*drop a link... i'll reply... Lyrical Excercise

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  1. Da Protégé

    Da Protégé The P.R.O.

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    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/daprotege_music.htm


    Remember drop link and i'll reply...thanks

    LYRICS

    I’ll Splatter your anatomy shatterin any flattery...
    Scatter ya mass cavalry masterin the insanity...
    A majesty of casualties batterin’ an academy...
    Your existence is a fallacy like the Florida balloting...
    This fuckin game’s a pageantry... everyone looks so dazzling...
    The platinum days are done... a takeover is happening...
    I rap with shades of Pun.... my makeover is raggedy...
    For every faggot passin me... a life I’m dismantling....
    I know it’s a tragedy for those who try to battle me...
    Ya name will be a travesty.... causin mass castastrophe...
    The one you can’t stand to see like dudes dressed in gabardine...
    Well fuck all the chattering I’ll knuck ya till ya blatter bleeds...
    I’m hurtin with a courtesy of knives colored burgundy...
    I’ve seen many murder sprees similar to the Turks and sheiks...
    Risin up like mercury... Rollin through my suburban streets...
    U Swear you’ll be murken me I’ll persecute for perjury...
    I’m sick of all the burglary... Mainstream needs some surgery...
    I got the tools for nurturing... the game has lossed it’s service g...
    Inside it’s really burnin me... Corporations have purposely...
    Perverted the industry... I’ve come to put these herbs to sleep...
    But first you see how a white boy can come with imagery...
    Intricately givin thee new focus like an epiphany...
    Physically with words of wizardry I hope y’all been listening...
    Cuz my knife has been itchin me to resume its ministry...

    (intermission)

    Witta full clip and four fifth you getting’ fucked like a ol’ trick//
    No shit... when I pull grip to a trigga on a sold bitch...
    Cop lovin’ snitch top downin’ fifths like water poppin’ chris//
    Played out shit lay you out in a ditch...
    Lynchin’ dudes profusely...you talkin’ loosely
    thinkin’ you gonna noose me shit.. don’t even push me
    I’m Blood thirsty...hangin you like a retired jersey
    Waters get murky when u fuckin’ wit Murphy
    We absurdly trippin in burbs we givin’ shots on terds who shittin’
    Shouldn’t be fibbin’ the life you really ain’t livin’....
    Understand it’s outlandish the way u spit this shit so candid
    Cuz Nobody seein’ the punches you landed...
    they faker than the style you branded...
    In this lyrical war...Imma hit you witta spherical sword...
    A cylinder cord around ya neck now you freezin’ in da morgue...
    Hinder you towards a comeback against the lyrical lords...
    In this Folkloric sort of short story telling I sincerely implore...
    War torn classical hits with a mix of piano comin hardcore...
    Historically yours truly is the best at this metaphorical sport...
    Karnivourouz Warlordz... comin str8 horrorcore...
    Witta pinch of Protégé and Gore...
    What more may I implore.... Need I say much more...
    Like Jehovah’s witness knockin at ya front door...
    We’ve come to bring justice to the court...
    Hit the floor before the 4-4 pours clips on ya dead corpse...
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  2. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    Well, you can flow, no doubt, but I think that you need a harder beat for these lyrics cause the beat seemed too soft and you spit some harder lyrics...it jus woulda been betta wit a different beat, but not bad, the intermission and stuff was creative i liked it....overall not bad...keep at it...leave some feedback on my thread bro, peacee

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=912791
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  3. Toucan_Sam1

    Toucan_Sam1 aka 2can Shakur

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  4. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin beats tight ....
    gonna read the lyrics wit it
    the flows real smooth the punches are easy to hear though ...
    lyrics were tight ... I liked the first verse better than the second Nice drop
    return the fav

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=913630
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  5. Da Protégé

    Da Protégé The P.R.O.

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    *Returned favors so far... thanks guys... I hope my feed helps/encourages that i returned


    uppin...
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