DoMiNATRiX - Feat. Ray Lanette (drop reply links)

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  1. .The omen.

    .The omen. Member

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    a new track we whipped up over the weekend, lemme know what y'all think of it. ray lanette on the hook omen on the verses.

    https://soundcloud.com/omen-redzone/dominatrix-feat-ray-lanette

    Lyrics :

    Hook:
    why you doin things you aint supposed to
    im waiting over here so I can fuk you
    dominate me baby make me want you
    you got me sweatin everytime you com through (that's how you do, That's how I do)

    verse 1
    watch me work the whip like im a dominatrix
    gotcho mamma naked ridin in my Honda racin
    new world order in obamas nation
    illuminati makin sure the masses walk the matrix
    uh, ive come for the crown im turnin it up you dumbin it down
    purp in the dutch, coffin like I be under the ground
    u just a tuna swimmin with the big kahoona
    its not a rumor, I have ya wifey wipe me with the loofa
    she call my one eyes monster slick rick the rula!
    ricky bobby baby check ya engine get a tune up
    uh, back to ballin like im magic Johnson
    I go hard, shatter glass shaq attackin on em
    you play the bench spectate how I be wreckin players
    neck brace em, cross n fake em shake em makin every lay up
    haters, when you a great you best expect some
    cept umm I beat em like a red headed step son

    Hook

    verse 2

    my shorty got doe eyes, foxy gotta cameltoe
    we both animals im slammin beaver till her dam explode
    I swam the roads, walked the sky, sat in space justa talk to god
    landed safe comin back from mars justa grab that waist n carress er bod

    Ray Lanette: beat that pussy up baby
    lemme know that your the one that pays me
    work it n twerk it, make me hum
    tell me that your the one

    Hook.
    test
  2. NTfrody

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    The highs need to come up a lot, can't even hear the chorus but good flow and I've never heard this beat before but I figure it's an MMG track? Needs work to reach its potential.
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  3. strykeout

    strykeout Yamil167.com/beats

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    yea vocals on hook were a tad low but overall i enjoyed the track! keep pusshing bro
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  4. .The omen.

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    Thanks, I engineered the track and it was sounding balanced on the 4 different speaker systems I tested with, the Adlibs on the hook are Spose to b faint I dunno if that's wat ur talkin about or if u mean the highs need to b brought up in the eq process but ima call this one done n keep movin on makin more music, I could spend a year getting a track mastered but I'd rather release tracks consistently
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  5. NTfrody

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    Quality > Quantity
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  6. .The omen.

    .The omen. Member

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    Tru that in some cases bro I agree but the more music ur making the more u explore the better u get and u can build a faster fan base, I would care more about my quality if it were to b on an album plus my protools is malfunctioning so I'm usin the ol cool edit without the plug ins, I'm makin it work with the bare minimum right now
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  7. Mr.Crimson

    Mr.Crimson New Member

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    Yea the highs need to be turned up...sounds muddy and yea you can make more music but you shouldn't release suttin that ain't top notch esp if you tryna build a fan base....they ain't ya fans cuz you gonna be hot later...sheeet its cuz you got now...so don't put out half ass or low quality shyt out there for the masses...get ya shyt tight then bang em in the head with it...

    I like the hook...sounds smooth and you was straight on the verse...it's juss that it needs major eqing....but if everything was mastered on this beat the song would def knock...
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