Dsoul -VS- Omega Supreme

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  1. Omega Supreme

    Omega Supreme [. . .]

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    10 lines
    3-0 KO
    5 Votes To Win

    good luck
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  2. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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    aight...gonna write soon...g'd luck
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  3. Omega Supreme

    Omega Supreme [. . .]

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    most heads trip n get back on their feet, D trips n falls
    sit back and watch me destroy this kid, fake record n all
    watch him stumble and crawl, no courage, nope not there
    call me pussy all you like, but around your crotch, theres only hot air
    this battle fails to be fair, i leave D raped, mollywopped and dropped
    souls lip is the entire story..and my fist "thickens" the plot
    youre still under the king, under the one spot, still not top dog
    but battling me takes you from minion to prince, like kissin a frog
    so from trpping, to crawling, staggerin and fallin
    the only thing that matters...is hes havin a "13" in his loss column
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  4. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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    Leave ya ass dead...ya computer desk is the new murder scene
    Only good supreme I see.......
    is on the menu at Burger King
    You 12-0....please, you aint big enough to rock giants, stop lyin
    I wuz gonna write like ur skill.......
    but this is the lowest of font sizes
    Omegas a undercover alias..so inside Im thinkin..fuck that fag
    Cuz if you came here in 2001.......
    why in the hell do you suck that bad?
    Theres no confusion...give it up omega...you know your losin
    Cuz your quick to hide ya face....
    like Wilson off Home Improvement
    And being at Rapmusic for over 2 years..this hoe aint much
    Omega reminds of undeground animals
    the way he gophers my nuts....slut!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  5. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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  6. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    omega the fist/lip/thickins line was all you really supplied
    ehh verse


    soul not 1 standout line, just an 'overall' btterverse



    ahh vote = dsoul
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  7. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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    I had some stand-out lines lol



    oh well, 1-0 me
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  8. BrEaK-PoInT

    BrEaK-PoInT New Member

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    vote= D soul, overall better verse, better punches, better flow, best line was the small font shit, tight! D is prob one of the best cats ive seen on this site, keep it up

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  9. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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    thanks



    2-0..uppin
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  10. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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  11. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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    uppin for the KO
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  12. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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  13. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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  15. Dynamic One

    Dynamic One ......Dynamic......

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    someone else used that fist thickens the plot line.. but i dunno who.
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  16. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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    i know, shit even I flipped it before


    drop a vote anywayz
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  17. Dynamic One

    Dynamic One ......Dynamic......

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    Omega Supreme


    most heads trip n get back on their feet, D trips n falls
    sit back and watch me destroy this kid, fake record n all
    -eh, a personal attempt

    watch him stumble and crawl, no courage, nope not there
    call me pussy all you like, but around your crotch, theres only hot air
    -forced diss, coulda been worded better

    this battle fails to be fair, i leave D raped, mollywopped and dropped
    souls lip is the entire story..and my fist "thickens" the plot
    -played concept.. aight punch, no setup tho

    youre still under the king, under the one spot, still not top dog
    but battling me takes you from minion to prince, like kissin a frog
    -um.. i get it sorta... coulda set it up better tho

    so from trpping, to crawling, staggerin and fallin
    the only thing that matters...is hes havin a "13" in his loss column
    - lol @ the final line... but first was kinda repetitive

    overall : kinda repetative verse everyother line was like... stumble n crawl , or stagger n fall, or somethin to that effect... get more creative and this verse woulda been better


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    Dsoul


    Leave ya ass dead...ya computer desk is the new murder scene
    Only good supreme I see.......
    is on the menu at Burger King
    -alright opener, played concept...

    You 12-0....please, you aint big enough to rock giants, stop lyin
    I wuz gonna write like ur skill.......
    but this is the lowest of font sizes
    -also kinda played idea... not really feelin this line tho

    Omegas a undercover alias..so inside Im thinkin..fuck that fag
    Cuz if you came here in 2001.......
    why in the hell do you suck that bad?
    -lmao.. thats a good one tho

    Theres no confusion...give it up omega...you know your losin
    Cuz your quick to hide ya face....
    like Wilson off Home Improvement
    -lol... decent line

    And being at Rapmusic for over 2 years..this hoe aint much
    Omega reminds of undeground animals
    the way he gophers my nuts....slut!!!!!!!!!!!!
    -lol. not bad


    overall: ive seen a lot better, like the one u vs. lum x, but you did enough to beat O. with a few of your punches, better rhyming structure....


    overall battle breakdown: dsoul takes it by a pretty good margin...
    decent battle.. O.S. you need to get more creative n original.. that will help a lot.

    no beef.

    <---dynamo kidd.. in case there's a post descrepency.
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  18. Dsoul

    Dsoul Stay HigH

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    good vote, thanks



    3-0 KO


    good battle Omega
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