Doctor Doom on amphetamines

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  1. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    The original micfiend with formidable rhymeschemes. I grew sick of the lime green I used to call home, now that shit is behind me. I'm fooling. Although a lot of truth is said in jest. I'm an opportunist letting stress off so you can second guess my rotten mood, but never question what I do. It begs acceptance. Solitudes an endless sentence to a monster who blends dependency with wanting to pen relentlessly what bothers you exponentially. I've not got a clue what the hell it means. I'm Doctor Doom on amphetamines. I lock my room and attempt to sleep hoping the sonic-booms in my head'll cease before I jump off this roof just to get some peace. I'm seldom seen, yet everpresent. Evergreen and efflorescent. Went from a never been to textual legend between the ages of seventeen and twentyseven.
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  2. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    swag bruh
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  3. MrFlux001

    MrFlux001 Member

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    Yes, just yes. Unbelievable tekkers.
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  4. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    That whole thing was pretty killer, that evergreen efflorescent was nice, excellent rhyme scheme, easy flow to catch, but I'd prefer to see it structured in a way that shows how you fit it on beatwise lines
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  5. Exxxxis

    Exxxxis .......................

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    I've said numerous times on several different boards that I'm not a fan of the paragraph format, it's pieces like this though that make me rethink that statement.Your flow is brilliant here, rhyme scheme is also just as equally dope...content as a whole is more than solid with some great word choices and multie usage, sick spit BM.

    ...Stay upwards.
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  6. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    Much respect fellas, appreciate the peepage as always!
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  7. kyothechemist

    kyothechemist New Member

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    I fuck with this pretty hard. Being on amphetamines now I can definitaly take this to my liking lol.

    Dig the rhymescheme and tone of it all.
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