done with you

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by allnakey, Jun 9, 2003.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

    Joined:
    Mar 30, 2003
    Messages:
    2,940
    second peice (check it)

    DONE WITH YOU

    i am the one you desire
    the object of your fire
    but times change and so do people
    you never knew that your flame would be come so lethal

    you drew me away and now you want me back
    its to late for a talk cause im still walking away ,
    walking away from the pain and memories you gave to me ,
    the time i wasted and put in to us,

    you selfish bitch im done im through ,
    im through pretending
    to be in love with you.

    now you can suffer for what you cant have
    and just cause you feel something doesnt mean it is there
    love has escaped you it has escaped us
    i guess im the only one that is able to realize this
    test
  2. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

    Joined:
    Mar 30, 2003
    Messages:
    2,940
    test
  3. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

    Joined:
    Mar 30, 2003
    Messages:
    2,940
    ^^^^
    uP THaT BiTCh NIggIE
    test
  4. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

    Joined:
    May 25, 2003
    Messages:
    869
    I don't know why people are sleeping on you, but I guess try responding to more and dropping feed. -- Anyway, nice piece you got here, usual heartbreak type poetry that we've been witnessing a lot around RM lately. Nice emotion with the lines that you wrote down, such as..

    "you selfish bitch im done im through ,
    im through pretending
    to be in love with you."


    Nice way of ending it with her within your words, complete closure basically. Nice drop here, family. My blessings..
    test
  5. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

    Joined:
    Mar 30, 2003
    Messages:
    2,940
    nice looking out

    i GOT much love for ya
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)