EAST: 2. Black Beard and Moms -VS- InsaneVillian and Infinite Truth

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  1. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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  2. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    im here...

    but how the hell did street poet and shrug survive?...

    lol...

    if its cuz of the recycle then profit c and urizen should still be in too...

    and thas real talk...
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  3. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    I'm in too and I just made a mistake. it's been corrected
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  4. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    Fyi - Everyone Will Have To Vote In League Matches As Well Because There Are Only 2 Tournament Matches. Most Of You Are In The League So Drop Those Links Here As Well. Each Team Will Be Responsible For Voting In 4 Matches.
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  5. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    BOOM!!!

    A Ghetto Story

    Part 1

    Ghetto Life- by IT


    it was a normal afternoon of cardboard forts & blacktop games
    played within a secret garden hidden behind the padlocked chains.
    my name is king. i’m eight years old, & my life is spent in the ghetto.
    god isn’t a name you hear much on my block- most are friends of the devil.
    constant violence... no spot of silence is ever seen round here.
    a city lost in crisis, often nights will end with blood shed & tears.
    but this... this is something else- i really don’t know what to make of it.
    this is some outrageous shit, i’m pacing quick, lost in aimlessness...
    the night slowly cast its evil shadow as clouds formed over my head.
    i’d really rather not tell you what happened... it’s better left unsaid.
    but if i must- i guess i’ll just have to tell it as best i remember.
    i was running home from the playground, in hopes to avoid the threatening weather.
    i made it past second & third street, trekking through dirty puddles & assorted rubble.
    heading home early for ma’s leftover turkey & getting real thirsty, i hustled.
    the alley ways darkened, & the neon fluorescence slowly rose to light the sky.
    the bad weather had started to clear off- still i raced home, stride by stride.
    i eyed the time, & immediately realized i had more than plenty to share.
    so i gradually slowed to a walk, & caught a breath of summer’s freshening air.
    i was only walking for a minute or two when the initial incident took place.
    i was passing the bus stop on fifth street, waiting for the light to change.
    the traffic passed & the “walk” symbol lit up- i was just beginning to cross...
    when all of a sudden some guy drops from the sky & landed face down on the sidewalk.

    Part 2

    Contact!- by IV


    when he hit the gravel, my heart immediately abandoned my chest...
    my bowels stranded the rest of my body, im planted in mess...
    but damn it he's blessed, cuz he landed without a scratch...
    i doubt a patch of hair was harmed on his head, afraid, im bout to mash...
    home to my mother, i dont want to be alone with this brotha...
    with the pigs ownin' this gutter the way they roamed burnin' rubber...
    he moaned, than he stuttered, "kid im an angel in this land of devils...
    here to only contact u," he came closer with a hand of pebbles...
    then a band of treble ripped my brain, have i slipped, insane?...
    "only u can hear or see me," fudge, i must be trippin' mane...
    as it began drippin' rain he said, "listen to ur heart n' listen...
    i walked torwards him hoping i wouldn't end up on a milk carton, missin....

    Part 3

    His Advice- by IV


    He began," in a world of thugs where the ghetto is swirled in bugs...
    the governments murderin' slugs gave us a huge hurdle, these drugs"...
    it curdled my blood, when these pebbles became rocks of cocaine...
    my older brother told me thats what kept him rockin' them chains...
    n medallions but mom told me to say no to drugs cuz she cares...
    but its rare i would care to back down from a full fledged D.A.R.E....
    "i dare u to do these drugs, it might not lead to your salvation...
    but to your purpose in life, and to suceed in changing this nation...
    if u have patience you'll see your biggest dream fulfilled...
    and you'll see the mountainside, but if u dont, your killed....
    I spilled more urine on my pants, out my ass blew the poop...
    however i took the rocks and dashed from this demon, i flew the coop...

    Part 4

    My Decision-by IV


    my nights got colder, despite im older my fight grew bolder...
    to find unity in my community, and find a way to ignite this boulder...
    standing in my path, but it seemed satan was laughing in his wrath...
    at my people in the civil rights movements demanding aftermath...
    but u had to laugh cuz they still made us shovel shit...
    this government lovin it on top, i stood insubordinate...
    and then i remembered my covenant with that angel or demon...
    I TOOK THE DRUG and smoked to strangle my dreams and...
    you know the rest of the story, NOW u hear it songs...
    how i got my ass beat and asked"could we all get along?"
    hitting the bong, on PCP and coke escaping reality...
    is how i, rodney king showed the nation police brutality...

    Every sweet has its sour; every evil its good.
    Ralph Waldo Emerson


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  6. BlAcK BeArd

    BlAcK BeArd Registered Gun Owner

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    This verse is Rated R for graphic violence, strongly explicit sexual content and an overall perverse attitude towards humanity.• Parental Discretion is highly advised

    Topic:• Unresolved Anger

    Starring....
    Yo Momma - The Cowboy

    http://images.epilogue.net/users/kingzog/the_outlaw_ii.jpg

    His life was tortured, a demented soul left him in pain
    Accepting the blame because he witnessed him turn flesh into stains
    Stressing his brain, flashbacks burn his thoughts - resurrecting his shame
    Paying the ultimate price in life, but stil in debt to the game

    The Incident - Halloween Party

    The cold wind froze him because his costume was thin
    As he looked over the females dressed up and plotted to sin
    The cowboy fit he wore was cliché, far beyond played
    But he kept twirling his guns, acting like a star had been made
    People darted away scared that his pistols would fly
    And they'd get hit in the eye then promptly dismissed for the night
    But he kept going, controlling his motions and conversing a little
    At this masquerade ball for dill juices to work with his pickle
    A lady in cat suit was seeming frisky to play
    Entertained by his cheesy tricks and feeling submissive that day
    Mixes with tequila had gave him her permission to stay
    But giving their names was forbidden, masking their intimate phase
    Strangers in following raw instincts without caution at all
    Barely made it to the hall closet before dropping their draws
    His other weaponry made her wetness stink and the odor was vicious
    Like a corpse fucked her earlier and had tortured this bitch shit
    Evacuating was important than the climax of skills
    Procrastination could lead to needing a bath in oatmeal
    Tumbling out from the doom, the fumes completely consumed his focus
    As a man covered in blood walked in the room with the hostess
    But the fool didn't notice her head really had nails in the skull
    No makeup at all; red drips were really shaping her lost
    Watching surprised, the horrific look in her eyes made him shiver
    Not stopping this guy, dressed as a doctor; disguising a killer

    Co-Starring....
    Black Beard - The Killer in Question

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    A bitter resentment for me, but the perfect entrance for me
    Holding carpenter's scissors to pinch the nerves through ribs and her spleen
    Feeding my senses that fiend to do the most demented of things
    As I pretend she's a puppet- digging hands through inches of meat
    Put on some shades bridged by her nose so the eyes don't look spaced
    Dragged down isles of this place with a fixed smile on her face
    The jig was up when her stiffened butt spilled intestinal waste
    Leaving a trail 10 feet down her tail made her measurements change
    People smelled this and disgrace was viewed in them all
    So then I dropped her carcass and pulled out other tools for this brawl
    A shotgun with machete attachment got an amusing applause
    In the screams of my shooting scene as blood flew to the walls
    And into pools through the halls, but taking time on a few
    Took off the machete and slowly began carving slices of Sue
    Sucked the meat first from her fingers: dipped in her eyes for the juice
    Like human nuggets without the added grease of frying your food
    Striking for Bruce for more of a challenge like a horse was in action
    So I fired shots and made his body rock and forced him to dancing
    Saw this freaky little cowboy frozen outside of the room
    Only noticed him because his stench was the foulest of fumes
    Through a bottle of vodka at him and my aiming was perfect
    Then followed that with a cigarette lit and the flames were disturbing
    Running behind him like she's wanting the Heizman trophy this year
    Was some black cat who's originating the odors I feared
    She made me run to the streets while sucking my teeth
    I almost regurgitate cannibalistic purges of meat
    Used to be their principal, but was I fired last spring
    For overreacting, they said I did that when I slapped 5 of the teens
    For busting my tires that week plus bb guns they fired at me
    So I'm returning the favor, but my ammo is a little more likely to sting

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  7. SteveThaGreat

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    [HIDE]crazy dope battle..


    insane villain and infinite dropped prob the best topical i ever read last week in this tourney so i was expecting big things.. and they delivered.

    infinite truth's first segment was spectacular.. the flow was perfection, wording was seasoned everything was depicted with vivid details and it set the expectations for continued greatness to follow..
    the next segment had great flow, maybe a couple of instances where the content seemed a little sacrificed for flow, not really forced multis but just weird wording.. for example the line pig's burnin rubber or whatever just seemed a little akward... but it was still written beautifully and i continued to be in awe of this piece... the last 2 segments were good.. nothing was bad.. would've been cool to see some dope twists at the end but as it was, a couple of very polished writers drop a certifiably dope piece.. kudos.



    i dont know who black beard is but i think he's dic?...(you got too many aliases nigga) but this piece was crazy stupid ridiculous dope


    everything was perfect... the flow was perfect. the storytelling aspect was artfully conveyed with mad swagger and perfect wording throughout.. i got a little confused when he was coming out of the closet (no homo) but i picked up the pieces in my re-read im still not really sure why her pussy stinked and it's not really realistic that a principal would be throwing vodka at one of his old students and lighting him on fire with a cigarette just cause somebody flat his tires but w/e...



    anyway this shit was ridiculous close.. i hate voting in battles like this but i guess i enjoyed blackbeard's piece better so my vote goes to him[/HIDE]
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  8. BlAcK BeArd

    BlAcK BeArd Registered Gun Owner

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    He's gone insane over watching kids all his life is the point of the ending and that was just the last straw. I'm sure you can understand that a person would lose it after dedicating themselves to kids to have them fuck him over and lose their job. Imagine a teacher going crazy, it'd be much worst than columbine..... just thought I'd explain

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  9. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    i voted on every rstl match except for pent up's...
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  10. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    I know you did and they've been edited out as well. Don't start shit in matches man, it's against the rules of the league and you're not even in the league, just this tournament.

    Pent works hard for this league and the rule he was enforcing was is a rule that just hasn't been posted. You can't do anything but vote in matches that aren't yours..... that's it. Anything else is not allowed.

    In this tourney, all that was allowed, but not in the league..... keep the bullshit in the tourney matches or in the mag or mc hookups...

    Your votes will count though because that's my fault it wasn't posted. Leave the modding to the mods though. If there's a problem, all you have to do is let us know.
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  11. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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  12. Infinite Truth

    Infinite Truth ...scatterboxx rocks.

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  13. MrMister

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    [HIDE]vote - black and moms

    IV and IT - I liked how this was like once piece
    it read away easily and the twist was dope too
    the whole angel or devil thing was kinda ... but you did do it nicely
    writing and rhyme scheme and flow and all that were on point
    on both sides of this piece so this was a nice read

    Black and MOM - this was a nicely done piece
    I liked the beginning the whole violence thing that was funny
    both of you have your own writing style and you made two pieces
    which connected into one which was dope
    again writing skillz seem to be down to a T by both so I have nothing
    to say on that

    so all in all this was a nice battle I enjoyed it but in the end I feel like
    black and momma took this one with a more intresting and more
    compeling piece [/HIDE]
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  14. Madpoet

    Madpoet why is this so short....

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    aint voting on 4 matches sorry mods.

    And somemotherfuckas are straight sensitive Im boys with all you but one...remember that putas..
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  15. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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  16. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    double post
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    This was a pretty good match. There were highs and lows in each. Where to begin. Well, IT, your writing was damn nice but the lines seemed mega stretched at times. I would have liked to have seen you consider the flow of the piece a little more, couldn't have hurt any. IV, I liked your writing too, your flow was pretty smooth, rhymes were pretty nice, although perhaps the slightest bit overdone in parts. Malo, I thought your verse was probably the best written out of all four people who contributed to this. It was fairly straightforward, but I think that was a good thing in this case. You knew DIC was going to bring rhymes galore, so really, for you, it was just important to get the story started, and I thought you did that. DIC, that was actually a pretty well-written verse as well now that I read it again. I don't know man, I liked IT & IV's story to the extent that it was interesting enough to keep me wanting to read. However, I sort of felt like the story itself started and ended strong, but sort of slacked a tiny bit in the middle. I understand that the middle had to be said in order to set the context for the end, but I don't know, it seemed a bit of a stretch. At the same time, I appreciate the attempt because too many folks are happy to settle for non-creative shit nowadays. Malo & DIC, same thing with you really. It was a well told story. It did seem a bit out there though. I guess I just don't appreciate fiction as much as I ought to. Either way, in the end, I'd have to say that both stories were aaaabout equal, but that I prefered the writing of DIC & Malo a bit more, so I'm going to have to go with them on this one. Barely though. [/hide]
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  18. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    [hide]IT/IV -- lol, nice topic approach. IT's verse was stretched, and the flow was eh, but the rhyming was nice in a measure of parts. The story was alright, I mean it got imaginative and everything but the metaphor didn't really serve its purpose. Nothing stood out or grabbed me really, it was mostly character/story development, and it was rather slow. I mean He was running from bad weather..big woop, nothing happened while he was running, except an angel...big woop, the had dialogue which didnt sound natural, and some of the flow was off...ahem..However the story served a purpose, and that purpose was kinda cool. I can't really say it enticed me very much, with shit like rhyming insabordinate and shovel shit, and other basic rhymes

    lol@bringing up D.A.R.E though, that gave me a kick. but overall product of bad wording and dope idea.

    BB/YM -- The thing that threw me off this verse is that you had active events happening that overlapped and you didnt break it up in your verse, you just continued the narration and expected me to catch on, which required a second read. However, on second read this verse was pretty nice, all the details came together as one by the end, and the flow was pretty solid. Malo's verse was a nice setup for the action sequence, and it held very imaginative imagery, as he's known for. Black beard brought some raw action here, And the twist at the end was pretty cool. I think the fact that the party was for teenagers should've been glorified in malos verse some more, and the school teacher thing shouldve been forshadowed more along the way, but shit that was still a complete verse that I enjoyed.

    Vote - BB/YM for more entertainment and less beating around the bush[/hide]
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  19. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    No I didn't pent, ur just fuckin slow and you didn't catch the details the first read..... it has to overlap, they're 2 different characters. Makes no sense if they don't overlap, they share scenes together. They seperated in the narration, broken down by who's writing for what character and then each character writes directly about the other. Its not confusing if you're paying attention while ur voting. Don't blame the verse, it took you two reads cuz you didn't pay attention the first time. Everything to seperate the 2 characters is in the verse. Not that hard to see it either

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  20. Annihilation

    Annihilation CLAUS HOUSE

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    iv:
    this was alright i wasnt overly impressed to be hoenst considering its coming from 2 fucking dope writers, the plausibility facgtor really just didn't appeal to me and the ending was lame imo, i thought it was well written but the content was lacking, i wasnt drawn in and it didn't really impress me in any way in terms of imagery, wordplay, story, i thought this went thru the motions, pretty boring overall imo.

    dic:

    this was decent, nothing too impressive i thought the scheme and flow and overall writing was better than the prior verse and that sick shit kept me entertained and had some nice lines in terms of imagery and description was enjoyable at least athough i thought both verses were pretty lame considering the talent in both groups, butn ot bad.

    overall i felt dic's group held steady with a more interesting verse and nicer scheme, although i thought both verses were pretty retarded and lacked substance.

    vote: Dic and Moms
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