drumline V's nOn

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  1. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    test
  2. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    drumlines verse:

    Your shit is rusty
    broke ass pullin out your rappin abilities pleaz that shit dusty
    im new, and ill be glad to shoot you in your head,
    blood stains all over your bead, but i dont get enough out of that, i wanna embarras u, like a chick who finds out
    her man dont got a dick, my shit is top of the class,
    yours hurts me, just like broken glass, ill woop your ass,
    im not afraid of u so let me pass,
    u dont deserve to be remebered so im gonna do more to u
    then tamper, so ur name is non...well guess wat
    this was fun but your no more, its over, im finished for
    today but your for ever done
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  3. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    my verse;

    Newbie claims, but fake lIke prosthetics, you acting foolish like faggots wearing cosmetics,
    Drum couldn’t hold a beat if he was using Defibrillators and imma Paramedic,
    Flat Lining, can’t you see, I’m inside yo’ mind as my rhymes shine and make you blind,
    Understand why I show behind your eyes, I could flow 5 bars and still leave you hypnotised,
    You write like a broken change machine, your ass don’t make sense (cents),
    My mind's flex finds heads blinded when I combine these lines with muttered violence,
    Define with silence, Ill subliminally rip you since you tried and challenged this,
    You couldn’t “see me” with X-ray abilities stapled to your eyelids,
    Prolly aint even a rapper just a bumbling kid who rocks his cap backwards,
    D.Line couldn’t spit to beats like impotent dudes tryna masterbate,
    I pre-grasp your fate, you think you phat (fat) , my knee-caps surpass your weight,
    You’re so weak, you just Immed me and asked me to ghost write your tape!
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  4. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    bump... come on people...pwease vote
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  5. KonvILLution

    KonvILLution Nebz Is GOD

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    stretched verses by both so it was kinda hard to read but non had sum tight punches and theres 1 word springs to mind wen i red the other guys vers ' remeadial ' i cant spell but im sure u know wot it says so cos of an all round better verse im votin for n0n

    vote = n0n
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  6. cOn-Cor

    cOn-Cor ..."eXtreme Cauti0n"...

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    non's verse was bettter,lyrically it flowed and he had a better vocab>>
    punches were stronger too>>
    drumlines verse was ok but pretty basic>>
    vote : non
    <<peAce>>
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  7. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    he?

    *sulks*

    Im all female

    *sulks*
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  8. flips

    flips lyrical magician

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    there's really not much to say non ripped drumline what he did was 100x better and drumline's verse was juz mad whack he even dissed himself when he called himself new what an idiot my vote goes wit full respect-

    Vote-Non
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  9. pLatinUm meth

    pLatinUm meth New Member

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    drum juss fukin suCked nuttyn more nuttyn less
    his rhyme waz really hard to read
    he punched like a bytch
    n0n had this in the bag fr0m the start
    VOTE=n0n[jan]
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  10. dollarbills99

    dollarbills99 AKa THe HitMan

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    i agree i killed drumline also, i suggest hitting up the dojo area drumline, just improve yo skills a little, get better punches, and ass more creativity
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  11. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    thanks men....but can we just clear this up...

    IM FEMALE lol.. not a he lol
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  12. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    dats 4-0 so far
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