dizthachozen1 presents: VERBAL KOMBAT- da 4 line banger!

Discussion in 'Cypher' started by dizthachozen1, Feb 7, 2007.

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  1. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    you're bein held accountable for not knowin how to count, fool/
    yous a fag-ass rapper that mounts dudes...cuz i'll trounce you/
    my punches'll pound you into the shake left from an ounce or two/
    my first instinct is to leave links in the trash...where we found you/

    aiight, but you were only half right:

    accountable/
    how-to-count-fool/
    mounts-dudes/
    trounce-you/
    punces'll-pound-you/
    ounce-or-two/
    found-you/
    ^^see that's called a multifaceted rhyme couplet. it's more than just the ending words that distinguish the rhyme scheme. the entirety of all 4 lines are built around this pattern. duh! what? you can't read AND comprehend simultaneously?
    eh, and you call yourself a lyricist. don't know the first thing about rhymin or mc-ing.
    now that that's outta the way...

    you all aboard the same train that's taken hiphop down tha drain/
    self proclaimed all-knowledgable brain n' gettin ground into a stain/
    you claim not to be lame, but refrain to bring ya A game/
    all that remains is your loss, our gain...role-reversal i'm abel slayin cain/

    you get it now you weak fuck!?!
    test
  2. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    Emcees acknowledge the flow, but they rarely seeking ya'lls/
    I got hot shit, some would call me ether draws/
    So keep yo paws off of the keyboard, and listen to me boy/
    Or you could end up with shells in you like a sea shore/

    Jus some tweakin shit...
    test
  3. EF

    EF Guest

    I'm the man with the flows as wild as an animal shows//
    That's sicker than Anna Nicole's decomposed vaginal hole//
    I'll rap til I blow, while noone gives you two looks//
    Because you couldn't drop a rhyme, jugglin Dr. Seuss books//
    test
  4. Knowshun1

    Knowshun1 Knowshun

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    my dark words make futile rivals' bleedin hearts burst,
    left dead on the web like a suicidal peter parker,
    I disfigure newbs and finish fools with dentist tools,
    my vintage moves make menace goons look miniscule,
    test
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