does it matter? - drop links & i'll peep em all

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  1. mouth almighty

    mouth almighty Member

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  2. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    beat is smooth.. props on that.. contest is good.. but the rapping on not feeling at all.. sounds just like your talking.. a lot of stuff sounds rushed... the hook boring to me.. sounds like you arnt even on beat at times...

    not really feeling this other than the beat.. mixing it nice thou also

    thx for peeping my stuff
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  3. mouth almighty

    mouth almighty Member

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    it was supposed to be a laid back track homie.. still its all good.. i listened to it back & i dunno where i am off beat though, seems fine to me..mabye someone can point it out iono :\
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  4. JRite

    JRite !3th @p0$TLe

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    damn i can kindof hear a Nas / Jay-z collab on this...

    maaan, hear ya accent..
    need to touch up ya flow a little... i kind'f hear that you have it...
    just needs to be tweaked a bit...
    lyrics are good...

    damn... HOOK.. is very unique... i'm actually feelin' the hook dawg... seriously...
    sh!t's different.. but it ain't wack though... GOOD!

    "music is the only thing i wanted since the age of ten, and i do not have a backup plan"....

    damn, that was worth being quoted.. nice


    good track dawg... just polish up ya flow a bit... and you'll be in it to win it!
    lol


    holla at me...
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1019112
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  5. .:AC:.

    .:AC:. Smokes or Bananas

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    i love the shit that this song is about its dope i dig it
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  6. Sunny Black

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    beat is fire.
    i didnt expect the accent - where you from?
    this shit is nice money!
    i'm fuckin with this...
    i like your flow and style -


    whats your name on the ave?

    yo, i'm still listenin and this shit is flame!
    we should scheme on doin something...
    holla at me
    sunnyblackproductions@yahoo.com
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  8. BilCosbynDZK

    BilCosbynDZK www.myspace.com/techomega

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    ha i like the accent...damn this beat is serious yeah i could see like nas on this shit foreal hmmm quality is straight no complaints i see what u mean where u were aiming to make this a chill track no doubt u got a good vibe fam suprised heads arent catching onto it
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  9. BilCosbynDZK

    BilCosbynDZK www.myspace.com/techomega

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    EC THUNDA THUNDArous Rookie

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  11. MC AK

    MC AK New Member

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    beats tight feeling the accent, flows off sometimes but other than that pretty good track keep spittin
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  12. TWO M.C.S

    TWO M.C.S New Member

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    im diggin the beat - theres somethin about your delivery that feels a little strange on it - maybe its the way your voice is working with your flow, im not sure - its not bad, just a little awkward - production sounds good though, and the track is put together pretty well, think maybe a tad bit more emotion would have been good - i feel you on the laid back tip, just think this one could have been upped a sinch - overall, worth listenin too no doubt - sorry itt ook so long to get back @ ya, i gotta get online where i can and i only got a couple spots that got headphones and or speaks

    kep it movin homie
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  13. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    beat isnt bad, i like the samples...but im not digging the drums, their weak

    pretty dope flow, i dont know if its just your accent but some of your words are pronounced weird...rhyme schemes are dope...u seem pretty polished for the most part...i just really can't get into your accent...you probably hear that all of the time
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