Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by KamikazeLyricist, Sep 29, 2005.
Sounds like MC Chris...
thats the only feed lol and whos that ?
dam.. this beat is INSANE! fuckin love that vocal cut... dam this beat is nuts
aight here we goo... flow is aight.. cant really follow ur rhyme scheme tho.. energy is fuckin awesome.. ur hype as hell man.. presence is tight... u real comfortable with what u doin.. delivery is tight.. im feelin ur shit man.. u rippin it up.. i wouldnt mind collabin witchu man.. check me out lemme know
thanx for the feed man ,
download it bump it ... I fixed vocal volumes
holy fuck @ this beat
havent peepd you in'a while.
flow's polished.. ALOTTA emotion in this track, delivery's nice, im feeling the lyrics.. and this entire track overall.
im lovin the hook dude. props to the beat maker.
2nd verses's nice, good thing you kept with the same topic instead of going off blabbing about something else.. i can relate somewhat to the song, not 100% though.. it seems like you rushed the ending of your verse though, no problems though.
good shit though man
hit me back with feed if you can - http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=936222
thanx for the feed back ill get that link
upped drop feed and links done be sleepin on this !!!!
what up kid?
everybody's droppin' on this beat
flow stayed consistent throughout
a little basic, but listenable
rhyme scheme was okay
lyrics fitted subject matter
can't really complain
thanx Dave , but the lyrics were real my life ya know lol
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