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  1. DJ ECLIPSE

    DJ ECLIPSE BALLSINYAMOUF

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    tha blood of tha inoccent stains tha ground/
    from 16 bullets making terrfing sounds/
    it used to be me him just clownig around/
    till a clip put him 6 feet underground/
    cuz heads empty like shells in tha land of hell/
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Short? I guess that's really all you need to have said to get what you needed to say out, na'mean? Didn't take much to state what happened to your homeboy, family member, sibling, etc. Yet, I'm sure, they'll be continuing of this piece, if not, then.. Short, but true, hard times within worlds. That's society today, though, dawg. It's negative, but we have to maintain and live. My blessings..
    test
  3. DJ ECLIPSE

    DJ ECLIPSE BALLSINYAMOUF

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    thanks man
    test
  4. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    this was dope

    would like to see this being the last lines of a poem or something...but its def dope......keep doing ya thang
    test
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