" Dope " - Lost Faktion (BareKnuckle & Cutty)

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  1. illOmen

    illOmen I SuCk

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  2. DFVaInSDF

    DFVaInSDF I'm Back

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    I SEE YOU AIN'T SLEEPIN, DATS WHUTSUP, YOU AIN'T REPLIED TA MINEZ, BUT YOU'VE REPLIED TA QUITE A FEW, SO FROM RM. THANKS.

    NOW FA DA TRACK
    NEED TA GET DA VOCALS SOUNDIN BETTA, BUT DATS PROBABLY EQUIPMENT, AND SINCE MONEY DON'T GROW ON TREES, GOTTA USE WHUT'CHA GOT, BEEN THERE, STILL THERE.

    1ST VERSE CAME ON NICE AND FLOWED THROUGHOUT PRETTY MUCH, CAME ON STRONG, WIT MULTIS AND WHUTNOT, NO REAL COMPLAINT ABOUT DIS VERSE, IT WAS'NT ELECTRIFYIN BUT I'D LISTEN TO IT AGAIN.

    2ND VERSE WAS AIGHT TOO, COULDA BEEN BETTA AS FAR AS CONTENT THO, I DON'T KNO, IT JUS DID'NT CATCH MY ATTENTION, I THOUGHT IT WAS CUZ I WAS ON DA SHITTA, BUT I REWOUND IT, AND NOPE, IT DID'NT. NOT SO MUCH THAT IT WAS A BAD VERSE, JUS WAS'NT "WOW"

    3'RD VERSE WAS HMMM, WELL BK YA DID YA THING, CUTTY NEEDS TA WORK ON DA FOLLOW T HRU PART OF DA CYPHA, EVEN THO IT WAS'NT THE BEST, I FEEL IT SHOULD'VE BEEN LONGA, BUT MAYBE DA BEAT DID'NT GO DAT LONG, STILL, YOU COULDA ONLY PUT ONE HOOK AT DA END, OR NO HOOK AND LET IT RIDE OUT, BUT DA VERSE SHOULDA BEEN LONGA

    KEEP MY EYE OUT FA YA'LL.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1018133
    KILL DA SLEEPAZ. I'M OUT. 1
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  3. EC THUNDA

    EC THUNDA THUNDArous Rookie

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    Feeling the beat. Just fix the mixing on the song, the beat was loud and the vocals could be turned up a little bit. I like the hook. The verses were aight, nothing special. Good nonetheless.

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  4. illOmen

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    thanks for the replies, checkin you back thunda
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  5. Ghost863boy

    Ghost863boy Original 863 Boy

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    Returnin feedback....

    This on some different ish.....not bad. The beat ain't really my style, but your flow sounds good on it. You got a flow somewhat like jay-z or something, sounds almost familiar in a way. Quality could be better, but I know how it is, takes a while to get your quality up if your recording at home.

    The hook seems like it belongs in another genre of music, not really rap, but like I said, the whole track sounds like it's on a diff. vibe.

    Overall, good drop, just getcha quality up a lil and you'll be there...
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  6. dynamo414

    dynamo414 New Member

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    loved the beat.....who´s that...sounds like an atmosphere instrumental. actually the whole song sounds like atmosphere and thats not really a good thing for me....but still pretty nice
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  7. illOmen

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    pharoahe monch beat
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  8. Rasp

    Rasp D-Tai-Bai Records

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  9. illOmen

    illOmen I SuCk

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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  10. -rOCz-

    -rOCz- soundclick/rocz

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    Whoo, this is hot man, I'm feeling this... vocals sound type low, could be turned up a bit
    Hot track man, keep it up

    Peace
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  11. Madd'Aliu$

    Madd'Aliu$ Latin Girlz Luv Me

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    ha rmemba tha beat

    yeah definately a good junt,quality coo,hook diff from normal hoox but dat makez dis junt so much better,i luv originality

    solid trak bro

    keep wit it

    wanna peep a depressed type feel junt,then peep have nuthin,wanna peep a more energetic junt then peep madd ayez bakk

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1018158
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  12. OneSinXIII

    OneSinXIII I Am, What Comes Next

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    peepin... the beat is a little odd, but im feelin it pretty good, lyrics is nice, delivery is alright, the hook sounds good not that orginal though, fpr some reason kats now adays cant come up with any good hooks, oh well, but this track is smooth, very mellow, something you could ride thru my city kinda early evening when you know the suns about to go down and just look around in slow motion with sun glasses on just cruisin lol nice drop kid
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  13. Ex Cal

    Ex Cal 『Undisputed』

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    *Peepin now* - Beats coo, Flows on point, lyrics nice aswell...Overall this is a pretty diff shit but its still good, Nice job fam.
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  14. huckle buck

    huckle buck New Member

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    beats alright

    lyrics are aight, flow is good.

    decent track over all
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  15. illOmen

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    thanks for the feed
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