow him?!?
    serious though you all outta place...
    skull the size of a house...
    two-car garage in the middle of ya face
    for his text verses..no cheers
    but you a medical miracle
    i never seen someone carry a fetus between their ears..
    you already lost, dont matter what i say
    only reason i looked at ya pic twice?
    cause ya lips look like a fuckin pussy sideways...
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  16. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    demik then


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    demik now

    demmy you trynna be as big as me now?


    unwitty, not cheered by many, he'll lose and pout to all
    got one fan....so he took it home and mounted it on the wall
    im huge and its no surprise, but yur a whole other demik
    cuz yur rockin that cap, to advertise where you'll soon be living
    your one ugly kid, and what actually makes it worse
    is the fact that you look better, when the fuckin pic is blurred
    get tough and get smacked down, if your good then i'll ask how
    cuz your brightest idea'll fade, once the lights off in the background
    women stay dissing this bitch, he gets pissed and throws fits
    cuz they only get close...
    ..... when giving tips on maintain'n his feminine lips
    poor as shit, get a job loser.....cuz im passing out
    not cuz yur bringing heat
    but cuz your lack of it has you wearin a coat in the house
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  17. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    pav the only 411 head outta them all...and i dont like him...never heard of eternal and nique and savir are rb heads...i dont even fucks with them

    if they vote...which is unlikely......im acceptin.,....or we wont have any ,jay cee, or inkwell aim votes from you demmy.....i know yur style...why would i aim?

    edit...didt mean sup
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  18. Super.

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    "Aimin for your kind, straight up, I blast gays
    my lines stretch twice around ruben?
    they still cant meet your fat ass half way

    for his text verses..no cheers
    but you a medical miracle
    i never seen someone carry a fetus between their ears.."

    lol nice duke. couldve prolly done way more shit with his pic, but whatever. only was feeling those 2 bars.


    "im huge and its no surprise, but yur a whole other demik
    cuz yur rockin that cap, to advertise where you'll soon be living"

    that was pretty sick. line of the battle in my opinion, but that's pretty much it. LOL@demiks new pic though. rotf


    v-Demik
    both couldve done way better with the pics, but demik had more bars i was feelin. deon had the line of the battle, but nothin else to back it up. good battle.
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  19. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    Demik:
    the Ruben line was a great flip on his line...strong pic diss and good wording...throughout you showed some creativity, but i wish you would have gotten over the size issue...still, your word choice was very good and you flipped the size issue well...liked the two car garage line, fetus between the ears line...only lines i didn't like were the eating line and the closer...flow could have been a little tighter, and wording had some spots that would have been nicer if touched up...but still, a strong verse.

    Oliver Thenet:
    i realize it deals with his pic, but that intro was played...how many times are we going to use the fan line?...anyway, i thought that you had a couple decent lines...i liked the concept you were going with for the blurry pic line, but i thought it should have been more witty, and more thoughtout...i also liked the hat line...the closer was well worded, but i've seen the concept several times before in pic battles...flow was pretty strong...i thought the verse had an overall lack of wittiness...and, if you're not going to be witty, you should have been more harsh, which you definitely weren't, by barely dissing HIS appearance...still, decent.

    vote=Demik
    he was just more clever
    and more harsh, as well
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  20. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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