DZK - C4 *(new shit)*

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  1. SupaLeague

    SupaLeague New Member

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    of course...

    not even surprised anymore when viewing ya shit..

    this was nice, ya lyrics rode this shit perfectly (of course)
    feeling this beat like hell, and yeah liking the shit without the layers/layers haha
    but like I said before, some of ya tracks actually sounds pretty sick with them..

    keep doing ya thing man... don't know what else to say about ya shit that hasn't been or will be said a thousand times over..
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  2. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    Were you sitting?
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  3. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    Ahh, the key has been deciphered.
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  4. mic-e.b.

    mic-e.b. aka FACE METAL

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    dope shit dzk. sounds a lot better without so many layers.
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  5. Duke of Babble-On

    Duke of Babble-On im a fucking scum sucker

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    sounds cool but what the hell is this track about....it's all abunch jibber jabber
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  6. Neyedus

    Neyedus Active Member

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    Beat is gay, I don't like it. If you take the time to write a whole track might as well make sure the beat is ill.

    You murdered this lyrically though. I like the no overdubs feel for this track. I guess it depends on the track you do.....Flow and delivery were ill as usual....lol @ you being british
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  7. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    yeah
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  8. Phoenix5891

    Phoenix5891 T.S.K.

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    Word...No doubles are cool on this but you could of thrown an adlib with some of those bars..keep grinding

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=914426
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  9. i Luv Da Cock

    i Luv Da Cock TRU "GINGER" KID

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    dZK I seriously wish you'd make CHORUSES for ya songs.

    I WISH you'd do that.
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  10. NoxOnline

    NoxOnline Producer/Rapper

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    The beat's crazy, which fits...I'm feelin' it though. Your wordplay is ridiculously hot, and the way you flow to the beat is..like buffalo stampedes. I think you should definitely throw some ad-libs in it though at least, and you definitely need a hook. good shit though.
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  11. Praverb

    Praverb I breathe hip hop...

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    on the real DZK I feel both styles...u know with layers and without them...

    I think u could have mixed both styles in...

    anyway this wuz viscious famo

    woooooooooooooo...wow just ripped the beat for tres minutos whoa...feeling this bro

    get at me...
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  12. Wil Yam Hung

    Wil Yam Hung White guys sing worse

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    As usual, this was nice work, but I prefer layers, so sue me. I guess I'm just a product of the commercial world.
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  13. GrewSum

    GrewSum New Member

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    real nice.....

    ayo man, we need to hook up on a track sumtime.....hit up my aim.......
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  14. kCliPze

    kCliPze Not To Be Fucked Wit

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    u should still use layers but just not as much as u use too..just like dub certain parts..

    ya voice sounds way better like this tho.. doesnt sound unatural
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  15. AGENTSPITS

    AGENTSPITS Got A BJ From AVA DEVINE!

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  16. Unfidelz

    Unfidelz Tyrannical Productions

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    I like the majority of your tracks, DZ, but this one just sounds like a wannabe of previous tracks and your vocals sound drowned out by the beat, maybe cuz the dubs are missing, but who knows. It's still better than 90% of shit out there, but just not feelin it, sounds forced. Peace.
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  17. AzeussuezA

    AzeussuezA The Mods Are Gay

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    Wow, wasn't expecting this....Nice track. In the beginning your voice sorta made me think of ICP, word play much better though and delivery was sick. The way you delivered certain lines sounded like Trice and then others like Xzibit.

    Nice work

    Appreciate you doin the same:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=916091

    Feel free to break it down positives and negatives.
    I like both forms of feedback.
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  18. 4Dbling

    4Dbling Smoking weed > Shooting H

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    Not on my speakers
    this is one of your clearer tracks actually
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  19. MCSpyDee

    MCSpyDee New Member

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    I like the robotic voice or whatever people called it with the "over dubs" or whatever. but this track is still fire cuz u know whos spittin behind the mic... 10/10
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