DZK - Shadowville's Battlefields

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  1. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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  2. 108_k0z

    108_k0z New Member

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    w/e u suck deezee



    next to send that shit via aim so i dont burn a wack version of it


    good day, you sith lord you
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  3. Fernelity

    Fernelity Active Member

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    I'M GONNA BE FIRST, I'M GONNA BE FIRST!

    Wtf, this is the first time you've ever said that.. That's... Fucked up... (Something in your second line)

    Contradicting yourself in your own song.. Talking about not singing, then you do two bars later..

    Really not feeling your delivery on this track..

    Hooks wierd..

    Idk about this track.. Not really you, plus your second line... Sorta... Killed it in my oppinion.

    Shit happens....

    Don't gotta drop hottness everytime.. Just 99%..

    Get back at me dude, I have an awsome line I wanna use; but I wanna callob with you.. I found a beat and the topic isn't something you can't do.

    I'll bother you on AIM a few more times..

    (And the da-da-dadda-da-doo line was nice)
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  4. Fernelity

    Fernelity Active Member

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    Damn, second ~
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  5. Mike Lyricalone

    Mike Lyricalone New Member

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    REEEEEEEEEEEWIND

    What the Hell Do You Just Say

    rhymes electrify, get your fuckin hand's high
    on the beat-side is my *****: ********


    You Just Fucked Up....you just pulled an eminem off, guess you frgt you were white...its koo
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  6. DeLoX

    DeLoX New Member

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    haha at you sayin niqqa..shyt had me crackin up i think this the first white dude to say that..but this had a nice flow your voice dont sound hip hop to me tho..it sounds like some rock type voice but thats my opinion..
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  7. Odd Job

    Odd Job didnt kno it was ur bitch

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    shits ill doggie.
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  8. DeLoX

    DeLoX New Member

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    on soundclick i mean..as far as holding the number one spot fo like 7 8 months
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  9. mc k-nice

    mc k-nice New Member

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    oh
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    u owe me a new diaper
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  10. slantize

    slantize Shadowville Productions

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    Wow a lot of hate for a song that contains my name! Lol.
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  11. Fernelity

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    When he said that shit, I wasn't offended like I usually get... Like, it pisses me off and I'm white when that shit gets said.. But when he said it, it seemed fitting.. Just, knowing he's white... Just a little dissapointed and shit...

    I think he's trying to get people to talk about it and shit 'cause he doesn't care...

    But he lied!

    Said in his rock song, "I won't ever let you down!"

    It's done... !

    Rofl, Idc.. Just... Awkward...
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  12. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    it's just a track

    if you're offended don't listen
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  13. Mike Lyricalone

    Mike Lyricalone New Member

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    Too Late Dzk Too Late

    My ears are already Burning
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  14. Snuggles

    Snuggles New Member

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    Bet You Wont Go To The Heart Of D.C. And Say That LMAO..
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  15. slantize

    slantize Shadowville Productions

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    ***** this ***** that. I call my black friends *****z, I call my spanish friends *****z, I call my asian friends *****z. It's not I'm sayin the '-er' at the end. And DZK is mah *****, and I'm his *****. Nuff said, stop being pansies.

    It's not like he's sayin that shit in the middle of Harlem.
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  16. KWICBOYZ

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    beat is bangin 4 real..listnen ya flow got me bobbin my head frm side 2 side... u ride this beat 2 tha death and the lyrics is phat..(angry elephant nice) NO DOWN POINTS @ ALL EVER IN THIS SONG!! no time to rest my neck at all this is a hott ass track 4 real i like the voodoo line 2 and the dada dodododo line lol this is so hot man keep it up...

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=890466
    return the feedback please!
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  17. Mike Lyricalone

    Mike Lyricalone New Member

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    I Guess its what crowd you with, doesnt matter what way you say it, you better be ready to catch an eye jammy
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  18. Effffffect

    Effffffect I don't believe you.

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    Ok its ONE thing to jack Stef... But then my avatar of the pretty lady eyes....Thats it.

    Your mine.

    This beat... is the rawest fuckin shit ever. Like ever. Its so funky.
    ~ <---Effect doing the worm.

    Geeea boiiii... listen to that reverse build up.
    *DZ gives Daps to E*
    Haha you went nuts with that.
    I likey, for sure. You used it at the perfect places.

    Dawg whats with this beat.
    Im fucking breakdancing.
    Its like... Mario Brothers meets Blade Trinity.

    S-l-a-n-t-i-z-e... i heart you for this one.

    DZ... you heart me. You know deep down it hurts inside.

    -E
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    Neruk Runky Runky

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  20. KWICBOYZ

    KWICBOYZ New Member

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    o shit lol didnt catch the ni99a @ 1st thas crazy it duz seem fit but i honestly think itll only hurt ur chances of blowing up cuz sum1 can dig tht up n use it against u some how but damn.. song still fiya and im black but i didnt catch it man thts... somethin
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