East: 1. WWIII Vs 16. Komplexx

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Nebz, Aug 23, 2003.

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  1. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    1.Clausehouse Vs 16.Komplexx

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  2. WWIII

    WWIII Guest

    The name's WWIII actually.
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  3. WWIII

    WWIII Guest

    Will you be showing?

    My chosen topic will be.

    2. CEREAL_KILLER:
    your a fetus in a womb.
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  4. JOWELZ

    JOWELZ Bah Fangooly Da Bear

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    Warren has shrivelled balls...

    *just an observation*
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  5. WWIII

    WWIII Guest

    Jowelz, stop looking for extra attention.
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  6. Komplexx The MC

    Komplexx The MC Epitome.

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    so is this due today? or what, I had to do up a quick verse, no time this week, but it's pretty decent I guess

    1. THA TALENT:
    you are a shrink who has been seeing a patient for years...they are clinically depressed, and have taken everything possible...now they feel like it is time to end it all...what do you do?
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    Patient:
    Listen Doc,
    I thank you for your kind acts of helping me threw
    helping me sooth, helping me realise what you helping can do
    but the devils approach to my oath is clearly closing my hope
    until the point where im like fuck it...put a choke to my throat
    my spirit is broke, I can't keep the growth in light of my cries
    I use to move forward with life for in my eyes was a vision of christ
    but that vision no longer exists, my life officially has fallen to shit
    death seems like the only way out, life? i've have fallen to it
    through these eyes my pain and cries are drawn dreadfully clear
    im now thinkin up shit that I aint even dreamt of in years
    moarning in rage for my life is nothing more than a stage
    im an actor on display anxious to deport from this place
    nobody's immune to this everlasting charade we call life
    I know this now, so let me go in peace....thank you for your time
    and goodbye

    Docter:
    Now,
    My job is to listen, pay close attention, even conversate
    you talk about god, by taking your own life, do you think jesus'll compensate?
    it's an awful fate, to take your own life, why must you insist
    live it up, ride it out, see better days, fuck slittin your wrist
    what about your kid? remember him, Julian...he only six
    how you think he'll feel knowing his father was such a bitch...
    cause thats what you are right now, taking the easy way out
    what about when you reach the gates, and god pleads for you to stay out
    and your sent to hell, did ever stop to think, cause you might today
    you wanna be a bitch and run? fine....here's a knife...slice away


    Outcome: Docter's odd yet seemingly effective speech must have been a unique yet efficient choice of words, because it worked. 8 months later, patient is still alive, and is now living happily with his now 7 year old child and pregnant wife......I guess better days to come to those who wait.
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  7. Kon$piracy

    Kon$piracy ```````````

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    nice verse there dawgy

    my advise for you
    next time, make the outcome rhyme too
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  8. WWIII

    WWIII Guest

    Dear mama, I know you fear drama and dad is rarely there
    U never expected to get pregnant when he came in u’r derriere
    It’s rarely fair, but bear me Claire, through u’r vivid concern
    The trick is to turn, a negative to positive u live and u learn
    Give and u earn, feel something tugging on u’r heart n strings
    A larger dream, just think I could be the next Martin King
    The margin seems, to swell, but let me be your gleam in hell
    The beacon of hope in the night thru the bitter screams n yells
    I hear u reachin to cope, I can even sense a delicate breeze
    Similar to the night.. u’r brother took u.. with relative ease
    Some massive conquest, it’s hard to grasp the concept
    The graphic context of that act which masks the onset
    And got my passive mom stressed, in it’s twisted flings
    Which consists of wicked things this misfit’s sickness brings
    May an angel lift his wings, and carry us to a safe haven
    Don’t let me be a waif taken away from this place achin
    Or let mom get her waste caved in, pops loses his wits some
    And chooses a victim due to all the booze in his system
    Confusion n fists flung, he had swung at mom n fits
    But his brawn eclipsed, by the tv I heard of bombs amiss
    The common gist of communist hominids, a war’s sprung
    As sores stung, blasphemy had come from this whore’s tongue
    To please the convict in league wit conflict, no remorse n gimmick
    Mother thought best, if she got rest then went to the abortion clinic
    But in the night n past day light had cracked I’d fight n scratch
    Begged n pleaded, it was the edge I needed for my righteous path


    Listen….

    I've always appreciated u ma, just never enough
    but I know that nothing could ever sever the trust
    and the bond that we form will weather the rush
    of the storm, it’s just perfection, plush and it's warm
    I know complete, it’s the feelin that crept over me
    Since I been so deep. inside a tad passed u’r left ovary
    Think u’r mates perfect, that’s just the way u may feel now
    He grazed the surface, but he’ll kick u when u’r still down


    It worked…

    She changed her mind, with all memories of it gone soon
    The deranged behind, quakes hit our region with a monsoon
    The strangest signs, the wars got worse they slaughtered folks
    Battles raged and the radio played as mother’s water broke
    On the way to the emergency room we left in that white Saturn
    As the urgency loomed down the fateful road of life’s pattern
    Dad’s strife had yearned to stop that day, through contemplation
    Had he got his way, Mom wouldn’t have slipped due to complication
    Though pass the praise the bastard waved for that day grandly rised
    Dad was worthless, mom murdered but birthed the antichrist
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  9. WWIII

    WWIII Guest

    ^^^2. CEREAL_KILLER:
    your a fetus in a womb.
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  10. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    dam.. complexx can real nice. good writers voice in his verse and would fair up to any match on a regular day.. but shit, ww3 just fucking kills any type of writing I read from others.. his flow and word usage is just to soupier to be beat.. excellent detailed verse LL.

    vote ww3

    get at me on aim u fuck.. say hello to an old friend.

    good luck to whoever wins
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  11. the unorthodox

    the unorthodox New Member

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    komplexx had a surprisingly dope verse

    he flowed, had a nice scheme, told a decent story.. a little played.. and the ending was weak.. but it was still a solid piece..

    ww3, however, had an unbelievably nice scheme, dope flow.. and, most importantly.. the story was deeper and much more creative.. unlike komplexx, he had a innovative ending..

    what i like to see is a story told through lyrics, not through sentence structure.. which is what komplexx did at the end.. just some friendly incite..

    vote- ww3

    but komplexx, stay up.. you got talent man

    *edited for grammar
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  12. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Up over Ns's
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  13. Strike2

    Strike2 Man Meets Creator

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    komp wuz nice..ww wuz sick...I mean daaaamn homie....you build the story up from start to end...a good eye for detaill...

    vote ww

    dont be scurred to drop a vote on my match either
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  14. prophetional

    prophetional hokey muh-fuckin' pokey

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    that's one smart ass fetus..... usin dem big words and all like that... nice drop to komp. good rhyme, good structure.. but just a lil outmatched here. story on WW's was just deeper, vivid, as well as abstract. the plot thickened throughout... komp's story was good and solid, but kinda dull in terms of plot...

    vote = WW3
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  15. V dot Acular

    V dot Acular New Member

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    the normal thing here to do would be, vote for the # 1 seed, but in this scenario, the opponent was on some other shit, komplexx you pretty nice man, unfortunantly, your opponent is too, both of you had nice verses, but when it came down to my vote i did have to go with WW3, his flow and structure was just amazing, plexx you told a good story, but bluntly, warren told a better one

    vote - warren
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  16. J.Christ

    J.Christ Registered User

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    vote - WWIII


    easily, Komplexx came well. But I dont see many people being able to defeat WWIII
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  17. Atheist

    Atheist Storyteller

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    Vote: Warren.

    Exceptional. I expected this from you throughout this tournament. Komplexx came good too, but his verse seemed as if it was trying to go somewhere, but in the end, it just was a bunch of words thrown together which acted as the middle segment. Th introduction and ending were good though, just be more consistant.
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  18. bigKEN

    bigKEN Hoosier Daddy??

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    vote- WWIII

    Komplexx- niceness, good scheme, great story, nice imagery, ending was kinda eh... but nice verse overall BUT..

    you had to face..

    WWIII- great scheme, multi's flow, imagery, story told was better and you obviously won this
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  19. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    BOO at recycled verses...

    That "bear me Claire" was a pretty memorable line ww3...
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  20. WWIII

    WWIII Guest

    8-0.

    I want Tekneek out of this tournament. Round2... it happens.
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