"Dont Take Me Lightly"

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Phene, Aug 20, 2005.

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  1. Rogue-Reiser

    Rogue-Reiser New Member

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    not bad phene, great delivery, beat is tight... i dont mind the hook could be better but not bad verses were tight
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  2. Fernelity

    Fernelity Active Member

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    You prick Phene, making a vocal tag for Clockwork and shit... I offered to and you beat me to it, JUST BARELY TOO!

    Dope track though
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  3. Phene

    Phene High Off Life, LLC.

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    ^LoL I did that tag like a month ago. Didn't even know he put it up.
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  4. Young Marc

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    ay this joint was hot phene

    the hook was on some different ish haha

    the bathtub line was clever as well as the diet plan line

    keep it up man and lemme know when we got next drops
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  5. Young Marc

    Young Marc Skrilla757

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    ay the remix of this joint is crack fam
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  6. S. Gatsby

    S. Gatsby Who Da Fuck Axed U?

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    I love this beat.

    Qual. is clear, nice .. Content is nice as always .. "Bad teeth" .. The flow is dangerous, as well as the delivery .. Mic presence is felt .. I'm really digging the chorus .. "Bath time" .. This a nice lil joint fam .. We never got in that collab, we need to make that happen .. "Scratch and sniff" .. "Get it mixed" .. "Diet plan" .. This is DL worthy .. Keep it up fam

    Return Love
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=921044
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  7. Phene

    Phene High Off Life, LLC.

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    thx ya'll.
    marc...we got next should be all pressed up in about 2 weeks or so.
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  8. Phene

    Phene High Off Life, LLC.

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    To the Tizzop
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  9. exothermic

    exothermic Well-Known Member

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    but yeh the original is better than the remix mostly cuz of the beat but yeh.... qualitys nice what equipment u using? the volume isnt mixed perfectly or nuthing but the sound qualitys nice.... flows nice rhyme scheme cool... voice is nice... deliverys hot n swag is crazy... lyrically not ur best track but still above most artiste ... yet alone the audasity to prepare to lolol that was hot n ur swag n delivery wid it... yeh but like i said u sux at chorus's n dont take that as hate cuz i always speak the truth n is honest with every statement i make ur a nice artiste n ide luv to see u on tv n signed to a major but u gota step ur chorus game up first simple n plain...
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  10. Betty*Beretta

    Betty*Beretta New Member

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    Beat is FIRE!!!

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    Flow is nice, riding the beat nice.."grab mo plaques than a person wit bad teeth"..<---lol. You coming with some crazy punches, real witty spits. I'm feeling you style, you got a real smoothy delivery. Tracks definitely radio friendly. Loving it

    Hook: nice shit, real catchy.

    Overall this is a nice track.

    If you have some time, could you check this out for me. Let me know what you think.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=921729

    http://www.soundclick.com/artist/9/bettybaretta_music.htm
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  11. Slums

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  12. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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  13. Phene

    Phene High Off Life, LLC.

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    ahhhhhh good lookin out on all the replies....
    Preciate' the honesty....thas what its all about....
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  14. xGTx

    xGTx The Rock

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    pretty strait decent drop good vocab
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  15. Da Gambino

    Da Gambino Get At Me!!..

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    this shyt is nasty ya flow is crazy dope...lyrics are nice damnn meng we def gotta rip something togetha....Get at me...

    Aim=XxDa GambinoxX

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    ^Peep Fall bak or where you at....or peep my 106 & Park freestyle friday battle...Ez
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  16. Phene

    Phene High Off Life, LLC.

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    word I'll Holla.
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  17. Phene

    Phene High Off Life, LLC.

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    Streetwork!
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  18. Tech Tonic

    Tech Tonic The Enigma Of HipHop

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    listenin

    good beat

    uhmm lyrics were straight sounds like a mixtape jawn..uhmm my only suggestion is drop the beat on sum of your punches it adds a dramatic effect that helps people get it..and flow was good, the hook sounds almost like freeway i like that shit though..good jawn
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  19. Phene

    Phene High Off Life, LLC.

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    Rehabilitation
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